issue4 【加州阳光】小组第四次作业 jj7710，欢迎排砖

jj7710UID: 204058

No field can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study.

中文提纲：
赞成（主要以三个例子来论证）
1气象学的发展需要各种知识的综合作用。
2金融行业中新产品的推出也需要引入其他行业的知识。（不太懂得金融知识，有些牵强）
3医用检测仪器和治疗设备运用的广泛电子，光学知识等。

正文：

In the recent hundreds of years in human history, various fields have achieved great progress which is rightly due to knowledge of other field are brought in to solve the  problems that could not be resolved by that field of knowledge alone. Thus, I strongly agree to the statement above that no field can make huge advancement unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study. Examples form three different fields below will prove the statement practically.

As it is known to all, meteorology, through which we could predict the weather condition, has extended the time and scope of weather forecasting for several times, each of which is the result of introducing high-tech instruments. About one hundred years ago, the weather report can only be forecasted for just one day for the prediction could only be made by investigation by eyes. Several decades years later, after the fist manmade satellite being send to the space, satellite are used in a great number of fields, one of which is meteorology. Since then, the predicted time increased from just one day to about 24 hours, meanwhile the predicted scope increased from a minor area to a large area. Moreover, when the remoting technology appeared, it is applied by meteorologist soon. Hence, both the predicted time period and the predicted area scope are being greatly enhanced. Thereby, the weather report could forecast 48 hours and cover most of the main cities in our country.

Another example of such a field is finance, a field related to the daily purchasing for individual and national commercial power for a country. Designing personal financial product requires industrious worker and expertise knowledge. However, the real prosperity of the individual financial product merges after mathematic introduced to the field, with the product of different kinds of funds, cards. And the same situation appears in manipulating an immense amount of money, forecasting economic trend and maintaining a constant market.

Turn the sight to trifle things in our everyday life. Iatrology, normally everyone has to encounter, has gone through great development over recent decades. Numerous diseases which deprived hundreds of thousands of people's lives in the past could be cured as a result of modern technology and cross field corporation. Each time when a disease could not be cured by traditional way, several new methods will be tested, which require other experts from other fields. For instance, if a new virus appears, the iatrologist should make it clear that its structure, contentment, and character. All these actions need electric engineers'help for that they can provide them with the latest instrument. Gradually, a new discipline has merged, medical instrument, which combines medical and instrument making. As a matter of fact, the new field not only assists doctors to save more people from the torture of disease but also leading a new direction for the way to research disease.

In summary, the three examples I have proposed so far should profoundly prove that one field can not make progress solely, and without other fields' help, it will, in a large sense, remain at the same level.

benniUID: 2166321

In the recent hundreds of years in human history, various fields have achieved great progress which is rightly due to knowledge of other field(fields) are(和前面的谓语is重复) brought in to solve the problems that could not be resolved by that field of knowledge alone. Thus, I strongly agree to the statement above that no field can make huge advancement unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study. Examples form three different fields below will prove the statement practically.

As it is known to all, meteorology, through which we could predict the weather condition, has extended the time and scope of weather forecasting for several times,（extend the time表达得不太清楚,看了后面的例子才明白，不知道怎么改，换成“周期”——period可能好一点？） each of which is the result of introducing high-tech instruments. About one hundred years ago, the weather report can only be forecasted(forecast的宾语should be weather rather than “weather report”) for just one day for(for 只能引导名次成分，不能引导句子，如果觉得because 太强了，可以用since ) the prediction could only be made by investigation by eyes. Several decades years later, after the fist manmade satellite being send to the space, satellite（satellites） are used in a great number of fields, one of which is meteorology. Since then, the predicted time increased from just one day to about 24 hours(你是说one day<24 hours么？why?), meanwhile(meanwhile是副词，不能连接两个句子) the predicted scope increased（范围用extended比较好） from a minor area to a large area. Moreover, when the remoting technology appeared, it is（was,前后时态不一致） applied by meteorologist soon. Hence, both the predicted time period(晕…原来你也用period了…不确定period能否和time并列) and the predicted area scope are being greatly enhanced. Thereby, the weather report could forecast 48 hours and cover most of the main cities in our country.

Another example of such a field is finance, a field related to the daily purchasing for individual and national commercial power for(of) a country. Designing personal financial product requires industrious(这词不太合适，一般修饰体力劳动者，你可以直接说intellective或者proficient什么的，强调勤劳有点奇怪 ) worker and expertise knowledge. However, the real prosperity of the individual financial product merges after mathematic (is) introduced to the field, with the product of different kinds of funds, cards. And the same situation appears in manipulating an immense amount of money, forecasting economic trend and maintaining a constant market.

Turn the sight to trifle things in our everyday life. Iatrology, normally everyone has to encounter, has gone through great development over recent decades. Numerous diseases which deprived hundreds of thousands of people's lives in the past could be cured as a result of modern technology and cross field corporation（cooperation）. Each time when a disease could not be cured by traditional way, several new methods will be tested, which require other experts from other fields. For instance, if a new virus appears, the iatrologist should make it clear that its structure, contentment, and character.(make its structure, contentment and character clear, 用that的话后面应接句子) All these actions need electric engineers'help for that they can provide them with the latest instrument. Gradually, a new discipline has merged, medical instrument, which combines medical and instrument making. As a matter of fact, the new field not only assists doctors to save more people from the torture of disease but also leading（leads） a new direction for the way to research disease.

In summary, the three examples I have proposed so far should profoundly prove that one field can not make progress solely, and without other fields' help, it will, in a large sense, remain at the same level.


例子丰富，论证到位。

个人觉得金融的那部分并不牵强，只有一点需要注意，金融工具包括很多，但不包括fund & card, 可以是各色期货、证券（securities）和and so on

jj7710UID: 204058

forecast的宾语should be weather rather than “weather report”,没错，这是我的错。

for 只能引导名次成分，不能引导句子，如果觉得because 太强了，可以用since 。又受教了！

one day to about 24 hours(你是说one day<24 hours么？why?), 这里估计是我糊涂了，应该是48 hours，居然犯这种错误！

Meawhile，我一直以为是连词，看了benni的说明再查了字典，居然错了这么多年！改成 at the same time

industrious，这个问题，关键还是词汇不丰富。