Issue218 重归GTER，奋战！！请斑竹不要留情！！

硬柿子UID: 204138

Issue218  第1篇 开始限时，写完提纲后，G友们拍…拍…拍！………
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：34分9秒     589 words
从2005年6月19日20时59分到2005年6月19日21时34分
------题目------
In order for any work of art—whether film, literature, sculpture, or a song—to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.
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To gauge whether a piece of art has merit or not, one should firstly clarify the essence and the function of it, and the standard by which people evaluate the work of art.

Although today the word art usually refers to the visual arts. The concept of what art is has continuously changed over centuries. Perhaps the most concise definition is its broadest------arts refer to all creative human endeavors. Man use arts to convey their emotion and imagination, to reflect their views of the world, to outlet their ideas about the relations between this world and human beings. Put the definition into simple words, the arts is the organic product of knowledge and emotion. It reflect the realistic and spiritual world of the human beings.

Firstly, the oldest definition of the funtion of the arts is that they provide pleasure. The most important function of songs, defined as classics, popular, or folk songs, is to entertain their audience, make them joyful, or remind them of the good old days. Another function of the arts is that they present us with insight into what is eternal and universal. The art is born from society and a excellent piece of art should reflect the natures, values and trend of the society. John Denver, borned in New Mexico in 1943, was a popular musician of the 1970's. His contributuins to American culture extend far beyond the tender music. He is best known for, but strentched from environmentalism and philanthropy to a hearty interest in space songs. It was his ability to connect with listeners of all nationalitya, ages that make John Denver one of the most beloved and influential recording artists of the 20th century. Therefore, a good art is the art that can invoke the common thought of the people in spite that whether it understandable or not.

Secondly, when we pursue the value of a piece of art, we should make clear that who judge the arts------the maker, or the audiences , the viewers or anyone else. One of the essential point is that any kind of art, whether film, literature, sculpture or a song, are created by individuals, thus the arts must transfer what the maker want to express. The examples of Vangul and Savador Dali can support this point of view. At the time of Vangul, few people can understand Vangul's labeled master pieces, the Sunflowers. It is wierld that Vangul paint in such a unusual way of using colors. This piece of art present us such a drab and flabby picture. But when take Vangul's experience into cinsideration, we will surprised to find out the confused and despond inner world of Vangul himself. Salvador Dali, who remains one of the best known artists of the modern era, due to his flanboyant personality and instantly recongnizable painting style. He painted his products in a meticulous tenique tha impact a dream-lile landscrapes, which are often filled with strange objects, such as crutch holding up the old women tha graces one of his best known works. Although the works OF Vangul and Dali are uneasy to underatand, it can not prevent their works of arts to be viewed as valuable.

In conclusion, whether a work of art is understandable to most people or not, is not a decisive factors to a valuable work. The most important element that make a piece of art unique is the essence and the function of the arts ----  what the arts want to reveal and what kind of thoughts the productor want to convey.

[ Last edited by yogurt4 on 2005-7-19 at 21:31 ]

硬柿子UID: 204138

怎么没人回复呢？:confused::confused:

蝴蝶结UID: 195566

柿子的文章好好，偶只有佩服的分儿！
有一个小地方，B3举的是梵高吧，应该是Van Gogh：）

zhihengUID: 190545

Issue218  第1篇 开始限时，写完提纲后，G友们拍…拍…拍！………
------摘要------
作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：34分9秒     589 words
从2005年6月19日20时59分到2005年6月19日21时34分
------题目------
In order for any work of art—whether film, literature, sculpture, or a song—to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.
------正文------
To gauge whether a piece of art has merit or not, one should firstly clarify the essence and the function of it, and the standard by which people evaluate the work of art.

Although today the word art usually refers to the visual arts. The concept of what art is has continuously changed over centuries. Perhaps the most concise definition is its broadest------arts refer to all creative human endeavors. Man use arts to convey their emotion and imagination, to reflect their views of the world, to outlet their ideas about the relations between this world and human beings. Put the definition into simple words, the arts is the organic product of knowledge and emotion. It reflect the realistic and spiritual world of the human beings.这个definition不错，就是有点长了，感觉所有关于art的题目都可以把这一段给用上^_^

