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university student should be required to take basic science classes even they are not part of the field of the study.



The chances of receiving education are considered the most fundamental right of human beings in the 21st century. Naturally, the argement about whether university student should be asked to take basic science classes even they are not part of the field of the study. Among those people who hold the idea that everybody do not necessary to take basic science consider that they should devote to their part of the field of the study in order to performance perfect. On the contray, I claim that for university student the requiring of taking basic science classes is beneficial because it will help them to acknowledge and work effectively.

First of all, science courses play an important role in the whole education, science seems have a great impact on human progress. Our society develops at a high speed, there is no denying that these result directly from the developing of our science. So if they dream of well using our knowledge ,it is essential to obtain basic science knowledge. For instance, my cousin JANE who is on the major of finance knows science well. Last week her company bought some machines from America which have no instractions, nobody except my cousin knowed how to use it. Thanks to her science knowledge, she helped her company saved amount of money and then obtained an opportunity to go abroad.

On the other hand, science class helps them work effectively. Supposed having no computer knowledge, how can they transmit information with each other easily? How can they get business and policy information as quickly as possible? Not only do science classes make us working effectively, but also give us a brighter future both in people's everyday life and working.

Of course, the advantage of studying their part of the field of the study only can not be ignored. Consitrating on their major classes, they can go deeper and go broader. Because of the of the time, they can get high mark with little effort and there is much time left to play.

Though the advantages that studying their major only leads to are considerable, they can not compete with the benifit that taking basic science class bring about. From what we discuss above, we can clearly draw the conclusion that university student should be required to take basic science class.

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university student should be required to take basic science classes even they are not part of the field of the study.

The chances of receiving education are considered the most fundamental right of human beings in the 21st century. Naturally, the argement about whether university student should be asked to take basic science classes even they are not part of the field of the study. Among those people who hold the idea that everybody do not necessary to take basic science consider that they should devote to their part of the field of the study in order to performance perfect 感觉应该是perform perfectly. On the contray, I claim that for university student the requiring of taking basic science classes is beneficial because it will help them to acknowledge?? and work effectively.|留学|签证|TOEFL|GREG+PsV)If6`3_(j

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First of all, science courses play an important role in the whole education, science seems have a great impact on human progress. Our society develops at a high speed, there is no denying that these result directly from the developing of our science. So if they dream of well using our knowledge ,it is essential to obtain basic science knowledge. For instance, my cousin JANE who is on the major of finance knows science well. Last week her company bought some machines from America which have no instractions, nobody except my cousin knowed how to use it. Thanks to her science knowledge, she helped her company saved amount of money and then obtained an opportunity to go abroad.-如何使用机器跟finance好像没有多大关系,即使她懂得不少科学知识,可以说她专业为机械,这样比较合理.

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On the other hand, science class helps them work effectively. Supposed having no computer knowledge, how can they transmit information with each other easily? How can they get business and policy information as quickly as possible? Not only do science classes make us working effectively, but also give us a brighter future both in people's everyday life and working.|留学|签证|TOEFL|GREyu hA



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Of course, the advantage of studying their part of the field of the study only can not be ignored. Consitrating on their major classes, they can go deeper and go broader. Because of the of the time, they can get high marks with little effort and there is much time left to play.

Though the advantages that studying their major only leads to are considerable, they can not compete with the benifit that taking basic science class bring about. From what we discuss above, we can clearly draw the conclusion that university student should be required to take basic science class.3

总体结构还是比较完整的,但对于个别段落,主题句与论证的例子不是十分吻合.
另外,建议以后发作业前,先用word的查错功能纠正错别的单词.
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