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7.30第十二次作业(请于7.302230之前交,7.3122:00前完成批改)写作:Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.

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All people have the opportunity to choose the place they live in. Some people like to stay a place all through their life, while I prefer to moving and searching a wonderful place for my living. And even in the different period of my life, I will stay different place according to my needs and the various surroundings.

During the different time of my life, I would move to some different place to live in. For example, when I am a student, I will live some department nearby my university or college, or even move to some other city to attend a better education. And searching to a good and meaningful job, a bigger city will become to be my choice, because there may be some more opportunities for job hunters. On the contrary, a small town could be a suitable place for me to spend my time after retiring and meets my need of quiet. Besides me, anyone who pays attention to his or her living condition will change different place to live in, since people could not stay in one place and have different requirement throughout all their life.

In addition, for me, I would like to taste some different culture and environment in my life, so I will be changing my place all the time. Every place has its own surrounding, custom, habits of living, or even language. I could feel the gentlest manners in England, while I may enjoy the sphere of freedom and individualism in United States. Passion in South Africa is attracting for me, in contrast, modest behavior is one of the customs alluring me. It is important to move there in order to feel the culture, as no other media can transmit culture as well as other information.

To sum up, moving in search of another place is valuable to promote my experience and could offer me a best place to live in as well. So I prefer it to staying in same place which is too tedious.

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Countryside or city to have vacation

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发表于 2007-8-1 11:52:07 |只看该作者
All people have the opportunity to choose the place they live in. Some people like to stay (in) a place all through their life, while I prefer to moving and searching a wonderful place for my living. And even in the different period of my life, I will stay different place according to my needs and the various surroundings.这段开头写的简介明了,但是时态应该是过去或是现在时吧,毕竟你已经经过了。During the different time of my life, I would move to some different place to live in(省去). For example, when I am a student, I will live some department nearby my university or college, or even move to some other city to attend a better education. And searching to a good and meaningful job, a bigger city will become to be my choice, because there may be some more opportunities for job hunters. On the contrary, a small town could be a suitable place for me to spend my time after retiring and meets my need of quiet. Besides me, anyone who pays attention to his or her living condition will change different place to live in, since people could not stay in one place and have different requirement throughout all their life.呆在一个地方也可以改变人的生活条件,比方说财富的积累,职位的升迁等等。这段逻辑不是很严密In addition, for me, I would like to taste some different culture and environment in my life, so I will be changing my place all the time. Every place has its own (specific)surrounding, custom, habits of living, or even language. I could feel the gentlest manners in England, while I may enjoy the sphere of freedom and individualism in United States. Passion in South Africa is attracting for me, in contrast, modest behavior is one of the customs alluring me. It is important to move there in order to feel the culture, as no other media can transmit culture as well as other information.例子翔实多样,不错的一段To sum up, moving in search of another place is valuable to promote my experience and could offer me a best place to live in as well. So I prefer it to staying in same place which is too tedious.总结段太段了吧,呵呵,是不是计时写的啊。

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