issue159 【kito 2月9日临考作业】

kito9695UID: 209685

TOPIC：ISSUE 159  
ISSUE159. The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human mind.

WORDS：564         DATE：2006-2-9

Machines, created and controlled by human beings as tools, have long benefited humans in return. We finished many hard task and make things we can only imagine in the past into practice. When industry revolution first came with stream engine invented, life was greatly changed. Social productivity was so greatly enhanced that people began to step into civilization. More and more machines come in to humans' mind and finally put into reality. Refrigerators help keep food and drink for long; vehicles make travel speed up; more advancement machines as telescope, computer, telephone and even spaceship vary the once blank and bold society. These all shows that how clever and great human mind is. However, after intelligent machinery was born, we can't help of thinking about a question: Is this changes attribute to humans themselves or to machines, that is, which is superior, the human mind or machines? I strongly experience the benefit given by intelligent machines and concede its advancement, however, to my point of view, no matter how they develop, it will never substitute human mind. In other words, the human mind will always be superior to machines as I explain below.

On the one hand, machinery is created by human beings, and once only a idea in the humans' mind at its budding stage. Without humans' ideas, machines will never appear in the world. Take the born of plane for a striking example. Without the White brothers first great will to fly in the sky and their adventurous design, how can a machine with two wings be imagined? Thanks to the great intellect of our ancestors, now we can fly as a bird, run as a leopard, and even see as a bat. So in this point, the human mind, I think is superiors to machines.

On the other hand, machines can not work away from people. It needs orders, or some necessary operations by people. We need tell the machines what we want them to do, and then they can do as we told. A computer, for example, is much more intellectual in some aspects such as calculating compared to people, however, it can not work before we, human beings, put programs or data into them.  The much more intellect of computers is based on a premise that is the control or order of human beings. Thus, we could also conclude that machines are superior to human mind.

Moreover, human mind can judge, hold emotions rather than machineries without any thinking and subjective things. An intellectual mind can tell right or wrong, and may keep disobedient to their enemies or villains while machineries without subjective judgment can be easily utilized by others. Such machinery like guns and cannons to Hitter, a world criminal, is still common machines as to anyone else with little differences. Besides, our mind can be happy, sorrowful, angry, but machines never can. Hence, human mind will always superior to machines, for our mind are alive.

All in all, being tools, machinery plays a rather vital role in humans’ life. But it can never replace human mind, for it is created, developed, ordered and operated all by human mind no matter how it become intellectual. In other words, human mind will always be superior to machines and with this superior human mind, we also look forward to a more flourish prospect and an even greater advance of machines.

谢谢拍~

kito9695UID: 209685

自己顶一下，兄弟姐妹们帮我拍拍~~

@amy@UID: 209096

呵呵，我先占位

leedgenUID: 160823

哈哈，我也来看看，这篇我还没有写呢

最近互改有点乱，我也有好几篇没人改:( 大家最近压力都很大，没有时间吧

@amy@UID: 209096

Machines, created and controlled by human beings as tools, have long benefited humans in return. We finished many hard task [tasks] and make [make可以吗？我知道put是可以的] things we can only imagine in the past into practice. When industry revolution first came with stream engine invented, life was greatly changed. Social productivity was so greatly enhanced that people began to step into civilization. More and more machines come in to [into] humans' mind and finally put into reality. Refrigerators help keep food and drink for long; vehicles make travel speed up; more advancement [advanced] machines [加上such] as telescope, computer, telephone and even spaceship vary the once blank and bold society. These all shows [show] that how clever and great human mind is. However, after intelligent machinery was born, we can't help of thinking about a question: Is this changes attribute to humans themselves or to machines[这句有两个动词，有语病], that is, which is superior, the human mind or machines? I strongly experience the benefit given by intelligent machines and concede its advancement, however, to my point of view, no matter how they develop, it will never substitute human mind. In other words, the human mind will always be superior to machines as I explain below.

On the one hand, machinery is created by human beings, and once only a [an] idea in the humans' mind at its budding stage. Without humans' ideas, machines will never appear in the world. Take the born of plane for a striking example. Without the White brothers [brothers’] first great will to fly in the sky and their adventurous design, how can a machine with two wings be imagined? Thanks to the great intellect of our ancestors, now we can fly as a bird, run as a leopard, and even see as a bat. [恩…我不确定这样比喻是否恰当] So in this point, the human mind, I think is superiors to machines.

