issue31 [0710G Superstar小组]第五次作业

xifenglie200UID: 2331174

ISSUE31
提纲：
1同意作者的观点
2对科研投资助于科学进步
3对科研投资有利于技术水平进步
4对科研投资鼓励人从事科研，提高人们的精神素养
5应该在可能的情况下，加强对科研的投入

   In the long humans’history,science is really a great thing which brings knowledge to us and fills us with power. In truth, the development of human is the process of scientific develpoment which force productivity going forth to drive various filed of our society such as politics,culture and so on to develop with no hault. Consequently, in order to propel the civilization to make progress ,we should increase the investment on scientific research.
   Increasing research investment contributes to scientific development yet sometimes the research may be controversial. In the fundamental branch of science, it is very complex and expensive for any individual to carry out. Thus they call for national or large corporations’invest in order to keep them being done unceasingly Think about chinese Man-in-space Flight Project in which 900 millions yuan was spent and hundreds of relative scientific colleges were in collabration. Though the cost was great , it really accelerate chinese spatial science and physics’s development. In some cases,there may be controversial voice within the process od scientific research,that is not a bad thing,whereas it made the academic more properous and benefited scientific development. Many famous achievement in scientific history aquire great improvement within quarreling. A point in case is that Enstein’s relativity.,with in a few years after its naissance, there were less advocates but more oppugnned, but during the quarelling about relativity in the following years not only itself but the quata,fluctuated mechanics were developing quickly.
   The most adavantage to pour cash into science research is obviously that it promote technical improvement which can bring more fortune to us by develping productivity. It was scientific great progress in 17th century, which was reprentative by Newton Galileo’s achivement and so on, that pave the theoretic base for following first industry revolution in 18th century. And it made productivity going up vastly. So did the second the third industry revolution,the former’s foundation was electronic science and the latter was computer science and biology and so forth.
Both made people enjoy more substantial and spiritual fortune than they used to.
Another very important effect of investment in scientific research is that it may increase income for the people who are engaged in scientific research thus encouraging more people to take part in such business, which is good to scientific development as well as people’s own qualification improving. Moreover, more scientific fruits will be capable to spring out as a result of more people’s effort and they in turn help new production come out and go into the market so that new economic benefit can be get, then we can pay more for scientific research. All that make a radical better circulation.
To sum up, investment in scientific research has so many advantages that we should go on forth with no doult,all the same,we should treat it not extremely which is to say we can’t spent all our money on it because there are also many other businesses waiting to do,we must find the counterbalance between them.

huaxinluoboUID: 2326780

In the long [humans’]history,science is really a great thing which brings knowledge to us and fills us with power. In truth, the development of human is the process of scientific develpoment which force productivity going forth to drive various filed of our society such as politics,culture and so on to develop with no hault. Consequently, in order to propel the civilization to make progress ,we should increase the investment on scientific research.
   Increasing research investment contributes to scientific development yet [although]sometimes the research may be controversial. In the fundamental branch of science, it is very complex and expensive for any individual to carry out. Thus they call for national or large corporations’invest in order to keep them being done unceasingly Think about chinese Man-in-space Flight Project in which 900 millions yuan was spent and hundreds of relative scientific colleges were in collabration. Though the cost was great , it really accelerate chinese spatial science and physics’s development. In some cases,there may be controversial voice within the process o scientific research,that is not a bad thing,whereas it made the academic more properous and benefited scientific development. Many famous achievement in scientific history aquire great improvement within quarreling. A point in case is that Enstein’s relativity.,with in a few years after its naissance, there were less advocates but more oppugnned, but during the quarelling about relativity in the following years not only itself but the quata,fluctuated mechanics were developing quickly.[题目里说的是茅盾的研究结果，这段没有提到阿]
   The most adavantage to[of] pour [pouring ]cash into science research is obviously that it promote technical improvement which can bring more fortune to us by develping productivity. It was scientific great progress in 17th century, which was representative by Newton Galileo’s achievement and so on, that pave the theoretic base for following first industry revolution in 18th century. And it made productivity going up vastly. So did the second the third industry revolution,the former’s foundation was electronic science and the latter was computer science and biology and so forth.[现代这样的例子很多啊，而且更有说服力]
Both made people enjoy more substantial and spiritual fortune than they used to.
Another very important effect of investment in scientific research is that it may increase income for the people who are engaged in scientific research thus encouraging more people to take part in such business, which is good to scientific development as well as people’s own qualification improving. [improvement]Moreover, more scientific fruits will be capable to spring out as a result of more people’s effort and they in turn help new production come out and go into the market so that new economic benefit can be get, then we can pay more for scientific research. All that make a radical better circulation.
To sum up, investment in scientific research has so many advantages that we should go on forth with no doult,all the same,we should treat it not extremely which is to say we can’t spent all our money on it because there are also many other businesses waiting to do,we must find the counterbalance between them.
[思路很明确，层次也很清晰。三段论证都是围绕题目前半段展开的，后半段没有讨论，这个有点不妥，没有看出对题目的理解来。这篇我还没写，也给不了有用的建议，惭愧惭愧。]