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I live in a community which is in the center of the city .Resently I heard the news that a company wishes to build a large factory near the community. As soon as people who live in the community heard the information they began to discuss the advantage and the disadvantage of it .I my opinion , the benefits and the problem of it are listed as follow

Because of the difficult finding a job in the middle of the city,there are some unemployee in our community. If a new factory is built ,the advantage is not only can give these people regular salaries ,but also can further enrich the local community so that it would become safer and more blance

However, a new factory can also bring some deverse things such as pollutions. The most serious pollution that can be see by every one is the air pollution.whenever you go whatever you do, you must breath . similarly, the reason is also usable when we consider that there are some old people who need more freash air in the community.the smog must be dangerous to their health.

In additon to above-things, another negative effect that deserve some words here. Such as noise . To a factory ,machines are required .When they are working ,there must be much noise that would disturb people's regular life . For examples ,sleeping in the afternoon or Doing writing work.

In a word ,a new factory will bring both advantages and disadvantages .Since our community is in the center of the city ,I think the disadvantages outwigh the advantages.

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