Firstly, the oldest definition of the funtion of the arts is that they provide pleasureTS1. The most important function of songs, defined as classics, popular, or folk songs, is to entertain their audience, make them joyful, or remind them of the good old days. Another function of the arts is that they present us with insight into what is eternal and universalTS2. The art is born from society and a excellent piece of art should reflect the natures, values and trends of the society. John Denver, borned in New Mexico in 1943, was a popular musician of the 1970's. His contributuins contributions to American culture extend far beyond the tender music. He is best known for, but strentched from environmentalism and philanthropy to a hearty interest in space songs. It was his ability to connect with listeners of all nationalitya, ages that make John Denver one of the most beloved and influential recording artists of the 20th century. Therefore, a good art is the art that can invoke the common thought of the people in spite that whether it understandable or not. 最后一句终于切题了，不过感觉多少有点突兀，因为这一段前边的TS1和TS2都在大谈特谈art的function，没有一丝的征兆^_^
Secondly, when we pursue the value of a piece of art, we should make clear that who judge the arts------the maker, or the audiences , the viewers or anyone else. One of the essential points is that any kind of art, whether film, literature, sculpture or a song, are created by individuals, thus the arts must transfer what the maker want to express. The examples of Vangul and Savador Dali can support this point of view. At the time of Vangul, few people can understand Vangul's labeled master pieces, the Sunflowers. It is wierld(应该是weird吧，口语里常用这个词，不知道用到这里合不合适) that Vangul paint in such a unusual way of using colors. This piece of art present us such a drab and flabby picture. But when take Vangul's experience into cinsideration, we will surprised to find out the confused and despond inner world of Vangul himself. Salvador Dali, who remains one of the best known artists of the modern era, due to his flanboyant personality and instantly recongnizable painting style. He painted his products in a meticulous tenique tha impact a dream-lile landscrapes, which are often filled with strange objects, such as crutch holding up the old women tha graces one of his best known works. Although the works OF Vangul and Dali are uneasy to underatand, it can not prevent their works of arts to be viewed as valuable.

In conclusion, whether a work of art is understandable to most people or not, is not a decisive factors to a valuable work. The most important element that make a piece of art unique is the essence and the function of the arts ----  what the arts want to reveal and what kind of thoughts the productor want to convey.

柿子能在三十四分钟里写出这样的文章，真是强烈仰慕ｉｎｇ！！
以下是几点不成熟的意见：
1、文章中有一些拼写错误，因时间关系，我只是顺便改了一些，其实把文章ｃｏｐｙ到ｗｏｒｄ里很容易发现的
2、文章的Definiton不错，例子也举的很好，可见　柿子　对Ａｒｔ这个主题已经准备的很充分了。Ａｎｙｗａｙ，光是罗列例子还不够，还要切题，文章明显的分为两部分，前三段（讲ａｒｔ的ｆｕｃｔｉｏｎ），后两段（讲ａｒｔ的ｕｎｄｅｒｓｔａｎｄａｂｌｅ），如果能加几句话，把前三段也和ｕｎｄｅｒｓａｎｄａｂｌｅ连起来，这篇文章就很完美了

我的信箱是hitheng@hotmail.com 欢迎讨论　



[ Last edited by zhiheng on 2005-7-20 at 16:13 ]

硬柿子UID: 204138

老实说，这篇文章一个月前想写，找了些资料，但是中途~~落单了~~~:L

那个definition是用google在网上找的，翻译一下，背下来~~

文章中，确实有很多松散的地方，因为怕时间来不及，我跟赶去投胎似底~~~唉~~~我一定改改~~~

另外：考场上可以用word ??:confused::confused:

zehuaUID: 199246

To gauge whether a piece of art has merit or not, one should firstly clarify the essence and the function of it, and the standard by which people evaluate the work of art.

Although today the word art usually refers to the visual arts. （，）The （the）concept of what art is has continuously changed(changing) over centuries. Perhaps the most concise definition is its broadest（这句有点怪，说的好像不清楚）------arts refer to all creative human endeavors. Man use arts to convey their emotion and imagination, to reflect their views of the world, to outlet their ideas about the relations between this world and human beings. Put the definition into simple words（有点罗嗦）, the arts is the organic product of knowledge and emotion.（见解独特） It reflect the realistic and spiritual world of the human beings.

Firstly, the oldest definition of the funtion of the arts is that they provide pleasure. The most important function of songs, defined as classics, popular, or folk songs, is to entertain their audience, make them joyful, or remind them of the good old days. Another function of the arts is that they present us with insight into what is eternal and universal. The art is born from society and a（AN) excellent piece of art should reflect the natures, values and trend of the society. John Denver, borned in New Mexico in 1943, was a popular musician of the 1970's. His contributuins to American culture extend far beyond the tender music. He is best known for, but strentched from environmentalism and philanthropy to a hearty interest in space songs. It was his ability to connect with listeners of all nationalitya, ages that make John Denver one of the most beloved and influential recording artists of the 20th century. Therefore, a good art is the art that can invoke the common thought of the people in spite that（OF？） whether it understandable or not.

