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Modern society has become more complex,  so it is essential for us young people to have the ability to plan and organize? Yes, the satement hit the nail on the head.

As the rapid speed of modern life, international culture communication, modern society is becoming more and more complexity. Facing so much flamboyance information which tempting us to absorb, how could we schedule and handle that complex society bringing us human gorgeous a world? I fairly appeal us to have thorough plan and organize for our behaviors.  

Plan is significant for us. Peanut things like writing a paper or publishing an issue, one must deliberately plan how to write it. What evident one should give, what organize we should make, which word is most suitable for expression. The same as do any other things in our life, one schedule organized include what and how will do in the next one year, five year or ten year which make one as human’s life more significant, afterwards one will have more confidence and sense of security. As a student one should make plan to accomplish homework but also balance with tremendous extracurricular activities such as grasping all kinds of music instruments or being skillful in sports. As a colleague student, one should plan what career will undertake in the future, how one should do to achieve the ideal in one’s dream.

Most importantly, as one facing so many complex things in the world, one cannot learn all the things. Consider that if one eager to do all kinds of thing he/she could attain. Spare a though of we as human being, whose energy is limited, we cannot do all the things well. If we choose everything to do, we cannot even do anything well. In the consequence, organizing and plan is essential for us. Knowing a thing about butter effort, one butter whip its wing, will cause a financial depression. That is the same thing as while if one did not plan and organize for the future, it will seriously affect the future life. One should discipline at a certain time in the present to enhance one’s enjoyment in the future.

In addition, as for our children, we also should plan for their health grown up for as the technology rapid-speed developed, the society will be more and more complex.

As a result, one should organize and plan careful for the activity. Not only for your future, for your offspring as well.

[ 本帖最后由 xlwxxy 于 2008-12-20 07:56 编辑 ]

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I definitely agree with the statement that modern society has become more complex,  so it is essential for us young people to have the ability to plan and organize. bbs.gter.net\Z$~}|}(`_

As the rapid speed of modern life, international culture communication, modern society is becoming more and more complexity（complex）. Facing so much flamboyance(flamboyant) information which (is) tempting us to absorb, how could we schedule and handle that complex society bringing us human gorgeous a world? I fairly appeal us to have thorough plan and organize for our behaviors.  

Plan is significant for us. Peanut things like writing a paper or publishing an issue, one must deliberately plan how to write it. What evident one should give, what organize we should make, which word is most suitable for expression. The same as do any other things in our life, one schedule organized include (includes) what and how will do in the next one year, five years or ten years which make one as human’s life more significant, afterwards one will have more confidence and sense of security. As a student one should make plan to accomplish homework but also balance with tremendous extracurricular activities such as grasping all kinds of music instruments or being skillful in sports. As a colleague student, one should plan what career will undertake in the future, how one should do to achieve the ideal in one’s dream.|留学|签证|TOEFL|GRE6vO9l)@I"?8x"k
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Most importantly, as one facing so many complex things in the world, one cannot learn all the things. Consider that if one eager to do all kinds of thing he/she could attain. Spare a though of we (us) as human being, whose energy is limited, we cannot do all the things well. If we choose everything to do, we cannot even do anything well. In the consequence, organizing and plan is essential for us. Knowing a thing about butter effort, one butter whip its wing, will cause a financial depression. That is the same thing as while if one did not plan and organize for the future, it will seriously affect the future life. One should discipline at a certain time in the present to enhance one’s enjoyment in the future.

In addition, as for our children, we also should plan for their health grown up for as the technology rapid-speed developed, the society will be more and more complex.留学,考

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As a result, one should organize and plan careful for the activity. Not only for your future, for your offspring as well(but also for your offspring). bbs.gter()

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As the rapid speed of modern life, international culture communication, modern society is becoming more and more complexity. Facing so much flamboyance information which tempting us to absorb, how could we schedule and handle that complex society bringing （us human太中式啦） gorgeous a world? I fairly appeal us to have thorough plan and organize for our behaviors.
结构很清晰 论点和例证都不错 语言很平实 少了些高级词汇增光添彩 咱们都要多看好文章啊 加油吧！～～