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jingjingtousUID: 2164820

TOPIC: ISSUE43 - "To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards."

( This composition has been revised once.)

提纲：有保留的赞同a leader should keep a high level of moral and ethical standards, yet not the highest
1 为什么要保持高的道德和伦理标准以及对一个成功的领导有什么帮助。
2 然而人性有污点，不可能要求每个领导者保持最高的道德和伦理。
3 一个成功的领导者还应该具备其它方面的品质。

Is it the truth that a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards in order to be an effective leader? I agree with the speaker with my reservation-to be succeed in one's field and achieve his or her ultimate goals, a leader should maintain a high level of morality and ethics, yet not the highest. To further illustrate my viewpoint, I insist that an effective leader should have some other important qualities.

To begin with, I turn my agreement to the statement on the foundation that a leader, no matter in politics or business, he/she should keep a high level of moral and ethical standards. For one thing, in the field of politics, a politician who possesses the precious quality would win the electorate and respect of his opponents. Consider Ronald Reagan-the previous American president, serve to the public with the great loyalty and honesty, which ultimately won him all American people's favors and credibility. In the contrast, another president of America-Nixon, who utilized the cheating method to acquire the maintaining of political power, finally forfeit his reputation and leadership. Thus, it is the superior merits characterized by high moral and ethical standard that guarantee an politician to obtain his/her political power and achieve his goal at last.

For another thing, the quality of high standards of morality and ethics could contributes the political or commercial leader to keep an ordinary heart, which, in other words, means he would not commit the corruption or not allow similar incidence to happen. It is the lesson of Enron that makes all the executives in the business world know that the cheating behaviors such as withdrawing information from the customers will bring the company the detrimental consequence, even a bankrupt. However, to the social-spiritual leaders, there is no denying that they should keep the highest morality and ethnics. Concerning Martin Luther King and Gandhi, without these treasured characters, they can not arouse the public aspirations for equality and freedom, and let alone to achieve their optimal political items. Therefore, the quality of high morality and ethics plays an essential role in the success of an effective leader in the politics, business field but when it comes to the social-spiritual realm, it requires the leaders to own the highest criterion of morality and ethics.

Nevertheless, the definition of a successful leader who is qualified of high morality and ethics cannot be applied equally to a moralist. As we known, humans, including the most effective and efficient leaders, have the inherent taints with their characters. We cannot expect them to be the perfect one as well as the moralist. For the supporting example one needs to look no further than Bill Clinton, though his private life has ever been disclosed by the mass media, no one would deny his successful leadership by restoring the depressed economy of America during his tenure regardless of his sex scandal which has even brought deleterious influence to his reputation. And we could find support from another effective leader in America-John Kennedy, who experienced the marital discretion, also proved his successful leadership by implementing many effective policies which benefits the public a lot. Thus, an effective leader is not equivalent to a moralist, he/she has some tiny human taints but these shortages of his/her characters cannot overwhelm his/her prominent leadership and significant contribution to both individuals and society as a whole.

In addition, we should shift our focus on some other qualities which have equal importance for a leader to succeed in his/her realm, for example, the insight and foresight, the enterprise and perseverance, the creativity and originality, and so forth. Understandably, it is the unique perception and foresight that lead young Bill Gates to discover the tremendously potential software market while IBM and Ipod were scrambling intensively for the hardware market, and it is the creativity and originality that conduct him to design the first computer system--MS-DOS and further erected the status of Microsoft in the austere competition of business world, and more importantly, it is the enterprise and persistence that contribute him to establish the Microsoft empire and made him become the richest person in the world. Therefore, only depending on a high level of morality and ethics, I am hard-pressed to imagine a public officer or a common person could become an effective leader.

To sum up, I concede the statement insofar as keeping a high morality and ethics is one of the elements for a person’ success in his/her field, however, except for the realm of social-spirit, we should not overemphasize the quality to the extent of the highest morality while underestimating other necessary qualities which are also indispensable for a would-be effective leader.

taotaoQUID: 2105710

Is it the truth that a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards in order to be an effective leader? I agree with the speaker with my reservation-to be succeed in one's field and achieve his or her ultimate goals, a leader should maintain a high level of morality and ethics, yet not the highest.（这一点抓抓住了关键） To further illustrate my viewpoint, I insist that an effective leader should have some other important qualities.（延展）
开头考虑得很全面
To begin with, I turn my agreement to the statement on the foundation that a leader, no matter in politics or business, he/she should keep a high level of moral and ethical standards. For one thing, in the field of politics, a politician who possesses the precious quality would win the electorate and respect of his opponents. Consider Ronald Reagan-the previous American president, serve to the public with the great loyalty and honesty, which ultimately won him all American people's favors and credibility. In the contrast, another president of America-Nixon, who utilized the cheating method to acquire the maintaining of political power, finally forfeit his reputation and leadership. Thus, it is the superior merits characterized by high moral and ethical standard that guarantee a politician to obtain his/her political power and achieve his goal at last.

