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Issue208  第2篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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作者：寄托家园作文版普通用户     共用时间：42分14秒     518 words
从2005年7月13日10时56分到2005年7月13日11时42分
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The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people.
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Different people's way of looking, dressing and acting vary a lot from each other in the different society.  People from different areas appear different because of their social ideas and values, however, nowadays world culture homogeneity underplay such differences anyway.

Admittedly, when we come to a strange place, the reason why we would feel strange is not the landscapes turn out to be different but that the way of people there look, dress and act is not the same way as we do. For example, we can exactly tell which country people are from according to their way of dress: French prefer the romantic style while Japanese dress formally; American love casual clothes while English dress in a gentle way. Such obvious appearances make themselves recognizable as a consequence.

There is no escaping the truth that the ideas and values of the whole society place a great influence on the way people behave. That is to say, the change of the society alters its people's appearance. When coming to this claim, there is no better example than the one with China's situation. At the time of institutional revolution, people are restrained by the strict rules, as a result of which, not only people's way of thinking and behaving but also their clothes to wear are too formal to make any diversity. When walking on the street, your seen color of the clothes would not be more than gray, green and blue. However, as the society's ideas and values change because of the nation's policy, modern Chinese people make big movement on reformation. Moreover, their living style changes too. People are totally free to choose what they prefer, no matter the way they dress or act. Chinese people are benefit from such changes by the reform of the society. To some extent, we may assert that observation of people's appearance and behavior makes some sense to help understand the society's ideas and values.

Nevertheless, as the trend of world culture homogeneity, the gap of different culture and different values seem to be erased. What is more, people all over the world share the same way of living and the mainstreams of society are more or less of the same mode too. Let us take people's clothes as an example. Blue jeans and T-shirt are prevalent in every corner of the world. People of whatever races and countries are attracted by its simple and casual characteristic, which make them a world wild vogue. And for instance, people are all taking Christmas Day and watching Hollywood movies. The more thoroughly people enter each other's culture, the more naturally they will share the spark essence while abandon those outdated ones. That will be an unchangeable tendency of the whole world in integrating distinct society's ideas and values.

From what has been discussed above, whether positive or negative, we may safely draw the conclusion that a society's ideas and values do not exactly coincide with each other in all aspects, which lead to people's various appearance. And we can judge a society’s ideas and values by seeing through their people’s interests and attitudes. However, such difference seems like to fade away within the trend of world culture homogeneity.

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Different people's way of looking, dressing and acting vary a lot from each other in the different society.  People from different areas appear different because of their social ideas and values, （都三个different啦！这2句需要精简！）however, nowadays world culture homogeneity underplay such differences anyway.

Admittedly, when we come to a strange place, the reason why we would feel strange is not the landscapes turn out to be different but that the way of people there look, dress and act is not the same way as we do（这个TS太绕了）. For example, we can exactly tell which country people are from according to their way of dress: French prefer the romantic style while Japanese dress formally; American love casual clothes while English dress in a gentle way. Such obvious appearances make themselves recognizable as a consequence. （这段也太短了吧）

There is no escaping the truth that the ideas and values of the whole society place a great influence on the way people behave. That is to say, the change of the society alters its people's appearance. When coming to this claim, there is no better example than the one with China's situation. At the time of institutional revolution, people are restrained by the strict rules, as a result of which, not only people's way of thinking and behaving but also their clothes to wear are too formal to make any diversity. When walking on the street, your seen color of the clothes would not be more than gray, green and blue（这正说明相反！你提这个例子反而驳斥了你的观点！）. However, as the society's ideas and values change because of the nation's policy, modern Chinese people make big movement on reformation. Moreover, their living style changes too. People are totally free to choose what they prefer, no matter the way they dress or act. Chinese people are benefit from such changes by the reform of the society. To some extent, we may assert that observation of people's appearance and behavior makes some sense to help understand the society's ideas and values.

Nevertheless, as the trend of world culture homogeneity, the gap of different culture and different values seem to be erased. What is more, people all over the world share the same way of living and the mainstreams of society are more or less of the same mode too. Let us take people's clothes as an example. Blue jeans and T-shirt are prevalent in every corner of the world. People of whatever races and countries are attracted by its simple and casual characteristic, which make them a world wild vogue. And for instance, people are all taking Christmas Day and watching Hollywood movies. The more thoroughly people enter each other's culture, the more naturally they will share the spark essence while abandon those outdated ones. That will be an unchangeable tendency of the whole world in integrating distinct society's ideas and values.

From what has been discussed above, whether positive or negative, we may safely draw the conclusion that a society's ideas and values do not exactly coincide with each other in all aspects, which lead to people's various appearance. And we can judge a society’s ideas and values by seeing through their people’s interests and attitudes. However, such difference seems like to fade away within the trend of world culture homogeneity.

感觉思路非常混乱。题目问的是外表是否反映IDEA。你要从是和不是2方面谈。
自由社会里是。而专制社会里不是。
When coming to this claim, there is no better example than the one with China's situation. At the time of institutional revolution, people are restrained by the strict rules, as a result of which, not only people's way of thinking and behaving but also their clothes to wear are too formal to make any diversity. When walking on the street, your seen color of the clothes would not be more than gray, green and blue
这就是外表无法表达内心的最好例子！应该单独成段！

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B1的内容还可以，就是短了点，其中的那个小排比写得有点儿像绕口令，呵呵，像romantic，gentle，formal，这样的词可以发展一下扣住attitude or interest 来写
B2个人认为逻辑上也是说得过去的，或者直接说就是没有问题的，A decide B=B reflect A
而且这种逻辑还相当不错，不过要是实在还觉得放心不下的话就非一点笔墨把这层逻辑关系说清楚，然而扣ideas and interest还是不很好
B3当然可以作为消除差异的原因和现在的趋势来写，但问题也是在于ideas and interest的强调，你这么写比较象消除culture的差异，不是思想上的差异

最大的问题是要正确的理解ideas and interest 不要把它等同于文化差异
这个题我也很头痛，有好的想法告诉我一下哈

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你总在提我应该注意扣题，看来这点的确做的不够，以后再写应该注意了。
呵呵，好，谢谢你哈~