Issue130 【六人作文小组】第1周第2次作业

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TOPIC: ISSUE130 - "How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society.
Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a
better society."
WORDS: 363          TIME: 1:54:52          DATE: 2009-1-7
提纲：
从小学会为人处世，长大后造福于社会。应该加强教育。
1.教育科学发展，教育手段进步
2.社会是最好的老师。小孩不光看你说，还看你做。
社会现在这么烂，教不好小孩。

Well educated and socialized children today will bring about a better society tomorrow.
No one doubts that. From this point of view, special attentions should be paid to the
education of children. However, children are not merely taught in schools by their
teachers, but also in the whole society by people around them. Are we ready to give
them a good education?
Clearly, the rapid development of education science nowadays has made us capable of
offering a good teaching to the children. Based on the advanced educational theories,
perfect equipments and well trained teachers, any excellent teaching program can be
designed and implemented to make children learn how to deal with the rest of the world.
Beside schools, there are also plenty of meseums, theatres, and various clubs for
children to visit at the present time. Children today learn more knowledge, experience
more activities, and get more chance to practise how to deal with interpersonal
relationship well.
However, children are also "raised" by the society in which they grow up. To some
extent, the influence of society to children is much greater than that of schools. Once
they have viewed a scene on the bus that someone give up its seat to the elder, they
will keep that in mind and do the same thing when they grow up. Society is the best
school. Children are more likely to do as what they see, not as what they are told to
do. Unfortunately, from that aspect, we are doing very awful to socialize the children.
The society we are living in has showed too much selfish, hatred, cheat, violence, and
so on to the young generation. Seeing such things, they are not expected to grow up to
be high qualified citizens. There is no way to keep the children from the negative
influence of society, simply because we can not possibly keep the children isolated
from society.
As a conclusion, children are educated by the whole society. If we find it difficult to
teach the children to be good citizens, it's very probably because the adult world is
not good enough. From that fact, we definitely have not learned how to raise children.


感觉好像论证进入死循环了，很郁闷……

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谢谢greatsong的修改！
君真明鉴，我现在就是死命也无法把例子加到文章中，心里那个急啊。脑子里还是有例子的（我的观点基本都来自对例子的分析），但是还不会把它们准确地描述出来。
继续努力，嗯！