For another thing, the quality of high standards of morality and ethics could contributes the political or commercial leader to keep an ordinary heart, which, in other words, means he would not commit the corruption or not allow similar incidence to happen. It is the lesson of Enron that makes all the executives in the business world know that the cheating behaviors such as withdrawing information from the customers will bring the company the detrimental consequence, even a bankrupt. However, to the social-spiritual leaders, there is no denying that they should keep the highest morality and ethnics. Concerning Martin Luther King and Gandhi, without these treasured characters, they can not arouse the public aspirations for equality and freedom, and let alone to achieve their optimal political items. Therefore, the quality of high morality and ethics plays an essential role in the success of an effective leader in the politics, business field but when it comes to the social-spiritual realm, it requires the leaders to own the highest criterion of morality and ethics.
没有说为什么LEADER IN POLITICALS AND BUSSINESS 不用KEEP THE HIGHEST？
可以把MORAL LEADER 另起一段，而这一段就着眼论述前两者应保持道德但不求最高的
Nevertheless, the definition of a successful leader who is qualified of high morality and ethics cannot be applied equally to a moralist. As we known, humans, including the most effective and efficient leaders, have the inherent taints with their characters. We cannot expect them to be the perfect one as well as the moralist. For the supporting example one needs to look no further than Bill Clinton, though his private life has ever been disclosed by the mass media, no one would deny his successful leadership by restoring the depressed economy of America during his tenure regardless of his sex scandal which has even brought deleterious influence to his reputation. And we could find support from another effective leader in America-John Kennedy, who experienced the marital discretion, also proved his successful leadership by implementing many effective policies which benefits the public a lot. Thus, an effective leader is not equivalent to a moralist, he/she has some tiny human taints but these shortages of his/her characters cannot overwhelm his/her prominent leadership and significant contribution to both individuals and society as a whole.
把这一段与上一段合并（不是合为一段），而是意群上相连，再把MORAL LEADER放在这段之后提一下，这样逻辑上要顺点吧
In addition, we should shift our focus on some other qualities which have equal importance for a leader to succeed in his/her realm, for example, the insight and foresight, the enterprise and perseverance, the creativity and originality, and so forth. Understandably, it is the unique perception and foresight that lead young Bill Gates to discover the tremendously potential software market while IBM and Ipod were scrambling intensively for the hardware market, and it is the creativity and originality that conduct him to design the first computer system--MS-DOS and further erected the status of Microsoft in the austere competition of business world, and more importantly, it is the enterprise and persistence that contribute him to establish the Microsoft empire and made him become the richest person in the world. Therefore, only depending on a high level of morality and ethics, I am hard-pressed to imagine a public officer or a common person could become an effective leader.

To sum up, I concede the statement insofar as keeping a high morality and ethics is one of the elements for a person’ success in his/her field, however, except for the realm of social-spirit, we should not overemphasize the quality to the extent of the highest morality while underestimating other necessary qualities which are also indispensable for a would-be effective leader.
结尾漂亮！
再把握一下详略，好像每个部分你花的力气都是一样的
一没有很突出重点，二是这个字数能在考场上写完不是件容易事吧
来改改我的，谢谢！！
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智恩UID: 2160717

who experienced the marital discretion,不明白discretion在这里是杀意思？我觉得举一个例子就可以，把那个例子说的清楚点，就是在多分析一点

原来a public official的理解还可以是business方面的，没想到，一直理解的是公务员，或是政府官员，呵呵， 怪不得我写得那么窄

kito9695UID: 209685

哇，jingjing，你的字数越来越厉害了~~~

kito9695UID: 209685

我觉得就只是政府官员的意思...:(:D讨论下~~斑斑来指点下撒~~~

lydia31358UID: 2155356

TOPIC: ISSUE43 - "To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards."

( This composition has been revised once.)

