【12月-1月IBT综合备考活动 james12月30日作文

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【12月-1月IBT综合备考活动  james12月30日作文

Topic: Governments should focus more on natural environment problems and less on economic developments

Nowadays, publics pay more and more attentions on environment problems. In the point of my view, governments should focus more on natural environment problems for the consideration of protect our earth. However, they should not forget their duty of developing economics as well.

Human beings gradually take the throne of plants or animal killer from nature. Long before, the major reason of extinction in some species is the change of nature, such as dramatically change of climate and so on. Nevertheless, especially after the industrial revolution, severe exploitation of natural environment is far beyond its sustainable capacity, which directly led to more and more extinctions in recently years. Governments should make laws to limit improper activities on environment. In addition, Government should induce people to obey the basic moral rules of protect nature. If not, the change of our natural environment would definitely affect human beings. For example, some research indicates that the gradually increase of sea level would submerge some countries near the sea lines, which would bring some severe population and food problem. Accordingly, in this sense, it is necessary for government to focus more on environment problems.

Meanwhile, the governments should not ignore its basic duty--develop economics. Economics are core issue of any societies and is the prerequisite of any social activities. With the development of economics, Governments have more financial incomes so they can invest more on some charitable activities include protection of natural environment. In addition, people in developed countries always hold more environmental-protect sense than those in developing countries. Therefore, the government should not forget their duty about economic development.

To sum up, due to economic levels exert great influence on people's charitable activities, Government should focus more on gradually severe natural environment problems while maintains the economic at a relatively high speed.   

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Nowadays, publics pay more and more attentions on environment problems. In the point of my view, governments should focus more on natural environment problems for the consideration of protect our earth. However, they should not forget their duty of developing economics as well.

Human beings gradually take the throne of plants or animal killer from nature. Long before, the major reason of extinction in some species is the change of nature, such as dramatically change of climate and so on. Nevertheless, especially after the industrial revolution, severe exploitation of natural environment is far beyond its sustainable capacity, which directly led to more and more extinctions in recently years. Governments should make laws to limit improper activities on environment. In addition, Government should induce people to obey the basic moral rules of protect nature. If not, the change of our natural environment would definitely affect human beings. For example, some research indicates that the gradually increase of sea level would submerge some countries near the sea lines, which would bring some severe population and food problem. Accordingly, in this sense, it is necessary for government to focus more on environment problems.
这个论点选得还不错，例子也举得很好。不过建议把这段的分论点放到段首吧。

Meanwhile, the governments should not ignore its basic duty--develop economics. Economics are core issue of any societies and is the prerequisite of any social activities. With the development of economics (economy), Governments have more financial incomes so they can invest more on some charitable activities include protection of natural environment. In addition, people in developed countries always hold more environmental-protect sense than those in developing countries. Therefore, the government should not forget their duty about economic development.
这一段写得很好，不过感觉最后的这句阐述稍微有点欠缺，虽然前面你讲了经济发展了，许多人的环保意识会加强，但是个人觉得，还是应该在对这段下结论的时候，强调一次它们之间的这种联系。

To sum up, due to(due to 后面接的应该是名词性的短语吧...，你查查) economic levels exert great influence on people's charitable activities, Government(不需要大写吧..好几处了。。) should focus more on gradually severe natural environment problems while maintains the economic at a relatively high increasing speed.

总体来说，文章写得还不错，不过偶尔有些小的语法错误，注意改正。

论证总提上说还不错。


[ 本帖最后由 hustly0415 于 2008-12-31 20:17 编辑 ]

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Nowadays, publics pay more and more attentions on environment problems. In the point of my view, governments should focus more on natural environment problems for the consideration of protect(protecting) our earth. However, they should not forget their duty of developing economics as well.
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Human beings gradually take the throne of plants or animal killer from nature. Long before, the major reason of extinction in some species is the change of nature, such as dramatically change of climate and so on. Nevertheless, especially after the industrial revolution, severe exploitation of natural environment is far beyond its sustainable capacity, which directly led to more and more extinctions in recently years. Governments should make laws to limit improper activities on environment. In addition, Government should induce people to obey the basic moral rules of protect nature. If not, the change of our natural environment would definitely affect human beings. For example, some research indicates that the gradually increase of sea level would submerge some countries near the sea lines, which would bring some severe population and food problem(s). Accordingly, in this sense, it is necessary for government to focus more on environment problems.n Tyv.g
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To sum up, due to economic levels exert great influence on people's charitable activities, Government should focus more on gradually severe natural environment problems while maintains the economic at a relatively high speed.