ares小组作业,ISSUE 51

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Education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student.

1.The speaker asserts that being effective education only should specifically meet the individual needs and interests of every student.In my opinion that interests towarding particular subjects or disciplines,useful knowledge inculcated to students are two factors in which influenced the efficiency of the learning process.


2.In the first place,the most important function of education at any level is to develop the interests of persons and the significance in their life .

3.In the second place,we assume the conditions that there is only generally training but no specially one.

4.last but not least,men and women are preparing new generations of citizens in society before being  specialists.

5.In sum,from what has been discussed above,we may draw the conclusion that education  is for the improvement of the individual,not only offering useful knowledge but also helping students open and revealing the riches within.It is the purpose of training instead of pouring information only.



The speaker asserts that being effective education only should specifically meet the individual needs and interests of every student.In my opinion that interests towarding particular subjects or disciplines,useful knowledge inculcated to students are two factors in which influenced the efficiency of the learning process.

In the first place,the most important function of education at any level is to develop the interests of persons and the significance in their life .How to discover a child's talents is on of the most responsibilities of schools.The child should learn what he or she have interest in this fields in which one have talents.For example,qianzhongshu,the famous writer who wrote the novel named weicheng.At the age of ninteen,he began his study in qinghua university with  excellent score in Chinese and English studying failing passing maths test.Qinghua university paid more attention to qianzhongshu's wonder talents in literal fields and encouraged him to wander down the knowledge .After further education in oxford university in Brition,qianzhongshu gradually became a important writer and authority in literal.Thus,education enhance a student's learning experience and instruct of a man or woman in what he or her has inside him.

In the second place,we assume the conditions that there is only generally training but no specially one.For instance,we plant trees with watering every day which need seldom water at all.Trees finally should dead.Gifts in everyone benefit oneself and others when it is been taken out and praised by propriety ways especially in the period of childhood.The child should never be forced to learn what they have no interests in that fields.



last but not least,people need life skill----logical method,analysis,creative apt.Education will afford the skills above.Not only will schools meet the interests of students’,but also tell them how to be a socielly men.


In sum,from what has been discussed above,we may draw the conclusion that education  is for the improvement of the individual,not only offering useful knowledge but also helping students open and revealing the riches within.It is the purpose of training instead of pouring information only.


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ISSUE130提纲

1.It is man and woman's personal responsibility,belief in the principle of liberty,equality,knowledge and practices that determines the future of society.today ,education play a considerable part in society rapidly progressing.

2.Firstly,Education play a vital role in individual and society.

3.Secondly,However,there are some problems in current training.

4.In sum,Education's purpose is to enhance skills of individuals,which helps society and people.
juvenile delinquency is the problem that exist in recently society.How to civilize boys and girls make it difficult to educations risk.

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issue 154

1.The arguer say that education is so important that parents ,society,professional educators must be involved in the schools.In my point of view,I agree with the speaker for some reasons .

2.Firstly,Parents knows things in  which students interest since boys and girls spend their time in home after they leave school.

3.Secondly,Parents knows characters in which students have .There are too many students in school to educators take care of.Some of students would be ignored by teacher on some conditons of they are not outstanding or have not express their talents they have in.

4.Thirdly,excessivly care of parents lead to some problem such as unprofessional education.

5.In sum,from what has been discussed above,we finally draw the conclusion that parents play a important role with pupils education.

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The speaker asserts that being effective education only should specifically meet the individual needs and interests of every student. In my opinion that interests toward particular subjects, disciplines and useful knowledge inculcated to students have two factors which influence the efficiency of the learning process. 建议直接说明同意还是不同意，或者部分同意部分否定

In the first place, the most important function of education at any level is to develop the interests of persons and the significance in their life .How to discover children’s talents is one of the most responsibilities of schools. The child should learn what he or she have interest in this fields in which one have talents. (不通，没看懂什么意思)For example, Qian zhongshu, the famous writer in China who wrote the novel named weicheng. At the age of nintee, he began his study in Qinghua university with  excellent score in Chinese and English studying failing passing the maths. Qinghua university paid more attention to Qianzhongshu's wonder talents in literal fields and encouraged him to wander down(什么意思) the knowledge. After further education in oxford university in Briton, he gradually became an important writer and the authority in literality. To some extent education enhance a student's learning experience and instruction of a man or woman in what he or she has inside him.（这句也不通）（人称，还有人名，学校名字要写正规，例子挺好，但要写得生动些，我觉得大可不必说他数学不好，说他文学方面的成就，来显示兴趣的重要）

In the second place, we assume the conditions that there is only generally training but no specially one. For instance, we plant trees with watering every day which need seldom water at all. Trees finally should dead. Gifts in everyone benefit oneself and others when it is been taken out and praised by propriety ways especially in the period of childhoods. The child should never be forced to learn what they have no interests in that fields.



last but not least, people need life skill——logical method, analysis, creative apt. Education will afford the skills above. Not only will schools meet the interests of students’, but also tell them how to be a social men.（这段转开，注意拼写）


In sum, from what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that education  is for the improvement of the individual, not only offering useful knowledge but also helping students open and revealing the riches within. It is the purpose of training instead of pouring information only.
建议楼主看看gre写作的结构，我的个人建议，我觉得应该展开写，正反的说，毕竟gre是逻辑考试，一家之言，仅供参考

建议下次先用word自己改一下，文中小错，拼写挺多，我没有标注，这是我帖到word改好了

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多谢建议,反面的例子不好想，我想了很久,最后也没把话说完整.

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请修改一下发帖标题格式吧。