On the other hand, machines can not [cannot] work away from people. It needs orders, or some necessary operations by people. We need tell the machines what we want them to do, and then they can do as we told. A computer, for example, is much more intellectual in some aspects such as calculating compared to people, however, it can not work before we, human beings, put programs or data into them.  The much more intellect [much more intellect的表达是不是有点问题] of computers is based on a premise that is the control or order of human beings. Thus, we could also conclude that machines are superior to human mind.

Moreover, human mind can judge, hold emotions rather than machineries without any thinking and subjective things. An intellectual mind can tell right or wrong, and may keep disobedient to their enemies or villains while machineries without subjective judgment can be easily utilized by others. Such machinery like guns and cannons to Hitter, a world criminal, is still common machines as to anyone else with little differences. Besides, our mind can be happy, sorrowful, angry, but machines never can. Hence, human mind will always superior to machines, for our mind are alive.

All in all, being tools, machinery plays a rather vital role in humans’ life. But it can never replace human mind, for it is created, developed, ordered and operated all by human mind no matter how it become intellectual. In other words, human mind will always be superior to machines and with this superior human mind, [这里好像也有语法问题] we also look forward to a more flourish prospect and an even greater advance of machines.

嗯.... 小别这篇好象语法问题比较多，不少句子不通，有些表达好像也不太地道，呵呵，加油

leedgenUID: 160823

Machines, created and controlled by human beings as tools, have long benefited humans in return. We finished many hard task and make things we can only imagine in the past into practice. When industry revolution first came with stream engine invented, life was greatly changed. Social productivity was so greatly enhanced that people began to step into civilization. More and more machines come in to humans' mind and finally put into reality. Refrigerators help keep food and drink for long; vehicles make travel speed up; more advancement machines as telescope, computer, telephone and even spaceship vary the once blank and bold society. These all shows that how clever and great human mind is. However, after intelligent machinery was born, we can't help of [of去掉] thinking about a question: Is[Do] this changes attribute to humans themselves or to machines, that is, which is superior, the human mind or machines? I strongly experience the benefit given by intelligent machines and concede[concede用在这里不太合适，concede有勉强承认的意味在里面] its advancement, however, to my point of view, no matter how they develop, it will never substitute human mind. In other words, the human mind will always be superior to machines as I explain below. 这这这这个开篇怎么这么夸张呀，新写法？显得下面那些段好短呢

On the one hand, machinery is created by human beings, and once only a[an] idea in the humans' mind at its budding stage. Without humans' ideas, machines will never appear in the world. Take the born of plane for a striking example. Without the White brothers first great will to fly in the sky and their adventurous design, how can a machine with two wings be imagined? Thanks to the great intellect of our ancestors, now we can fly as a bird, run as a leopard, and even see[sail?] as a bat. 写得很形象，可是我不确定这么表达准不准确So in this point, the human mind, I think is superiors to machines.

On the other hand, machines can not work away from people. It needs orders, or some necessary operations by people. We need tell the machines what we want them to do, and then they can do as we told. A computer, for example, is much more intellectual in some aspects such as calculating compared to people, however, it can not work before we, human beings, put programs or data into them.  The much more intellect of computers is based on a premise that is the control or order of human beings. Thus, we could also conclude that machines are superior to human mind.[最后一句是不是写错了，怎么成了机器优于人脑了？]

Moreover, human mind can judge, hold emotions rather than machineries without any thinking and subjective things. An intellectual mind can tell right or wrong, and may keep disobedient to their enemies or villains while machineries without subjective judgment can be easily utilized by others. Such machinery like guns and cannons to Hitter, a world criminal, is still common machines as to anyone else with little differences. Besides, our mind can be happy, sorrowful, angry, but machines never can. Hence, human mind will always superior to machines, for our mind are alive.

All in all, being tools, machinery plays a rather vital role in humans’ life. But it can never replace human mind, for it is created, developed, ordered and operated all by human mind no matter how it become intellectual[how intellectual it becomes]. In other words, human mind will always be superior to machines and with this superior human mind, we also look forward to a more flourish prospect and an even greater advance of machines.

论点很明确，条理也很清晰，不过有些语言不太地道啊，加油

kito9695UID: 209685

我写的也很费劲儿，想好久造出来的句子好多不地道，呜呜，jingjing阿，你的句子是怎么炼成的~~~！！