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tomatopotatoUID: 129913

Issue 150 great many places that they have never visited. As a result, tourism will soon become obsolete.
【翻译】：
由于电视和全球范围内的计算机网络，人们现在可以熟悉很多以前从未涉足过的地方，其结果就是使得旅游变得过时了。
【提纲】：
1 电视和网络确实使大家欣赏到更多的美景，但是远没有达到熟悉的程度，不能代替亲身去的感觉
2 电视和网络为了美景做了广告
3  它们确实使大家收到了打击。
  The televisions and computer net trickle into china in 1970s, but in the 1990s, they flood in and render the traditional media - radio obsolete. The widespread of both technologies have staggered the imagination to the point where one wonders whether the world would be the same if these magic items are not around. Their strong influence is discernible in all walks of human life.Those who live in the distant Asian need not go out of their way or even leave their couches to know the every day news happening in North America, by the same token, they can obtain some information about the places they never visited.
   However, this information is not enough to be substitute for the precious experience in person. On TV set you can only see some vivid pictures such as some cascades or flowers; on the net you can read some critic or commentary on this beauty. But you can never fell them, touch them or smell them. These sensual feeling can only be achieved by the tourism. If you did not go to Beijing, you never truly appreciate the magnificent of Great Wall. Both media can only supply reader or watcher some words or pictures that can only constitute the basic concept about some place, which can only be completed by the tourism. In this sense, both media cannot retard the development of tourism.
    What is more, rather than undermine the prosperity of the tourism, both media, to a great extent, facilitate the development of tourism. In fact, many places resort to the media to enhance their fame in order to attract more tourists. The media introducing the places to the citizenry will definitely spark the interest among the people who coincidely watch the programs. In addition, it is often the case that world net and television will help people enjoy their holiday to the greater extent. For example, they can offer the maps, weather information and housing conditions around the sites you are to visit. All these information will go a long way for tourist. Therefore, the media and tourism are not mutually exclusively choices, instead they are mutually benefit.
    Admittedly, the media would reveal the myth of places to some extent, which would annoy many tourists who would prefer adventurous travel. But this is too rare and insufficient to convince us that the tourism will soon become obsolete for the sake of two media. The discard of tourism may come true in the distant future, but it never happen in the near future considering the great and impossible advancement required.
    Taking all the factors into consideration, we can easily refute the claim made in the statement and safely reach the conclusion that the two media can definitely a boon to the tourism rather than a curse as the author said.

[ 本帖最后由 staralways 于 2006-1-27 13:40 编辑 ]

智恩UID: 2160717

赞坐，晚点来看

kito9695UID: 209685

欢迎回来~~~新年快乐:p

jingjingtousUID: 2164820

欢迎归队！^_^

智恩UID: 2160717

1 电视和网络确实使大家欣赏到更多的美景，但是远没有达到熟悉的程度，不能代替亲身去的感觉
2 电视和网络为了美景做了广告
3  它们确实使大家收到了打击。
  The televisions and computer net trickle into china in 1970s, but in the 1990s, they flood in and render the traditional media - radio obsolete. The widespread of both technologies have staggered the imagination to the point where one wonders whether the world would be the same if these magic items are not around. Their strong influence is discernible in all walks of human life.Those who live in the distant Asian need not go out of their way or even leave their couches to know the every day news happening in North America, by the same token, they can obtain some information about the places they never visited. 【开头还是要简练点，我看了半天都没怎么找到中心】   

However, this information is not enough to be substitute for the precious experience in person. On TV set you can only see some vivid pictures such as some cascades 【第一次见这个单词也】or flowers; on the net you can read some critic or commentary on this beauty. But you can never fell them, touch them or smell them. These sensual feeling can only be achieved【acquired】 by the tourism. If you did【和后面的时态要一致】 not go to Beijing, you never truly appreciate the magnificent of Great Wall. Both media can only supply reader or watcher some words or pictures that can only constitute the basic concept about some place, which can only be completed by the tourism. In this sense, both media cannot retard the development of tourism.

    What is more, rather than undermine the prosperity of the tourism, both media, to a great extent, facilitate the development of tourism. In fact, many places resort to the media to enhance their fame in order to attract more tourists. The media introducing the places to the citizenry will definitely spark the interest among the people who coincidely watch the programs. In addition, it is often the case that world net and television will【去掉will，我觉得可以直接用现在时】 help people enjoy their holiday to the greater extent. For example, they can offer the maps, weather information and housing conditions around the sites you are to visit. All these information will go a long way for tourist. Therefore, the media and tourism are not mutually exclusively choices, instead they are【去掉】 mutually benefit.

    Admittedly, the media would reveal the myth of places to some extent, which would annoy many tourists who would prefer adventurous travel. 【这个方面我觉得不好说的，电视可能是揭示了一些地方的神秘和奥妙，但是也不会阻止探险者去探险，探险者是在探险的过程中才体会到神秘和奥妙的；越说越搞不清楚了，总之这个观点也可以；你还是再想想吧；我都有点昏了】But this is too rare and insufficient to convince us that the tourism will soon become obsolete for the sake of two media. The discard of tourism may come true in the distant future, but it never happen in the near future considering the great and impossible advancement required.

    Taking all the factors into consideration, we can easily refute the claim made in the statement and safely reach the conclusion that the two media can 【be】definitely a boon to the tourism rather than a curse【这个单词用得似乎不太恰当】 as the author said.

智恩UID: 2160717

对了，tomatopotato我看到你好像又加入了另一组？
你确定是要回来和我们一起写吗？

jingjingtousUID: 2164820

问题同上！

tomatopotatoUID: 129913

那个组进度很慢，而你们又跑的太快了，所以我两边都写

[ 本帖最后由 tomatopotato 于 2006-1-29 14:11 编辑 ]