Ares战队第一次作业 提纲Issue130

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提纲Issue130
开头：Children are our future. We hope they can bring about a better society. The socialization of the children is an indispensable part of the education, but the claim that how the children socialized today determines the destiny of society is specious and extreme, as I see it. In addition, I don't agree that we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society.

第一段: 孩子有必要一定程度的社会化
I agree in sofaras that the socialization is important to some extent.
1. Human is social animal. The children must primarily know the society before they enter the society. We should offer them some socialized education and social practice.
2. Children must learn to cooperate with others, be tolerant and helpful, and have their own seemly principles when they are affiliating with others.

第二段: 社会化不是决定一个人是否能为社会做贡献的必然因素
However, socialization is only one factor influence the extent to which a people can ultimately contribute to a better society. It's not the crucial condition to the destiny of         society. History offers us plenty of examples.
第三段：社会在不断往好的方向发展，证明我们知道如何培养能带来更好社会的孩子

结尾： In sum, the children are necessarily socialized to some extent, but the socialization is not the determination to the destiny of society. The factors which make a child to grow up to contribute the society involve the child’s individual condition, the family's and schools' influence and so on. Besides, the fact our society is getting civilized can prove that we have known how to educate children to bring a better society.

第二段的论据：Martin Luther King's contribution was primarily the result of his strong religious upbringing, which had more to do with parental influence than with socialization.
Theodore Roosevelt, whose social and physical development were both stunted by life-threatening physical infirmities during his childhood. In spite of his isolation, odd manner and aloofness throughout his early life, Roosevelt ascended to a social-activist presidency by means of his will to overcome physical infirmities, his voracious appetite for knowledge, and his raw intellect.

第三段的论据：Nowadays, our society becomes more democratic and safe, it respects individual rights and women's equality, it strengthens the cooperation among different coteries and districts, it has greater tolerance of different viewpoints and people who are different from us. In a word, the society has become better and it's developing to a better direction. Such facts can prove that we have been raise to help bring about a better society when we were children.