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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and TV programs made in one’s own country are more interesting than those made in other countries.

The issue here is whether Movies and TV programs made in one’s own country are more interesting than those made in other countries. Some people hold the opinion that movies made in one’s own culture are no more interesting than the foreign ones. In my view, however, it is more prudent to claim that people prefer certain movies and TV program made in his or her culture based on individual life style and conflicting perspectives. My view can be greatly substantiated by the following discussions.

On the one hand, there is no denying that when people tend to take some time off from his or her chores for relaxation, they will always choose to watch movies and TV programs, which play a major role in mitigating tiredness and boredom from daily work. After all, different people might have different views of movies and TV programs. For example, in 1997 the famous movie Titanic, a Hollywood movie that depicts the well-known wreck event, received an all-time high success in the western world. Fascinated by the impressive love story in the movie, many people, especially teenagers, went to cinema to watch the movie over and over, wrote articles to comment on the movie, and even became loyal fans of the main actor and actress. On the contrary, in some religion cultures in center Asia, people thought the movie as a challenge to their male-dominated society and even to their moral beliefs. Consequently, it is pretty obvious that majority of people choose moves and TV programs according to their culture background, common sense and personal experience.

Furthermore, although there are subtitles, oversea movies are elusive to others whose mother language as that in oversea movies, while the native ones are very attractive and perceptible to the audience. When I was preparing TOEFL I spent one hour every day to watch the American movie “friends”, which is humorous and enchanting to me. But my parents contend that it means nothing to them.

On the other hand, with the advancement of media technology, movies and TV programs influenced people all over the world by altering their views of value, beauty and the world. People become more confident and seldom give up after watching the Forest Gump, they stop smoking and begin to do exercises after watching the TV programs about smoking ruins one’s health, and girls try hard to lose weight after actress in movies and television tend to be thinner and thinner.

In conclusion, issue that moves and TV programs made in one’s own country are more interesting than those made in other countries aroused much controversy. While in some cases, certain movies and TV programs received popular acceptance in both native and foreign countries, in many cases it will not. On the basis of my above discussion, I am quite confident to arrive at the conclusion that most people still insist to see movies and TV programs made by their own countries.

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8月12日交

09.08.01NA

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If you do not make sure other people (especially influential people or your employers) know about your strengths and accomplishments, you will never get successful in life

We take for granted that to compete with hundreds of rival, peoples in modern society have to influence others by showing his or her strengths and accomplishments. Nevertheless, does the fact inevitable indicates other possibilities? While I agree with the claim that presentation skills do important for displaying one’s strengthens, I find no empirical evidence to wholly accept the position that people can achieve future success only though give others an impression of strengths and accomplishments, which appears to be unconvincing in light of more persuasive assertion.

The primary reason for my view rests on the undeniable fact that history is replete with evidence of having the quality of personal perseverance, known as “never give up”, is the key to one’s success. Notables ranging from the story of Forest Gump and Michael Jordan come immediately to mind. On the one hand, consider the success of Forest Gump, a mentally retarded guy who ironically became a war hero and a millionaire by sticking to the spirit of “simply the best. On the other hand, let us take Michael Jordan into account. Michael won the crown of basketball by practice hard and earnestly. By the same token, the success of Michael Jordan does the same. Indeed, both cases illustrate the point that people made success by owing personal perseverance, but not by simply demonstrating strength and accomplishments to others, as many other similar cases do.

Another reason for my view it that having others know one’s strengths and accomplishments is just one facet of communication skill, which together with other important skills such as learning ability, team work, and etc. Empirical evidence supporting this reason is overwhelming. Mr. Yu Minghong, CEO of Beijing New Oriental Education & Technology group, have successfully built a most influential private university in China. While answering a journalist, Mr. Yu said that he made the success with his alumni including Mr. Wang Qiang and Mr. Xu Xiaoping, striving for their dream by working close together.

To oppose my view, you might point out that convincing others about the strengths and accomplishments offer people more chances to success. To be honest, I confess that expressing the strengths and accomplishments makes people have more chances to do business. However, without other basic skills such as knowledge in need, how can one ensure his or her future success even if having the chance of doing business?

To conclude, while in some cases certain people made life success by showing strengths and accomplishments, in many cases it will not. On the basis of my above discussion, I am quite confident to arrive at the conclusion that people should encouraged to enhance comprehensive capabilities so that they can make a life-long success.

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To oppose my view, you (论证的时候尽量不要用第二人称) might point out that convincing others about the strengths and accomplishments offer people more chances to success. To be honest, I confess that expressing the strengths and accomplishments makes people have more chances to do business. However, without other basic skills such as knowledge in need, how can one ensure his or her future success even if having the chance of doing business?

To conclude, while in some cases certain people made life success by showing strengths and accomplishments, in many cases it will not. On the basis of my above discussion, I am quite confident to arrive at the conclusion that people should encouraged to enhance comprehensive（这词用得好哈） capabilities so that they can make a life-long success.

总体而言结构清晰 而且用词十分丰富和准确 感觉你应该是考过GRE的 不过第二段最好develop一下 这样文章看起来会更好点。 还有 倒数第二段开头 To oppose my view 可以这样用的吗？ 没有见过 请赐教。还有strengths and accomplishments 最好拿东西替换掉。

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