issue103 我们的九月小组 第五次作业

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issue103
The study of history have value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives.


History is one kind of important professions social society, from archaic times to nowadays, mankind has been researching, studying, and learning from history. The author claims that the study of history has value insofar only to the extent that it is associated to the daily lives. While I agree that study of history have practical value in our mundane chores; it is partial to conclude that study of history has no value in other respects, especially human's common fields.

It is obvious that in daily lives study of history performs as an important role. Poverty is a good example. On the one hand, growth and change is the law of life and yesterday's answers are problematical for today, as Roosevelt said; on the other hand, masses of things stay the same in the river of history. People can learn a lot from what ancestors have done long long ago. Poverty is the experience of our predecessors. From them, we learn what we should do and what we should not to avoid the mistakes human has made and operate our lives better. Another example is the timing of seeding, keeping, and harvesting crops in the countryside in china. Experience in history is a very important role in indicating farmers to do farm work. History guide our daily lives.

Moreover, the study of history is not merely used in daily life. The evidence that history is the foundation of cognizance will not permit us to deny the large effect history has on human's thinking. History is the trace of events before as scholars write. Like a mirror to human's behaviors, people can think about what existed in history and do inducing. A student may learn from history that many famous people achieve their success through drudgery striving; so it may become a powerful inspiration to him to work hard and try his best to become an archeologist, oceanographer, astronomer or engineer. Besides, in history form the humanity and virtue of human. It is also our ancestors' wisdom assembled in history that instruct the society to work well.

Further more; in many fields of science outside daily life the study of history is beneficial. In the medicine, what have ancestors done to cure a certain disease is good references for medicals. In the biography, the experiments predecessors have done are good standards for us to do research. In the environment protecting, we know from the past that if many measures have been put into practice our living condition will be better. It help ecologist to take proper precaution to prevent the environment worsing off.

To summarize, the study of history is beyond the effects in daily lives. For those who have foresight, history is helpful to make a better future of human.

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History is one kind of important professions social society不太明白, from archaic times to nowadays, mankind has been researching, studying, and learning from history. The author claims that the study of history has value insofar only to the extent that it is associated to the daily lives. While I agree that study of history have practical value in our mundane chores; it is partial to conclude that study of history has no value in other respects, especially human's common fields.
history effect our daily hives
It is obvious that in daily lives study of history performs as an important role. Poverty is a good example. On the one hand, growth and change is the law of life and yesterday's answers are problematical for today, as Roosevelt said（as i quoted）; on the other hand, masses of things stay the same keep still in the river of history. People can learn a lot from what ancestors have done long long ago. Poverty is the experience of our predecessors. From them, we learn what we should do and what we should not to avoid the mistakes human has made and operate our lives better. Another example is the timing of seeding, keeping, and harvesting crops in the countryside in china. Experience in history is a very important role in indicating farmers to do farm work. History guide our daily lives.
the effect history exerted on humen's thinking
Moreover, the study of history is not merely used in daily life. The evidence that history is the foundation of cognizance will not permit us to deny the large effect history has exerted on human's thinking. History is the trace of events before as scholars write it is recorded. Like a mirror to human's behaviors, people can think about what existed in history and do inducing. A student may learn from history that many famous people achieve their success through drudgery striving; so it may become a powerful inspiration to him to work hard and try his best to become an archeologist, oceanographer, astronomer or engineer. Besides, in history form the humanity and virtue of human. It is also our ancestors' wisdom assembled in history that instruct the society to work well.
history  provides us with the evidence and examples.
Further more; in many fields of science outside daily life the study of history is beneficial. In the medicine, what have ancestors done to cure a certain disease is good references for medicals. In the biography, the experiments predecessors have done are good standards for us to do research. In the environment protecting, we know from the past that if many measures have been put into practice our living condition will be better. It help ecologist to take proper precaution to prevent the environment worsing off.

To summarize, the study of history is beyond the effects in daily lives. For those who have foresight, history is helpful to make a better future of human.


我的issue不是很好 所以对语言的建议 比对文章内容的建议 会多一些
整篇文章 思路比较清晰 不过觉得论证的语言少了一些 对例子地分析 少了一些
语言方面 可能应该注意措辞 用一些结构复杂些的句子