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leedgenUID: 160823

提纲：同意
个人对于创新的发展起到了决定性的作用，同时许多革新还是需要团队的努力才能获得真正的成功。
1．个人的enterprise和unique perception对innovation的巨大作用。历史上充斥着各种例子：爱迪生发明灯泡，Henry Ford的流水线等等。
2．大多数的革新发明还是需要团队的工作才能成功实现：比如Joseph W. Gauld的教育理念如果没有学校staff的配合工作就根本不能得到应用，也就没有任何实际意义了

3．事实上，个人和团队是完全可以共同努力来发明创造。在如今这个越来越专业的年代，一个人的有限的知识已经不足够或者很难带来真正的革新，团队的作用越来越大，已经受到越来越多人的注意。

I strongly assent to the opinion that an individual with the enterprise and unique perception plays a significant role in true innovation and most of the detailed work may be finished by a team. Therefore, to my mind, both individual’s enterprise and unique perception and teamwork are crucial to innovation.

To begin with, individual enterprise and unique perception is necessary and essential for true innovation, without which no novel ideas and no creative thoughts will come out. History is replete with individual innovation. Taking Henry Ford, who brought America to the nation of vehicle for example, he combined precision manufacturing, standardized and interchangeable parts and a continuous moving assembly line, which revolutionized automobile production by significantly reducing assembly time and lowering costs per vehicle. Henry Ford’s unique perception and innovational thoughts eventually leads to the efficient assembly line. This case is not rare actually, like Tomas Edison whose enterprise and persistence brought his successful invention of the first lamp bulb. Thus, I hold a strong opinion that personal unique perception and the enterprise plays a vital role in innovation.

Additionally, I deem that most of the detailed work may have to be worked out by a team, otherwise some innovational ideas or technologies turns out nothing to people so that innovation becomes useless and little value to the society. Careful observation tells me that nowadays projects are becoming more complex than before so that it must be worked out by teams. Consider Joseph W. Guald’s educational innovation, he selected five words to serve as the school’s guide, “Courage, integrity, leadership, curiosity and concern”. It is the Hyde School, which focuses on character development. This revolutionary approach to educating the whole child, coupled with the Hyde Schools' 40 years of experience, will enable individuals to develop character and discover a deeper purpose in their lives. However if the staff of the Hyde School were not to applied this great thoughts in their education, the idea will not have any practical effects therefore have little innovational effects to children’s education.

In reality, teamwork and individual enterprise can operate synergistically and complement each other to bring about innovation. All members of a team can spontaneously contribute ideas and their unique perception, which is called brainstorming, widely used in management for various problem-solving. Nowadays more and more enterprises and people have already realized the importance of teamwork when they also emphasize individual enterprise and unique perception.

On balance, not only the enterprise and unique perception of an individual is critical to innovation, but teamwork is also indispensable to innovation especially nowadays when it becomes difficult for an individual with limited knowledge and technology to bring huge innovation.

@amy@UID: 209096

嘻嘻，占座先

leedgenUID: 160823

amy的头像好可爱啊:)

@amy@UID: 209096

I strongly assent to the opinion that an individual with the enterprise and unique perception plays a significant role in true innovation and most of the detailed work may be finished by a team. Therefore [这里好像应该用个表示转折的词吧], to my mind, both individual’s enterprise and unique perception and teamwork are crucial to innovation.

To begin with, individual enterprise and unique perception is necessary and essential for true innovation, without which no novel ideas and no creative thoughts will come out. History is replete with individual innovation [innovations]. Taking Henry Ford, who brought America to the nation of vehicle for example, he combined precision [precise] manufacturing, standardized and interchangeable parts and a continuous moving assembly line, which revolutionized automobile production by significantly reducing assembly time and lowering costs per vehicle. Henry Ford’s unique perception and innovational thoughts eventually leads to the efficient assembly line. This case is not rare actually, like Tomas Edison whose enterprise and persistence brought his successful invention of the first lamp bulb. Thus, I hold a strong opinion that personal unique perception and the enterprise plays a vital role in innovation. [这段论述的真不错，学习ing]

