COMEON小组--------作业 9.7 Chineselady

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agree or disagree ：advertisements is a waste of a company's money and time because consumers have known what they want to buy（07.12.8传媒类）

Advertisements, as one of the necessities appears on the Medias, from newspaper, television to internet. It is introducing the goods with its function people want to learn meanwhile, some people will not know that what they should buy without this introduction. For any companies, advertisement is a direct way to introduce their products, therefore, I do not agree that advertisement is waste companies’ money.

In the first place, advertisement is easy for people to understand the new product. When the first time the foundation as a make-up was shown on television, it has been welcomed among women for years. The models put it on the face, and let people know that foundation can cover the spots, freckles, slight winkles and make skin look smooth and young. It was such function shown in the method of advertisement that those women made decision to use, from this point, I keep my view that the companies did not waste their money on advertisement, and the women will not understand what foundation is, without through medias.

In the second place, people can learn the advanced science from advertisement, which may change their purchase. The introduction of solar shower is one of the good scientific ways, without using electric, and other energy, solar shower is starting to be accepted by families, besides that, people may know something about solar. Advertisement must cost a lot of cash for solar shower company, but no one will know this new shower product if it was not appeared as advertisement.

Furthermore, for many people, it is not easy to make a decision in buying new products. They may need to purchase, but advertisement can give details on what they plan to buy. Those people could consider the products’ benefits and disadvantages. Without advertisement, people will probably be confused, especially about the new goods.

In conclusion, advertisement can cost much money, but it is not waste, because it can introduce the new production and bring the benefits for companies. While people can learn the function and the advantage of advanced goods, then they will make a plan to buy or not.

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Advertisements, as one of the necessities appears on the Medias, from newspaper, television to internet. It is introducing the goods with its function people want to learn meanwhile, some people will not know that what they should buy without this introduction. For any companies（any后接单数）, advertisement is a direct way to introduce their products, therefore, I do not agree that advertisement is waste companies’ money.
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In the first place, advertisement is easy （a easy way更好,advertisement is easy是指advertisement本身很容易）for people to understand the new product(不是特指不要用the，用new products更好). When the first time the foundation （sorry，我孤陋寡闻，foundation是一种化妆品的牌子吗？如果是，f应该大写）as a make-up was shown on television, it has been welcomed among women for years. The models put it on the face, and let people know that foundation can cover the spots, freckles, slight winkles and make skin look smooth and young. It was such function shown in the method of advertisement that those women made decision to use, from this point, I keep my view that the companies did not waste their money on advertisement, and the women will （应该用would）not understand what foundation is, without through （without后接名词或动名词，用watching或者用if条件句更好）medias.寄托家园:c:H^ heF*EZL#r
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In the second place, people can learn the advanced science from advertisement, which may change their purchase. The introduction of solar shower is one of the good scientific ways, without using electric, (comma应该被省去)and other energy, （这里缺少一个连词）solar shower is starting to be accepted by families, besides that, people may know something about solar. Advertisement must cost a lot of cash for solar shower company, but no one will（would） know this new shower product if it was not appeared as advertisement.
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Furthermore, for many people, it is not easy to make a decision in buying new products. They may need to purchase, but advertisement can give details on what they plan to buy. Those people could consider the products’ benefits and disadvantages. Without advertisement, people will probably be confused, especially about the new goods.
In conclusion, advertisement can cost much money, but it is not waste, because it can introduce the new production and bring the benefits for companies. While people can learn the function and the advantage of advanced goods, then they will make a plan to buy or not.

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Advertisements, as one of the necessities appears on the Medias, from newspaper, television to internet. It is introducing the goods with its function people want to learn， meanwhile, some people will not know that what they should buy without this introduction. For any companies, advertisement is a direct way to introduce their products, therefore, I do not agree that advertisement is waste companies’ money.

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In the first place, advertisement is easy for people to understand the new product. When the first time the foundation as a make-up was shown on television, it has been welcomed among women for years. The models put it on the face, and let people know that foundation can cover the spots, freckles, slight winkles and make skin look smooth and young. It was such function shown in the method of advertisement that those women made decision to use, from this point, I keep my view that the companies did not waste their money on advertisement, and the women will not understand what foundation is, without through medias(>advertisements).0^
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In the second place, people can learn the advanced science from advertisement, which may change their purchase(?)(their choice when purchasing). The introduction of solar shower is one of the good scientific ways, without using electric, and other energy, solar shower is starting to be accepted by families, besides that, people may know something about solar. Advertisement must cost a lot of cash for solar shower company, but no one will know this new shower product if it was not appeared as advertisement.

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Furthermore, for many people, it is not easy to make a decision in(when) buying new products. They may need to purchase, but(and) advertisement can give details on what they plan to buy. Those people could consider the products’ benefits and disadvantages. Without advertisement, people will probably be confused, especially about the new goods.(这一段显得没前两段生动，原因是没有举例子）(|(!

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In conclusion, advertisement can cost much money, but it is not waste, because it can introduce the new production and bring the benefits for companies. While(表转折了，改成过度词汇，或者干脆不要） people can learn the function and the advantage of advanced goods, then they will make a plan to buy or not.

chineseladyUID: 2403976

谢谢你改作业,辛苦了! foundation是粉底液 女生都用吧 很遮盖滴!呵呵

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