COMEON作文小组--------------- weenbopper 10.12作业

weenbopperUID: 2423595

With the development of computer science, information technology, Internet and transportation, combined with the intensification of international interaction, we are suddenly projected to this multicultural and colorful world. Consequently, our burden in study and work become more and more complicated. Along with this phenomenon arises a hot debate over whether cooperation is more important than the past. As far as I am concerned, since the increasingly complex problems, cooperation spirit is exceedingly imperative not only in work and study but also in our daily life.

First and foremost, cooperation is more prone to high efficiency. Hypothetically, you were an engineer of an international company. Hardly can you figure out any issues efficiently without a comprehensive and deep communication with your colleagues. All too often we can observe some teams of engineers come together not only for sharing the information they already had but also for exchanging the creative ideas, both of which would highly increase the efficiency. On the other side, the absence of cooperation is dangerous. My personal example can shed some light on this point. In last year, I got a little quarrel with my partner in a experiment, we decided to finish the task separately, and the outcome turned out to be disappointed since the lack of communication in the process.

Subsequently, hardly can the complexity of tasks be handled by only one person. In this multicultural and colorful world, cooperation is the prerequisite of success. Again, if you were an engineer in a large project, there were a lot of others take charge numerous parts of the project. Only after a well-rounded and organized cooperation and combination of those little separate projects can we get the final achievement.

Admittedly, some talented individuals can fulfill some impossible missions by themselves. Say a profound scientist, who knows 7 kinds of foreign languages, is highly possible to accomplish a task that can not be done even by dozens of ordinary ones. However just from this point alone is insufficient to judge that cooperation is not important now. For numerous others, a comprehensive and profound cooperation would be the most vital factor to guarantee the final success.

In a nutshell, from the points that I stated above we can safely come to the conclusion that since the increasing complexity of the tasks and its negative effect on efficiency, cooperation was needed so desperately now.


[ 本帖最后由 weenbopper 于 2008-10-12 18:57 编辑 ]

aaimmortalUID: 2297730

With the development of computer science, information technology, Internet and transportation, combined with the intensification of international interaction, we are suddenly projected to this multicultural and colorful world. Consequently, our burden in study and work become more and more complicated(burden用complicated修饰？serious或者heavy吧). Along with this phenomenon arises a hot debate over whether cooperation is more important than the past. As far as I am concerned, since the increasingly complex problems, cooperation spirit is exceedingly imperative not only in work and study but also in our daily life（你这里提到了daily life，但是后面没有例子支持，或许可以把admittedly那一段改为生活中cooperation的重要性）.



hFirst and foremost, cooperation is more prone to high efficiency. Hypothetically, you were an engineer of an international company. Hardly can you figure out any(issue) efficiently without a comprehensive and deep communication with your colleagues. All too often we can observe some teams of engineers come together not only for sharing the information they already had but also for exchanging the creative ideas, both of which would highly increase the efficiency. On the other side, the absence of cooperation is dangerous. My personal example can shed some light on this point. In last year, I got a little quarrel with my partner in a experiment, we decided to finish the task separately, and the outcome turned out to be disappointed since the lack of communication in the process.*BJ4qR"LU)E

Subsequently, hardly can the complexity of tasks be handled by only one person. In this multicultural and colorful world, cooperation is the prerequisite of success. Again, if you were an engineer in a large project, there were a lot of others(taking) charge numerous parts of the project. Only after a well-rounded and organized cooperation and combination of those little separate projects can we get the final achievement（论点是任务复杂，支持的例子感觉强调的是任务量大，最好加两句修饰的话说明project是复杂的)
@Admittedly, some talented individuals can fulfill some impossible missions by themselves. Say a profound scientist, who knows 7 kinds of foreign languages, is highly possible to accomplish a task that can not be done even by dozens of ordinary ones. However just from this point alone is insufficient to judge that cooperation is not important now. For numerous others, a comprehensive and profound cooperation would be the most vital factor to guarantee the final success.
In a nutshell, from the points that I stated above we can safely come to the conclusion that since the increasing complexity of the tasks and its negative effect on efficiency, cooperation was needed so desperately now（感觉有点模板）



[ 本帖最后由 aaimmortal 于 2008-10-12 21:36 编辑 ]