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Nowadays, the ability to cooperate is more imporant than past? A or DA（周三作业,如果写过可以写其它机井。）

Recent years, there are increasingly flourishing not only in the area of business but also in the sphere of scientific research and politics. Therefore, In order to investigate the roots of these fast developments, people become more and more concerning about the topic that whether cooperation at present is even more important than in past. Some people agree with the opinion that today's cooperation intensity outweigh past's, but other people take exception to this viewpoint. As far as I am concerned, Cooperation at now deepens into various domains and is more crucial than past.
                                                                                   
To begin with, When it comes to business area, in the past, companies were so small and tended to make their products by themselves, even workers in a same company weren't required to work together because their tools are so simple and just need them separately to control in the whole producing process. Take meat-processing factory for example, generally speaking, one worker was necessary to deal with a pig from killing to cutting into pieces. On the contrary, at present, almost every company is employing automatic assembly-line to process or product their commodities. In consequence, cooperating well is really a fundamental guarantee to a high-efficient production and employers are paying more attention to solidify workers' abilities in cooperation than ever before. Thus, if one company wants to be operating successful today, it needs to be better cooperated.


In the second place, science and technology are essential productivities in our social development, so many people put great efforts on developing technological innovation. Moreover, when we analyze the statue in the field of science, we could get the conclusion that the intersection among different subjects and between numerous research institutes and universities are more complex than one decade or even just a few years ago. Many enormous research projects are unimaginable to be finished by one institute or only several scientists. For instance, it is undeniable that Human Genome Project will not be accomplished by costing 13 years if it was undertook by one unit or a few researchers, for example, China Academy of science. In a word, the communication of scientists and institutes from different countries is intensified today.

Last but not least, with numerous organizations were established in our world, we can feel tighter unification of many countries than ever before. There is no any country can surviving independent from other nations because the cooperation between them places indispensable value on their economy, public health and policies. For example, only by cooperating, human can fight against HIV effectively on our earth, as we know, WHO's role in this issue become more obvious than before. Moreover, WHO is another good example around us, through setting up an economic unity-European Union's, European countries’ economy is so strong and could encounter fierce impact. On the other hand, governments have organized other cooperation recent years in other areas, such as technological exchange, anti-terrorism and cultural communication.

To sum up, a company, a science institute or a government could not so thriving unless it takes advantage of other individual's resources and advantages. In other words, due to more extensive and effective cooperation in our society, our current life is more colorful than past.

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Nowadays, the ability to cooperate is more imporant than past? A or DA（周三作业,如果写过可以写其它机井。）
Recent years, there are increasingly flourishing not only in the area of business but also in the sphere of scientific research and politics. Therefore, In order to investigate the roots of these fast developments, people become more and more concerning about the topic that whether cooperation at present is even more important than in past. Some people agree with the opinion that today's cooperation intensity outweigh[outweights] past's, but other people take exception to this viewpoint. As far as I am concerned, Cooperation at now deepens into various domains and is more crucial than past.
                                                                                 
To begin with, When it comes to business area, in the past, companies were so small and tended to make their products by themselves, even workers in a same company weren't required to work together because their tools are so simple and just need them separately to [separately] control in the whole producing process. Take meat-processing factory for example, generally speaking, one worker was necessary to deal with a pig from killing to cutting into pieces. On the contrary, at present, almost every company is employing automatic assembly-line to process or product their commodities. In consequence, cooperating well is really a fundamental guarantee to a high-efficient production and employers are paying more attention to solidify workers' abilities in cooperation than ever before. Thus, if one company wants to be operating successful today, it needs to be better cooperated.[后面的例子没反应出主题啊]

In the second place, science and technology are essential productivities in our social development, so many people put great efforts on developing technological innovation. Moreover, when we analyze the statue in the field of science, we could get the conclusion that the intersection among different subjects and between numerous research institutes and universities are more complex than one decade or even just a few years ago. Many enormous research projects are unimaginable to be finished by one institute or only several scientists. For instance, it is undeniable that Human Genome Project will not be accomplished by costing 13 years if it was undertook by one unit or a few researchers, for example, China Academy of science. In a word, the communication of scientists and institutes from different countries is intensified today.
Last but not least, with numerous organizations were established in our world, we can feel tighter unification of many countries than ever before. There is no any country can surviving independent from other nations because the cooperation between them places indispensable value on their economy, public health and policies. For example, only by cooperating, human can fight against HIV effectively on our earth, as we know, WHO's role in this issue become more obvious than before. Moreover, WHO is another good example around us, through setting up an economic unity-European Union's, European countries’ economy is so strong and could encounter fierce impact. On the other hand, governments have organized other cooperation recent years in other areas, such as technological exchange, anti-terrorism and cultural communication.

To sum up, a company, a science institute or a government could not so thriving unless it takes advantage of other individual's resources and advantages. In other words, due to more extensive and effective cooperation in our society, our current life is more colorful than past.
词汇太强大的 拜读!
表扬的话就不说了
2-3段论证在现如今合作的重要性,但是可能是由于缺乏对比,[现在的合作]>[过去的合作] 不明显.
PS:楼主上次写作多少分啊?