Secondly, when we pursue the value of a piece of art, we should make clear that（THAT多余） who judge the arts------the maker, or the audiences , the viewers or anyone else. One of the essential point is that any kind of art, whether film, literature, sculpture or a song, are created by individuals, thus the arts must transfer what the maker want to express. The examples of Vangul and Savador Dali can support this point of view. At the time of Vangul, few people can understand Vangul's labeled master pieces, the Sunflowers. It is wierld that Vangul paint in such a unusual way of using colors. This piece of art present us such a drab and flabby picture. But when take Vangul's experience into cinsideration, we will surprised to find out the confused and despond inner world of Vangul himself. Salvador Dali, who remains one of the best known artists of the modern era, due to his flanboyant personality and instantly recongnizable painting style. He painted his products in a meticulous tenique tha impact a dream-lile landscrapes, which are often filled with strange objects, such as crutch holding up the old women tha graces one of his best known works. Although the works OF Vangul and Dali are uneasy to underatand, it can not prevent their works of arts to be viewed as valuable.

In conclusion, whether a work of art is understandable to most people or not, is not a decisive factors to a valuable work. The most important element that make a piece of art unique is the essence and the function of the arts ----  what the arts want to reveal and what kind of thoughts the productor want to convey.

语法和拼写错误比较多，就不一一纠正了。举的例子不错。
总－总－分－分－总的结构以前我还从没见过咧:lol

zhihengUID: 190545

^_^　我的意思是说　贴上来以前应先用ｗｏｒｄ把语法错误改一下（很方便的）

这样别人再起来也比较舒服

[ Last edited by zhiheng on 2005-7-21 at 19:54 ]

硬柿子UID: 204138

Originally posted by zhiheng at 2005-7-21 19:53
^_^　我的意思是说　贴上来以前应先用ｗｏｒｄ把语法错误改一下（很方便的）

这样别人再起来也比较舒服

好的，谢谢提醒!

硬柿子UID: 204138

Issue218  第1篇 开始限时，写完提纲后，G友们拍…拍…拍！………
------摘要------
作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：34分9秒     589 words
从2005年6月19日20时59分到2005年6月19日21时34分
------题目------
In order for any work of art—whether film, literature, sculpture, or a song—to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.
------正文------
To gauge whether a piece of art has merit or not, one should firstly clarify the essence and the function of it, and the standard by which people evaluate the work of art.

Although today the word art usually refers to the visual arts. The concept of what art is has continuously changed over centuries. Perhaps the most concise definition is its broadest------arts refer to all creative human endeavors. Man use arts to convey their emotion and imagination, to reflect their views of the world, to outlet their ideas about the relations between this world and human beings. Put the definition into simple words, the arts is the organic product of knowledge and emotion. It reflect the realistic and spiritual world of the human beings.

Firstly, the oldest definition of the function of the arts is that they provide pleasure. The most important function of songs, defined as classics, popular, or folk songs, is to entertain their audience, make them joyful, or remind them of the good old days. Another function of the arts is that they present us with insight into what is eternal and universal. The art is born from society and a excellent piece of art should reflect the natures, values and trend of the society. John Denver, burned in New Mexico in 1943, was a popular musician of the 1970's. His contributions to American culture extend far beyond the tender music. He is best known for, but stretched from environmentalism and philanthropy to a hearty interest in space songs. It was his ability to connect with listeners of all nationality, ages that make John Denver one of the most beloved and influential recording artists of the 20th century. Therefore, a good art is the art that can invoke the common thought of the people in spite that whether it understandable or not.

Secondly, when we pursue the value of a piece of art, we should make clear that who judge the arts------the maker, or the audiences , the viewers or anyone else. One of the essential point is that any kind of art, whether film, literature, sculpture or a song, are created by individuals, thus the arts must transfer what the maker want to express. The examples of Van Gogh and Savadori Dali can support this point of view. At the time of Van Gogh l, few people can understand Van Gogh l's labeled master pieces, the Sunflowers. It is weird that Van Gogh paint in such a unusual way of using colors. This piece of art present us such a drab and flabby picture. But when take Van Gogh l's experience into consideration, we will surprised to find out the confused and despond inner world of Van Gogh himself. Salvador Dali, who remains one of the best known artists of the modern era, due to his flamboyant personality and instantly recognizable painting style. He painted his products in a meticulous unique that impact a dream-like landscapes, which are often filled with strange objects, such as crutch holding up the old women that graces one of his best known works. Although the works OF Van Gogh and Dali are uneasy to understand, it can not prevent their works of arts to be viewed as valuable.