Additionally, I deem that most of the detailed work may have to be worked out by a team, otherwise some innovational ideas or technologies turns out [这里是不是要加上to be] nothing to people so that innovation becomes useless and [加上has] little value to the society. Careful observation tells me that nowadays projects are becoming more complex than before so that it must be worked out by teams. Consider Joseph W. Guald’s educational innovation, he selected five words to serve as the school’s guide, “Courage, integrity, leadership, curiosity and concern”. It is the Hyde School, which focuses on character development. This revolutionary approach to educating the whole child, coupled with the Hyde Schools' 40 years of experience, will enable individuals to develop character and discover a deeper purpose in their lives. However if the staff of the Hyde School were [did] not to applied this great thoughts in their education, the idea will not have any practical effects therefore [therefore可以这么用的吗？你确定吗？呵呵，我不知道。是不是前面要加逗号，然后and therefore?] have little innovational effects to children’s education.

In reality, teamwork and individual enterprise can operate synergistically and complement each other to bring about innovation. All members of a team can spontaneously contribute ideas and their unique perception, which is called brainstorming, [逗号换成and] widely used in management for various problem-solving. Nowadays more and more enterprises and people have already realized the importance of teamwork when they also emphasize individual enterprise and unique perception. [这段好像单薄了些，最好举个例子，呵呵]

On balance, not only the enterprise and unique perception of an individual is critical to innovation, but teamwork is also indispensable to innovation especially nowadays when it becomes difficult for an individual with limited knowledge and technology to bring huge innovation.

[ 本帖最后由 @amy@ 于 2006-2-9 15:23 编辑 ]

@amy@UID: 209096

amy的头像好可爱啊:)

嘻嘻，你这个新头像也很PP啊~~

kito9695UID: 209685

我们组的头像都很卡通阿！~

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I strongly assent to the opinion that an individual with the enterprise and unique perception plays a significant role in true innovation and most of the detailed work may be finished by a team. Therefore, to my mind, both individual’s enterprise and unique perception and teamwork are crucial tofor innovation.

To begin with, individual enterprise and unique perception isare necessary and essential for true innovation, without which no novel ideas and no creative thoughts will would come out. History is replete with individual innovation. Taking Henry Ford, who brought America to the nation of vehicleon the wheel for example he combined precision manufacturing, standardized and interchangeable parts and a continuous moving assembly line, which revolutionized automobile production by significantly reducing assembly time and lowering costs per vehicle. Henry Ford’s unique perception and innovational thoughts eventually leads to the efficient assembly line. This case is not rare actually, like Tomas Edison whose enterprise and persistence brought his successful invention of the first lamp bulb. Thus, I hold a strong opinion that personal unique perception and the enterprise plays a vital role in innovation.

Additionally, I deem that most of the detailed work may have to be worked out by a team, otherwise some innovational ideas or technologies turns out nothing to people so that innovation becomes useless and little value to the society. Careful observation tells me that nowadays projects are becoming more complex than before so that it must be worked out by teams.连着两句用了so that是不是可以考虑换一下 Consider Joseph W. Guald’s educational innovation, he selected five words to serve as the school’s guide, “Courage, integrity, leadership, curiosity and concern”. It is the Hyde School, which focuses on character development. This revolutionary approach to educating the whole child, coupled with the Hyde Schools' 40 years of experience, will enable individuals to develop character and discover a deeper purpose in their lives. However if the staff of the Hyde School were not to applied this great thoughts in their education, the idea will wouldnot have any practical effects therefore have little innovational effects to children’s education.我总觉得这段是在例证J W G  的，关于staff的语言少了些

In reality, teamwork and individual enterprise can operate synergistically and complement each other to bring about innovation. All members of a team can spontaneously contribute ideas and their unique perception, which is called brainstorming, widely used in management for various problem-solving. Nowadays more and more enterprises and people have already realized the importance of teamwork when they also emphasize individual enterprise and unique perception. 这一段显得弱了一些

On balance, not only the enterprise and unique perception of an individual is critical to innovation, but teamwork is also indispensable to innovation especially nowadays when it becomes difficult for an individual with limited knowledge and technology to bring huge innovation.



谢谢你上次拍我的作文，回晚了，见谅。
文章在分析上的东西不够，去掉例子叙述性的语言，文章就显得有些空了。