issue5 【米国有米】寒假第一天作业

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TOPIC: ISSUE5 - "A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer."
WORDS: 500          TIME: 0:38:50          DATE: 2007-1-27

Education plays an important role in personal growth and development of society. A nation should require its student to study the same basic lessons to form a stable base, and then to learn some different knowledge to suit local development and personal interests.

A nation should require its students to learn the same national curriculum on the basic lessons. The students should have much basic knowledge to build a necessary base which can help them to get a achievement, concluding mathematics, verbal and even some natural common sense. Without these, a student can not learn more difficult field and even can not live in the world. Because the basic knowledge is always same in a period, a nation can form the same national curriculum about them. For example, language is the tool of intercommunion and express oneself. In a nation, there should be a national or official language which can be used in all the nation area. So all its students should learn this kind of language in order to make themselves to be understood whatever they go in the nation.

The same national curriculum on some subjects has another advantage that it can lead most students to a same level when they become a freshman. If the students have the same education until they enter college, they will have same study level so that college professors would have less difficulty on teaching. Professors can arrange a teach plan towards all their students regardless the different basic of the students coming from different areas. If students from different states are different in basic knowledge, professors should popularize the basic knowledge which is used in their own lessons. This must waste time and energy.

Admittedly, in some case, different parts of the nation can determine which academic courses to offer. This is focus on some special case. Some parts of the nations which are near by the ocean may have some lessons related with protection of ocean environment, which are not useful to a student inland at all. Also take language as an example. In some parts of the nation, people do not use the official language as a normal language every day. So in these parts, an oral lesson will be required in the school to practice the students' oral expression. But in other parts where people talk in the official language every day, the students will not need to have the oral lesson. Thus, considering with the local condition, some parts of the nation should allow schools to determine which academic courses to offer.

In sum, a nation should have its same basic lessons which can form a same level of knowledge before students enter college, which can help them have a good process in high education. Besides, some parts of nation can also determine some other useful lessons which can suit local characters. When national lessons and local complement combine together well, the students will become successful and the society will develop.

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issue5 【米国有米】寒假第一天作业

TOPIC: ISSUE5 - "A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer."
WORDS: 500          TIME: 0:38:50          DATE: 2007-1-27

Education plays an important role in personal growth and development of society. A nation should require its student to study the same basic lessons to form a stable base, and then to learn some different knowledge to suit local development and personal interests.

A nation should require its students to learn the same national curriculum on the basic lessons. The students should have much basic knowledge to build a necessary base which can help them to get a achievement（这句没有看懂）, concluding mathematics, verbal and even some natural common sense. Without these, a student can not learn more difficult field and even can not live in the world. Because the basic knowledge is always (the)same in a period, a nation can form the same national curriculum about them. For example, language is the tool of intercommunion and express(-ing) oneself. In a nation, there should be a national or official language which can be used in all the nation area. So all its students should learn this kind of language in order to make themselves to be (去掉to be)understood whatever(wherever) they go in the nation.

The same national curriculum on some subjects has another advantage that it can lead most students to a same level when they become a freshman. If the students have the same education until they enter college, they will have same study level so that college professors would have less difficulty on teaching. Professors can arrange a teach plan towards all their students regardless(of) the different basic of the students coming from different areas.(their differences in backgrounds) If students from different states are different in basic knowledge, professors should popularize the basic knowledge which is used in their own lessons. This must waste time and energy.这个理由很好

Admittedly(是不是可以去查一下这个词的用法呢？我觉得这个admittedly用的不是很合适，这个词好象是用于以退为进，但是这段是你支持的观点。), in some case, different parts of the nation can determine which academic courses to offer. This is focus on some special case. Some parts of the nations which are near by the ocean may have some lessons related with protection of ocean environment, which are not useful to a student inland at all. Also take language as an example. In some parts of the nation, people do not use the official language as a normal language every day. So in these parts, an oral lesson will be required in the school to practice the students' oral expression. But in other parts where people talk in the official language every day, the students will not need to have the oral lesson. Thus, considering with the local condition, some parts of the nation should allow schools to determine which academic courses to offer.例子举得很有道理

In sum, a nation should have its same basic lessons which can form a same level of knowledge before students enter college, which can help them have a good process in high education. Besides, some parts of nation can also determine some other useful lessons which can suit local characters. When national lessons and local complement combine together well, the students will become successful and the society will develop.

细小的语法错误很多哦，要注意哦，会影响得分的