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[i习作temp] Issue212 [Chasing For "6" Score]第四次作业,求拍! [复制链接]

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发表于 2007-2-10 20:04:12 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
212"If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it is justifiable."
被多数人认可的,不违反法律,道德的worthy goal 是提倡为之奋斗的
而那些不正当的worthy goal 应该反对。
The speaker asserts that one have to take any means to accomplish his/her goal if it is worthy. I agree with the speaker insofar as that if the worthy goal is admitted by the public and have no harm to society, one should try his best to attain it, while one should abort the goal which is worthy just for himself but have lots of negative influence to others or conflict with the moral or ethical standards.

Undoubtedly, goal plays an absolutely necessary role in people’s life, the development of a country and even the advancement of human society. A person without goals is just like a bird without wings. However, a worthy goal I advocate here is more than a personal aim, and it’s a broad goal for benefits of more people and for the development of society. A good example was established by Madame Curie, who denoted her life for the science without fearing the danger of radioactive element or considering personal benefits. Meanwhile, the goal we are talking about must be reality or feasible. If it is an entirely unreal goal such as turning a rock into gold, no mater what means does a person taken cannot make this goal attained.

However, we have to emphasize that to attain one's own goal should never sacrifice other people's profits and break the laws. Take an extreme example. If a hospital regards earning a great amount of money as his goal, can it achieve its goal by selling its patients fake pill? Of course the method is not justifiable, what is more, it has broken the laws, and thus what it will attain is not the money but the punishment or imprisonment. Consequently, we can conclude that even if a goal is worthy for certain people, they still should take legal means to fulfill it.

Moreover, the means taken to attain a goal should also consider the moral or ethical standards. Although sometimes the means taken to attain a goal does not break the laws, it possibly does not conform to the moral or ethical standards, and then it is still not justifiable. For instance, some scientists try to clone human, though the goal may be worthy from the view of those scientists and some countries also do not forbid such study using law, but considering from ethics, the study should not be continued because it can bring unrespectable problems to the society.

To sum up, we encourage a person to accomplish his goal that is realistic by the legal means which are under the constriction of the moral and ethical standards. Meanwhile, we oppose the harmful goals and the unscrupulous means to achieve goals.
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212"If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it is justifiable."
被多数人认可的,不违反法律,道德的worthy goal 是提倡为之奋斗的
而那些不正当的worthy goal 应该反对。
The speaker asserts that one have to take any means to accomplish his/her goal if it is worthy. I agree with the speaker insofar as that if the worthy goal is admitted by the public and have no harm to society, one should try his best to attain it, while one should abort the goal which is worthy just for himself but have lots of negative influence to others or conflict with the moral or ethical standards.

Undoubtedly, goal plays an absolutely necessary role in people’s life, the development of a country and even the advancement of human society. A person without goals is just like a bird without wings. 好句子!However, a worthy goal I advocate here is more than a personal aim, and it’s a broad goal for benefits of more people and for the development of society. A good example was established by Madame Curie, who denoted her life for the science without fearing the danger of radioactive element or用and比较好吧 considering personal benefits. Meanwhile, the goal we are talking about must be reality realistic or feasible. If it is an entirely unreal goal such as turning a(delete) rock into gold, no mater what means does a person taken take, he cannot make this goal attained.

However, we have to emphasize that to attain one's own goal should never sacrifice other people's profits这个词表示利润把,别人的利益用interests把 and 用or把 break the(delete) laws. Take an extreme example. If a hospital regards earning a great amount of money as his its goal, can it achieve its goal by selling its patients fake pills? Of course the method action is not justifiable, what is more, it has broken the laws, and thus what it will attain is not the money but the punishment or imprisonment in the end. Consequently, we can conclude that even if a goal is worthy for certain people persons, they still should take legal means to fulfill it.

Moreover, the means taken to attain a goal should also consider the moral or ethical standards. Although sometimes the means taken to attain a goal does not break the laws, it possibly does not conform to the moral or ethical standards, and then it is still not justifiable. For instance, some scientists try to clone human beings, though the goal may be worthy from the view of those scientists and some countries also do not forbid such study using law, but considering from ethics, the study should not be continued because it can bring unrespectable problems to the society.

To sum up, we encourage a person to accomplish his goal that is realistic by the legal means which are under the constriction of the moral and ethical standards. Meanwhile, we oppose the harmful goals and the unscrupulous means to achieve类似于achieve,fulfil等词汇是具有褒义含义的,说明通过努力,成功达到某个目标,用在这部合适,我感觉,不如用中性的词,譬如realize goals.结尾显得有点太仓促,单调。

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