issue130 (12月高强组 ——好好学习，天天作文)

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本来这周目标是限时成功，今天写的时候发现自己还是基本维持在写第一篇的速度，似乎还越来越慢了，所以小受打击了下，至于花了很多时间去郁闷。。。。。。不过作文还是得写，只有继续练习去期待突破，无论如何不想再改期了
所以现在才交上这篇issue,实在是很抱歉，尤其是帮我改作文的last同学，最近一周都很懈怠。
提纲：1。对于大多数人而言，教育是走入社会前的准备，所以社会化很重要
2．但是随着社会分工细化，孩子社会化并不是决定社会发展的唯一因素
3．现实教育是存在一些问题，但不能否认起的作用，还有社会的努力，鼓励学生打工等。TOPIC: ISSUE130 - "How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."
WORDS: 671          TIME: 0:55:00          DATE: 2006-12-12

Whether how the children are socialized determines the destiny of society? In my opinion, though the social capability is vital in the development of children, we cannot ignore other factors in the children education. Besides, the assertion that we have not yet learned how to raise children to promote a better society is the exaggeration of the flaws of today's education system.

Admittedly, human is the social animal and the ultimate goal of the education of a child is to prepare for their future entry to the society, so how children are socialized is significant for the society's future. With the fast development of information and communication, the interpersonal skills are more and more important for anyone to gain success, whether in the academic fields or business world. The time of hero has passed and now the age of cooperation has come. To accomplish a project or research, the only struggle of one person is impossible due to the complexity of the work today. For instance, the American great physicist and inventors, the father of alternator, Tesla, suffered a great failure in his later life. It is because that he insisted the laggard way of research without cooperation with others and he could not find financial support for his invention, he died at last with bankruptcy. Compared with Tesla's failure, the contemporary inventors Edison lead a successful life and applied many of his inventions to practical use because he build the first cooperative lab in his latter years. Thus, with the increasing complexity of modern society, the children education on social ability is more and more crucial for the development of our society.

Other factors, like intellectual quality and moral ethics, however, are also important when we raise children for the progress of our society. We have seen that our world is greatly changed by the development of science and technology in every aspect of our lives. If we only emphasize the importance of social ability and ignore other factors, the society would be trapped into chaos. To survive in this competitive society, one should obtain knowledge of the precedents and assimilate their wisdom. We can hardly expect a child who is brought up without intellectual education can bring a better society to us. If the assertion that how children are socialized determines the destiny of society is true, whether we should just throw our children to the society as early and we can to promote a better society? Certainly we cannot only emphasize the cultivation of social ability and ignore education of other abilities, which are also vital for the advance of our society.

Fortunately, our society are endeavoring so much to raise children who can help bring about a better society intellectually and emotionally and despite of some problems, like emphasis too much on the reciting and lack of emotional education in schools, our whole society are engaging in this practice for our future. Though there are always complaints about the school education emphasize too much on the intellectual cultivation and there are some high IQ but low EQ students, the education board are trying to change this situation and solve this problems. For instance, MIT omits the score evaluating system for the freshman and set more curriculums and programs to help students promote their social ability. There are more psychological apartment to help students to work through the psychological crisis. Not only schools, but also other socials organizations are engaging to help raise people to bring a better society. More and more companies are open intern position for college students to help them to prepare better when they enter the society. Thus, the assertion that we have not yet learned how to raise children is the exaggeration of flaws’ education and assumption that school education would burden all the responsibility of children education.

In sum, I do no agree the author's assertion. I believe that with more and more schools are relizing the social ability and try to make balance between them, our society would surly be better than before.

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早点开始限时也是好事...先别追求字数, 找一到两个观点论述明白了就行, 好象只有6分作文是要求每个观点都well supported, 5分作文可以有所取舍. 如果是打字速度的原因的话不如找个练字工具狂练上一周, 肯定长进的

我这两天也是忙都昏头...先顶下..有时间再来改...