【12月-1月IBT综合备考活动】之【TWE写作】月 12月11日提纲

d596086UID: 2522476

Thesis:
I agree with the view that teachers should be paid as much as doctors, lawyers, and business leaders

Body:
1.     The education is equally important as medical treatment, legal justness and business; therefore, should be paid also equally.
1)    No one can become a doctor, lawyer, or business leader without studying from teachers.
2)    Enhancing the salary of teacher, more people will love to pursue in educational jobs, which in turn significantly improve the quality of education. That means more genius will be cultivated contributing to the whole society.

2.     If not ……., less and less people likely choose teacher as a career, which not only harm the educational system, but also damage the whole society.
1)    Were there no or few teachers because the unfair payment, what the world’s tomorrow will be like?
2)    Problem: Social safety, public diathesis,  technology improvement

End:
Obviously, it is teacher who teach us how to effectively save people’s life, how to correctly use laws maintaining justice, how to run successful business. According to the unmeasured merit that teachers create, they should gain the same amount of repayment as doctors, lawyers, and business leaders.

nickey0809UID: 2349468

条例很清晰哦
你是不是考过Ｇ你，
看你论证的方法也不太一样，比较熟练
不是总分总的

我之前是背了和改写了几十篇李晓来的文章，所以昨天第一次在电脑上写作文时
自然而然的就写出来了，算是模仿吧
你有什么更好的建议
共同进步呵呵