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TOPIC: ARGUMENT203 - The following appeared in a newspaper feature story.
"At the small, nonprofit hospital in the town of Saluda, the average length of a patient's stay is two days; at the large, for-profit hospital in the nearby city of Megaville, the average patient stay is six days. Also, the cure rate among patients in the Saluda hospital is about twice that of the Megaville hospital. The Saluda hospital has more employees per patient than the hospital in Megaville, and there are few complaints about service at the local hospital. Such data indicate that treatment in smaller, nonprofit hospitals is more economical and of better quality than treatment in larger, for-profit hospitals."
WORDS: 478 TIME: 00:55:06 DATE: 2008-7-26 11:38:44
In this argument, the speaker claims that treatment in smaller, nonprofit hospitals is more economical and of better quality than treatment in larger, for-profit hospital. In order to support his assertion, the speaker cites evidence about the comparison to the number of day of treatment, the cure rate, employees and complaints between the Hospital Saluda (S) and the Hospital Megabille (M). Close scrutiny of these comparisons, however, little of them can support his declaration.
On the first glance, the fact that the length of day patient stay in S Hospital is fewer than ones in Hospital M cannot bolster the assertion that Hospital S has better treatment quality and more economical. First, the fact that the S Hospital is a smaller hospital and located in a town must be noticed, and perhaps patients in Hospital S suffer less serious diseases that those in Hospital M, and they will stay fewer days in hospital. In addition, the speaker do not provide the expenditure in both hospital in detail, it is entirely possible that patient staying two days spend twice than those staying six days. If it is the case, the fact that the average length of a patient’s staying in Hospital S is shorter cannot demonstrate the assertion that smaller hospitals are better quality and more economical.
Secondly, nor the fact that the cure rate among patients in S hospital is about twice that of the M hospital accomplished bolster the declaration, for the patients' condition is a more important factor. Perhaps, the patients in S hospital suffer only cough, headache or stomach rather that those in M hospital suffering malignant tumor. Or perhaps, the most patients in M hospital are those who cannot be treatment in S hospital. Considering the possible above, the fact that the cure rate in S hospital is higher cannot persuaded me.
And finally, that the S hospital has more employees per patient is little indication that the patients can get better treatment quality. First, the need of these employees must be considered. Even if all these employees are needed, we must consider that whether the patient must pay more due to these employees. Likewise, the speaker refer to the fact that the S hospital has few complaints about service, yet the service quality is not only one standard to evaluate the whole quality. If the S hospital only has good service quality rather than treatment quality, the whole quality cannot be regarded as good. In short, the two facts cites by speaker cannot convince me. |
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