Issue 51<Chasing For "6" Score 小组第一次作业>

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Issue 51<Chasing For "6" Score 小组第一次作业>

Issue 51
Education will be truly effective when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student

提纲

1．通过普通的教育可以使得学生了解他们的兴趣爱好，从而再选择他们感兴趣的方面。
2．会造成浪费,不利于社会分工
3．会为教育造成很多不便
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There is no denying the fact that education problem has been a hotly debated       topic around the world. When the education will be effective?Many people believe that only when education is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student it will be effective. But others, however, hold the            opposite view. They claim that we need extensive education, we need to be a      general person.I think that both sides have something right,but in the changeable world a general person always more successful than the specific one. So that I  believe extensive education is much more effective than the specifically designed     education.

Many reasons account for this topic but the following are the most important    ones to support my opinion. First public education can provide a wide view to    the students.Depend on that students can choose their interest jobs.Specifically designed educations for young students are not suitable. For that they are too  young to consider  exactly what they are interested in, extensive education can provide them a large number of knowledge that they can slowly realize which     field of subjects they are fond of. For example ……(不知道什么例子可以证明了……)

Secondly, specific education may cause the waste of time and money.we do notneed too many students who are educated in the same subject,specific            designed education may cause this problem. Take China for example, nowadays more and more students are interested in some hotly subjects such as law       economic journalism etc. But actually, we don not need so many employees on  these fields. A great quantity of students who were educated on these fields     could not find a satisfied job.Because of that they need to study other             knowledge to find the job. It is a waste of time and money, that education can  not be considered as effective. And some other subjects such as geology        archeology always have little people interested in. But we do need geologist and archeologist to help us knowing the world. So that I think specific education will destroy the balance on the social division of labor.

Last but not the least, it is impossible to satisfy every student’s requirements.  We have more than 600million people in the world, everyone has their own          interests not only one but also two or three, That means if we want to meet the individual needs and interests of      each student we need at least 600million     teachers who are specific on the different fields. This opinion may have a little  absolutely, but specific educations do bring lots of chaos.

In conclusion, I disagree about that specific designed education will be more        effective.  The analysis has been provided adequately above. The effective           education must be suitable for  everyone not only for specific designed.


我还是撞死算了…………写的小学生水平……估计错误连篇…………2天才憋成这样…………怎么办啊啊啊啊………………还没上xdf,作文要怎么写完全不会…………
p.s 我很不会语法……相当不会……

[ 本帖最后由 emilyyn 于 2007-2-1 01:29 编辑 ]

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lz别着急啊，第一篇写出来已经是质的飞跃拉！
一起加油啊！

halloween31UID: 2291335

There is no denying the fact that education problem has been a hotly debated       topic around the world.When (个人认为用How)the education will be effective? Many people believe that only when education is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student it will be effective. But others, however, hold the            opposite view. They claim that we need extensive education, we need to be a      general person. I think that both sides have something right, but in the changeable world a general person always more successful than the specific one. So that I  believe extensive education is much more effective than the specifically designed     education.

Many reasons account for this topic but the following are the most important    ones to support my opinion. First public education can provide a wide view to    the students. Depend(depending) on that students can choose their interest jobs(不对吧？). Specifically designed educations for young students are not suitable. For that they are too  young to consider  exactly what they are interested in(interest in), extensive education can provide them a large number of knowledge that they can slowly realize which     field of subjects they are fond of. For example……(不知道什么例子可以证明了……) 我也没想到什么好的例子：（

Secondly（前边是first,应该对应）, specific education may cause the waste of time and money. We do not need too many students who are educated in the same subject, specific            designed education may cause this problem. Take China for example(不知道可不可以这么写，没见过，as in China?), nowadays more and more students are interested in some hotly subjects such as law       economic journalism etc. But actually, we do not need so many employees on  these fields. A great quantity of students who were (are) educated on these fields     could not find a satisfied job. Because of that they need to study other  knowledge to find the job. It is a waste of time and money, that education can  not be considered as effective. And some other subjects such as geology        archeology always have little (less or a few) people interested in. But we do need geologist and archeologist to help us knowing the world. 例子蛮好 So that I think specific education will destroy the balance on the social division of labor（觉得很好）.

Last but not the least, it is impossible to satisfy every student’s requirements.  We have more than 600 million people in the world, everyone has their own          interests not only one but also two or three（有点怪）, That means if we want to meet the individual needs and interests of      each student we need at least 600million     teachers who are specific on the different fields.（许多人可能有相同的爱好，不一定要60亿老师那么多） This opinion may have （has）） a little  absolutely, but specific educations do bring (cause) lots of chaos.

In conclusion, I disagree about that specific designed education will be more (truly 用题目的truly比较好) effective.  The analysis has been provided adequately above. The effective           education must be suitable for  everyone not only for specific designed.

halloween31UID: 2291335

LZ写的不错啊
观点蛮好的
我写的比你还慢呢,放心,一起努力一定会有提高!:)
不过建议多用长句子