In conclusion, whether a work of art is understandable to most people or not, is not a decisive factors to a valuable work. The most important element that make a piece of art unique is the essence and the function of the arts ----  what the arts want to reveal and what kind of thoughts the productor  want to convey.

硬柿子UID: 204138

Issue218  第1篇 开始限时，写完提纲后，G友们拍…拍…拍！………
------摘要------
作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：34分9秒     589 words
从2005年6月19日20时59分到2005年6月19日21时34分
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B1. Art 的定义—是人类知识和情感的有机组合，传达人类的情感、想象、传达人类关于世界的看法等等~~
B2. 是不是好的艺术，判断的标准之一是它是否起到了艺术的作用
A,娱乐人类
B，唤起人类的共同情感（举例：约翰，丹佛）
B3. 是否有价值谁来判断，是艺术家本身，还是别人。指出关键一点，就是艺术传达了艺术家的信息，即使不被理解，也可能是有价值的（举例： Van Gogh 和 Salvador Dali）

------题目------
In order for any work of art—whether film, literature, sculpture, or a song—to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.
------正文------
I fundamentally disagree with the speaker insofar as the value of a piece of art has nothing to do with whether it is understandable or not. To gauge whether a piece of art has merit or not, one should firstly clarify the essence and the function of it, and the standard by which people evaluate the work of art.

Although today the word art usually refers to the visual arts. The concept of what art is has continuously changed over centuries. Perhaps the most concise definition is its broadest------arts refer to all creative human endeavors. Man use arts to convey their emotion and imagination, to reflect their views of the world, to outlet their ideas about the relations between this world and human beings. Put the definition into simple words, the arts is the organic product of knowledge and emotion. It reflects the realistic and spiritual world of the human beings.

Firstly, whether a piece of art is a masterpiece is determined by its functions. One of the functions of the arts is that they provide pleasure. The most important function of songs, defined as classics, popular, or folk songs, is to entertain their audience, make them joyful, or remind them of the good old days. If a song can provide its listener sense of happy or other resonance, it can be deemed as a good art. Another function of the arts is that they present us with insight into what is eternal and universal. The art is born from society and an excellent piece of art should reflect the natures, values and trends of the society. John Denver, born in New Mexico in 1943, was a popular musician of the 1970's. His contributions to American culture extend far beyond the tender music. He is best known for, but stretched from environmentalism and philanthropy to a hearty interest in space songs. It was his ability to connect with listeners of all nationalities, ages that make John Denver one of the most beloved and influential recording artists of the 20th century. One of his best known songs ‘Take Me Home, Country Road’ is famous all over the world. Therefore, a good art is the art that can invoke the common thought of the people in spite that whether it understandable or not.

Secondly, when we pursue the value of a piece of art, we should make clear that who judge the arts------the maker, or the audiences, the viewers or anyone else. One of the essential points is that any kind of art, whether film, literature, sculpture or a song, are created by individuals, thus the arts must transfer what the maker want to express. The examples of Van Gogh and Salvador Dali can support this point of view. At the time of Van Gogh , few people can understand Van Gogh’s labeled master pieces, the Sunflowers. It is so strange that Van Gogh paint in such an unusual way of using colors. This piece of art presents us such a drab and flabby picture. But when taking Van Gogh l's experience into consideration, we will surprised to find out the confused and despond inner world of Van Gogh himself. Salvador Dali, who remains one of the best known artists of the modern era, due to his flamboyant personality and instantly recognizable painting style. He painted his products in a meticulous technique that impact a dream-like land scrapes, which are often filled with strange objects, such as crutch holding up the old women that graces one of his best known works. Although the works of Van Gogh and Dali are uneasy to understand, it can not prevent their works of arts to be viewed as valuable.

In conclusion, whether a work of art is understandable to most people or not, is not a decisive factor to a valuable work. The most important element that makes a piece of art unique is the essence and the function of the arts ---- what the arts want to reveal and what kind of thoughts the producer want to convey.