Issue153飞跃 dreams 第四次作业

wxtxxmUID: 2339833

Students should bring a certain skepticism to whatever they study. They should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively.
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As the author suppose that the students should not obey what the teachers teach,but have their own critical thinking before accept the knowledge. In my opinion, I agree with what the author holds generally. Through skeptical thinking,the students can understand the knowledge much better,and also can get their own ideas.

Actually, in the process of teaching,many students learn without any thinking ,they only accept the teachers' teaching passively，which will lead to detrimental result. Like in China, students always are taught that the teachers, books, and other authorities are right all the time,which lead students fail to have their own thinking.Such education make the students become more and more stupid an will have no achievements.Perhaps such teaching process can make the students master the knowledge well,but they fail to have any creativeness in it so that the students only can repeat what they learned but not creat their own.Without skepticism,students will not have great achievements because their thinking lack of their own thing. .


In other hands,holding skepticism in study can bring advantages to both students and teachers. As for the students,it can make the students to bring up the spirits of critical thinking.When it comes to the teachers ,students' questioning can give them an opportunity to consider what they teach to the students is right.We can see that most of the great scientific achivements are created by the means of critical thinking. For example,in the field of psychology,Freud,who is the father of psychoanalysis,his students----Jung and Adler----,through quesioning Freud's idea , sex is the origin of all the things in the world,finally made their own theories.Also we can see that Einstein creat his own theory by questioning Newton.From so many similar examples, we can see the importance of skepticism,people can work and study better with the skepticism.

Besides, students will become scholars,scientists,managers,politicians,and so on, also skepticsm is good to them.When they face one problem which they never faced,also their teachers never taught them,critical thinking can make them to solve it well. Skepticism can give them a new visual field to the problem,and make the problem solved finally.If one person can only accept teachers or books,he or she will not have great achievement..However,students should not only question in the study. When find that they are wrong, should take the right opinion quickly.Absolute quesioning can cause the students have extreme ideas.Students should keep a balance in the critical thinking and obey the regular rules.

In sum, I agree the author holds in process of learning,students should have skepticism before they accept the knowledge which the teachers give them.Through critical thinking,students can have a more active thinking and get greater achievements.

Marvelous_czUID: 2451875

As the author suppose that the students should not obey what the teachers teach,but have their own critical thinking before accept the knowledge. In my opinion, I agree with what the author holds generally. Through skeptical thinking,the students can understand the knowledge much better,and also can get their own ideas.

Actually, in the process of teaching,many students learn without any thinking ,they only accept the teachers' teaching passively，which will lead to detrimental result. （这话似乎不是很好，首先你说的是在教书的过程中，接下来说学生不思考的学习，有点偷换主语的感觉。而且这句里有两个主语了，语法上有问题，改下吧。）Like in China, students always are taught that the teachers, books, and other authorities are right all the time,which lead students fail to have their own thinking.Such education make the students become more and more stupid and will have no achievements.Perhaps such teaching process can make the students master the knowledge well,but they fail to have any creativeness in it so that the students only can repeat what they learned but not creat their own(这不是名词).Without skepticism,students will not have great achievements because their thinking lack of their own thing. .
恩，这段说的是怀疑是必要的，因为学生被动地学习会没有创造力。
总体意思表达的挺清楚的，就是思路上有些乱，因为前后感觉就是那么一个意思在不停地说而已。不是很生动。

In other hands,holding skepticism in study can bring advantages to both students and teachers. As for the students,it can make the students to bring up the spirits of critical thinking.When it comes to the teachers ,students' questioning can give them an opportunity to consider what they teach to the students is right.We can see that most of the great scientific achivements are created by the means of critical thinking. For example,in the field of psychology,Freud,who is the father of psychoanalysis,his students----Jung and Adler----,through quesioning Freud's idea , sex is the origin of all the things in the world,finally made their own theories.（意思我明白，可惜是个病句，一上来主语是Freud,突然偷换成 his students，有问题）Also we can see that Einstein creat his own theory by questioning Newton.（其实可以把经典力学和相对论点出来，毕竟是爱因斯坦质疑了经典力学）From so many similar examples, we can see the importance of skepticism,people can work and study better with the skepticism.
感觉这段的意思依然好似怀疑精神能够给我们带来新的东西，让我们懂得思考，如果是这样的话，似乎与第2段的意思有些重复吧？
不过这两个例子到是举的不错
Besides, students will become scholars,scientists,managers,politicians,and so on, also skepticsm is good to them.When they face one problem which they never faced,also their teachers never taught them,critical thinking can make them to solve it well. Skepticism can give them a new visual field to the problem,and make the problem solved finally.If one person can only accept teachers or books,he or she will not have great achievement..However,students should not only question in the study. When find that they are wrong, should take the right opinion quickly.Absolute quesioning can cause the students have extreme ideas.Students should keep a balance in the critical thinking and obey the regular rules.
这段一上来又开始说怀疑精神的好处了，而这些你在上面的两段已经讨论的十分清楚了。而本段末尾又说学生还是要平衡下怀疑精神和遵守规则。显得这段的重点不够突出，还不如就直接说要平衡呢~~~~

In sum, I agree the author holds in process of learning,students should have skepticism before they accept the knowledge which the teachers give them.Through critical thinking,students can have a more active thinking and get greater achievements.

总体来说，文章显得条理性并不是很好。
建议还是写前列下提纲，把你要写的东西都列下来。
或许会有所帮助。

[ 本帖最后由 Marvelous_cz 于 2008-2-15 21:53 编辑 ]