提纲：有保留的赞同a leader should keep a high level of moral and ethical standards, yet not the highest
1 为什么要保持高的道德和伦理标准以及对一个成功的领导有什么帮助。
2 然而人性有污点，不可能要求每个领导者保持最高的道德和伦理。
3 一个成功的领导者还应该具备其它方面的品质。

Is it the truth that a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards in order to be an effective leader? I agree with the speaker with my reservation-to be succeed (应该是successful吧）in one's field and achieve his or her ultimate goals, a leader should maintain a high level of morality and ethics, yet not the highest. To further illustrate my viewpoint, I insist that an effective leader should have some other important qualities.（觉得第一段最后一句感觉不是很顺，further用得不很准确:))

To begin with, I turn my agreement to the statement on the foundation that a leader, no matter in politics or business, he/she should keep a high level of moral and ethical standards. For one thing, in the field of politics, a politician who possesses the precious quality would win the electorate and respect of his opponents. Consider Ronald Reagan-the previous American president, serve to (serve是及物动词吧）the public with the great loyalty and honesty, which ultimately won him all American people's favors and credibility. In the contrast, another president of America-Nixon, who utilized the cheating method to acquire the maintaining of political power, finally forfeit （这个词是指被没收吧，应该用lost之类的）his reputation and leadership. Thus, it is the superior merits characterized by high moral and ethical standard that guarantee an politician to obtain his/her political power and achieve his goal at last.总体来说这段还不错:)

For another thing, the quality of high standards of morality and ethics could contributes the political or commercial leader to keep an ordinary heart（你是想说心理或心态吗？应该用psychology吧）, which, in other words, means he would not commit the corruption or not allow similar incidence to happen. It is the lesson of Enron that makes all the executives in the business world know that the cheating behaviors such as withdrawing information from the customers will bring the company the detrimental consequence, even a bankrupt[/color](bankruptcy). However, to the social-spiritual leaders, there is no denying that they should keep the highest morality and ethnics. Concerning Martin Luther King and Gandhi, without these treasured characters, they can not arouse the public aspirations for equality and freedom, and let alone to achieve their optimal political items. Therefore, the quality of high morality and ethics plays an essential role in the success of an effective leader in the politics, business field but when it comes to the social-spiritual realm, it requires the leaders to own the highest criterion of morality and ethics.(语法错误有点多奥，举例不错）

Nevertheless, the definition of a successful leader who is qualified of high morality and ethics cannot be applied equally to a moralist. As we known, humans, including the most effective and efficient leaders, have the inherent taints with their characters. We cannot expect them to be the perfect one as well as the moralist. For the supporting example one needs to look no further than Bill Clinton, though his private life has ever been disclosed by the mass media, no one would deny his successful leadership by restoring the depressed economy of America during his tenure regardless of his sex scandal which has even brought deleterious influence to his reputation. And we could find support from another effective leader in America-John Kennedy, who experienced the marital discretion, also proved his successful leadership by implementing many effective policies which benefits the public a lot. Thus, an effective leader is not equivalent to a moralist, he/she has some tiny human taints [/color]（这句说得太绝对了）but these shortages of his/her characters cannot overwhelm （换成outweigh更好吧）his/her prominent leadership and significant contribution to both individuals and society as a whole.

In addition, we should shift our focus on some other qualities which have equal importance for a leader to succeed in his/her realm, for example, the insight and foresight, the enterprise and perseverance, the creativity and originality, and so forth. Understandably, it is the unique perception and foresight that lead young Bill Gates to discover the tremendously potential software market while IBM and Ipod were scrambling intensively for the hardware market, and it is the creativity and originality that conduct him to design the first computer system--MS-DOS and further erected the status of Microsoft in the austere competition of business world, and more importantly, it is the enterprise and persistence that contribute him to establish the Microsoft empire and made him become the richest person in the world. Therefore, only depending on a high level of morality and ethics, I am hard-pressed to imagine a public officer or a common person could become an effective leader.

To sum up, I concede the statement insofar as keeping a high morality and ethics is one of the elements for a person’ success in his/her field, however, except for the realm of social-spirit, we should not overemphasize the quality to the extent of the highest morality while underestimating other necessary qualities which are also indispensable for a would-be effective leader.
第二段和第三段可以合并，另外对例子的叙述足够，但自己的分析说理略显单薄，动词的使用挺丰富的；字数是不是有点太多了？再简练一些会更好的
请帮忙改改我的文章吧，限时写出来的总是不太好，谢谢啦～



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jingjingtousUID: 2164820

智恩的问题在我写这篇文章进行到一半的时候突然冒了出来，我一下思维就混乱了
我提纲里面确实写的都是关于政治的，但是写的时候突然觉得a public official 好像可以是其它领域，所以用了Bill Gates的例子，说实话，我也是一头污水
因为突然碰到这个问题，我没能限时成功:L  还请版主和其它牛人请教才是！

virginia730UID: 208873

挖卡卡....
jingjing滴人气好高~~~~

智恩UID: 2160717

One who holds an office or a position, especially one who acts in a subordinate capacity for an institution such as a corporation or governmental agency.
公务员，职员：一个供职的人，尤指在如公司或政府机构的下属机构工作的人