Issue51 AERO 小组作业

xuj401UID: 2434494

ISSUE51 "Education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student."



  Incresingly influenced by the proceeding of the recognisation of education,peaple assert that meeting the each student's desire could make education effective.In my point of view,I'm inclined to suport the idea that only meeting individual's needs could make the action of education useful.Neverthness,the needs and intrests of each student should be limited in a circle ,which admitted by the  rules(even laws) of the moralities,culture,politic of the whole society.

  To begin with,as we all know,it is the purpose of education to help everyone to be autonomous, ceative,inqiuring peaple who have the will and intelligece to make himself destiny.The education is for teachers tramitting the knownages and the skills to the students,and also the reaction for students to their teachers,so the relationship of the teacher and student is rather important.To master the inqiure of the individuals,could make the purpose of education more clear.A food case in point is that the teacher of Vinch,who is knowing the teaching methods,asking Vinch drawing lots of pictures of the eggs to training his basic attitude for drawing  for the reason of the eagarness of Vinch's drawing.Therefore,without any doubt,to reach the best effect of the education,from the eyes of completists,we should meet everone's desire.

  Admittedly,there is no denying a fact that meeting each student's need is impossible,even dangerous for the education.The intrests of students are diverse,including the reasonable desire such as the need for learning dancing,piano and drawing and so on,and unreasonale needs just like druging,smoking,sex and so on.Such these bad and unreasonable aspect could not be meeted just for simple reason that the civilization of the society could not bear it .

  Consequently,due to the analysing and reasons mentioned above,we may finally draw the conclusion that it is reasonable and effective for education to meet everyone's desire and interests.However,the needs and interests should be reasonable for our convention.
实在不好意思，我的WORD 文档没有自动检查错误的功能，可能有很低级的错误，请指正

beetle1986UID: 2431214

Incresingly （increasingly） influenced by the proceeding of the recognisation (recognition) of education, peaple (people) assert that meeting the each student's desire could make education effective. In my point of view, I'm inclined to suport (support) the idea that only meeting individual's needs could make the action of education useful. Neverthness,(nevertheless) the needs and intrests (interests) of each student should be limited in a circle ,which admitted by the  rules(even laws) of the moralities, culture, politic of the whole society.

  To begin with, as we all know(known), it is the purpose of education to help everyone to be autonomous, ceative,(creative) inqiuring (inquiring people) peaple who have the will and intelligece (intelligence) to make himself destiny. The education is for teachers tramitting the knownages (knowledge) and the skills to the students, and also the reaction for students to their teachers, so the relationship of the teacher and student is rather important. To master the inqiure (inquiring) of the individuals, could make the purpose of education more clear. A food case in point is that the teacher of Vinch,(达芬奇Vinci) who is knowing the teaching methods, asking Vinch drawing lots of pictures of the eggs to training his basic attitude for drawing  for the reason of the eagarness of Vinch's drawing. Therefore, without any doubt, to reach the best effect of the education, from the eyes of completists, we should meet everone's (everyone’s) desire.

  Admittedly, there is no denying a fact that meeting each student's need(这个地方要注意，meet每一个学生的需求和meet学生的每个需求有不同。后者的话every应放在need前面) is impossible, even dangerous for the education. The interests of students are diverse, including the reasonable desire such as the need for learning dancing, piano and drawing and so on, and unreasonale (unreasonable) needs just like druging,(drugging) smoking, sex and so on. Such these bad and unreasonable aspect could not be meeted (meet的过去时和过去分词都是met) just for simple reason that the civilization of the society could not bear it .

  Consequently, due to the analysing and reasons mentioned above, we may finally draw the conclusion that it is reasonable and effective for education to meet everyone's desire and interests. However, the needs and interests should be reasonable for our convention.

多看范文吧。你3月14号考，时间已经不多了。多看范文。

wizardzUID: 2268761

  Increasingly influenced by the proceeding of the reorganization of education, people assert that meeting the each student's desire could make education effective. In my point of view, I'm inclined to support the idea that by only meeting individual's needs could make the action of education useful. Nevertheless, the needs and interests of each student should be limited in a circle, which are admitted by the rules (even laws) of the moralities, culture, politic of the whole society.

  To begin with, as we all know, it is the purpose of education to help everyone to be autonomous, creative, inquiring people who have the will and intelligence to make himself/herself toward destiny. The education is for teachers For teachers, the task in education is transmitting the knowledge and the skills to the students, and also the reaction for students to their teachers 无谓语成分不能成为分句, 另起一句so the relationship of the teacher and student is rather important. To master the inqiure of the individuals, could make the purpose of education more clear. Another sentence structure flaw!A good case in point is that the teacher of Vinch,who is knowing the teaching methods, asking Vinch drawing lots of pictures of the eggs to training his basic attitude for drawing for the reason of the eagarness in order to excite his eagerness of Vinch's drawing.Therefore,without any doubt,to reach the best effect of the education,from the eyes of completists,we should meet everone's desire.

  Admittedly, there is no denying a fact that meeting each student's need is impossible, even dangerous for the education. The interests of students are diverse, including the reasonable desire such as the need for learning dancing,piano and drawing and so on,and unreasonale needs just like druging,smoking,sex and so on. 这些反面例子离education太远 Such these bad and unreasonable aspect could not be meeted just for simple reason that the civilization of the society could not bear it .

Consequently, due to the analysing analysis and reasons mentioned above,we may finally draw the conclusion that it is reasonable and effective for education to meet everyone's desire and interests. However, the needs and interests should be reasonable for our convention.

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