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Issue 130: How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society.
提纲:1、不能说我们没有教好孩子:家庭教育&学校教育都有培养孩子更好的迈入社会
      2、未考虑到过去与现在的差异。社会主流价值观强调更加自主与独立,但是并不意味着孩子缺失融入社会的能力。
      3、的确存在部分孩子缺少这种能力,但也是少数特例

No matter what we have minded in the past, and being today, even in the future, education is always the key that we focus on. It is just as an adage said:” raising children is like to raising the sun of tomorrow.” Recently, some one considers that we did not do well on bring up children, which obviously plays a vital role on our society. However, in my opinion, the anxiety here is unnecessary.

I disagree with the idea that we do not catch the point of how children should train for socialized. From the angle of family, parents are the initial teacher of one child, as a guide that guiding their children to a condition which seem to be more comfortable and more profitable to their growth. They experience enough so that they also what is going on in the society. I still remember 20 years ago, in China, economics of the whole country advanced so rapidly that there called for a big deal of skilled worker. Thus, in order to be a useful person many parents sent their children to technique school, being blue-collars. Until now with the development of the society, various sorts of special talents are needed in every part of the country, now parents begin to be assistants and pay more attention on the interest of children, leading them to progress as what they are really appreciate. In addition, from the angle of school education, it is more professional and rational to foster children. Mathematics, science, history, philosophy and so forth, these are what universities offer for students to broaden their horizon until to the deep research. Some of them have already provide us numerous scientists who contribute their life to all human society. No doubt that we could make our society more harmonious and coherent.

In fact, along with the development of modern society, especially the economics, children tend to independence. Individual is emphasized frequently, that means whether one man could be capacity of standing in the world which is fulfilled with competition. And this I say is for Individual’s profit, not that beyond a child socialized, but for that which is seemly. Engaging in social function does require more intercourse, but before communicate with others one thing is significant---ability of individual. It is more likely to be equal for the future and much better for fitting in the realistic world. Furthermore, owe to the difference between the time now and past, as a modern child, he cannot be treat as similar as the fact that might be thought currently before, to some degree just like what is concerned by the author. Because of the advancement, the standard and attitude of raising children should be changed together, matching with the complex and accelerating progress.

Meanwhile, indeed there exist part of children who lack the spirit of cooperation and responsibility, and some other antithesis of well education. Of course it is absolutely less than the obverse. May be after decades of years this phenomenon would disappear, without the elimination of objective situation today.

Definitely considering the destiny of society, we could say that it always has not been designed already, but still waits for people to detect and discover.

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No matter what we have minded in the past, and being today, even in the future, education is always the key that we focus on. It is just as an adage said:” raising children is like to raising the sun of tomorrow.” Recently, some one considers that we did not do well on bring up children, which obviously plays a vital role on our society. However, in my opinion, the anxiety here is unnecessary.

I disagree with the idea that we do not catch the point of how children should train for socialized. From the angle of family, parents are the initial teacher of one child, as a guide that guiding their children to a condition which seem to be more comfortable and more profitable to their growth. They experience enough so that they also what is going on in the society. I still remember(去掉) 20 years ago, in China, economics of the whole country advanced so rapidly that there called for a big deal of skilled worker. Thus, in order to be a useful person many parents sent their children to technique school, being(be) blue-collars as a result. Until now with the development of the society, various sorts of special talents are needed in every part of the country, now parents begin to be assistants and pay more attention on the interest of children, leading them to progress as what they are really appreciate. In addition, from the angle of school education, it is more professional and rational to foster children. Mathematics, science, history, philosophy and so forth, these are what universities offer for students to broaden their horizon until to the deep research (are offered for students to in every university which broaden their horizon). Some of them have already provide us numerous scientists, leaders and sportspersons who contribute their life to all human society. No doubt that we could make our society more harmonious and coherent.

In fact, along with the development of modern society, especially the economics, children tend to independence (be independent). Individual(personality or characteristic) is emphasized frequently, that means(decides) whether one man could be capacity of standing in the world which is fulfilled with competition. And this I say is for Individual’s profit, not that(去掉) beyond a child being socialized, but for that which is seemly. Engaging in social function does require more intercourse, but before communicate with others one thing is significant---ability of individual(sense of self-recognize). It is more likely to be equal for the future and much better for fitting in the realistic world. Furthermore, owe to the difference between the time now and past, as a modern child, he cannot be treat as similar as the fact that might be thought currently (correctly) before, to some degree just like what is concerned by the author. Because of the advancement, the standard and attitude of raising children should be changed together, matching with the complex and accelerating progress.

Meanwhile, indeed there exist part of children who lack the spirit of cooperation and responsibility, and some other antithesis of well education. Of course it is absolutely less than the obverse. May be after decades of years this phenomenon would disappear, without the elimination of objective situation today. 应该加上对于这种人我们不能放弃,社会要加大对他们的关注和爱护,虽然我们的教育已经很好了,但可以更好

Definitely considering the destiny of society, we could say that it always has not been designed already, but still waits for people to detect and discover.
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