1.30 独立作文 BY 弘

lanyouno2UID: 2649409

30分钟还是紧巴巴的，哎

Do you agree or disagree: people should live in the city or country all life instead of moving to another country.

Given the chance, ,majority people ,especially young men, would like to move to another city or country.However, others who hold the conventional concept believe that staying at a city and a county for their whole lives could inherit their ancestral excellent  tradition, such a their dialect, local unique culture , family spirit and so on. A s far as I am concerned, as one member of a new generation nowadays, I prefer to moving to another country rather than living the some city or country all life.

The idea that live in the city or state all their lives is somewhat understandable. A people’s special culture and language are still exist in the world today is mainly rely on their insistent  accomodation .However, in some respect, if all the citizens are living in a same city or country, that people would be hard to accept new or advanced views. Therefore, the city or a people will be difficult to develop their economic and improve their living standard, I don't think that this situation
could not accepted by all the nations over the world.

There are a number of reasons why I believe that we should go to another city or migrate to another country. One reason is that the immigrants will bring some new concept, when the new concept meets the local views that would produce a totally different mental world. Another reason is that, living different place during our lives, it is favorable for one culture to understand the other different culture, then our world would have more peace.

All in all, I agree with the opinion that people should moving another country in their lives. Opposition to living in the city or country for people’s entire life, I think, is mainly based on outmoded ideas of conservatism.

arlenezxyUID: 2487145

Given the chance, ,majority of people ,especially young men, would like to move to another city or country.However, others who hold the conventional concept(我感觉conception 比较顺吧） believe that staying at a city and a county for their whole lives could inherit（inherit 主语一般是人吧） their ancestral excellent  tradition, such as their dialect, local unique culture , family spirit and so on. A s far as I am concerned, as one member of a new generation nowadays, I prefer to(to 去掉，或者后面跟动词原型） moving to another country rather than living （in)the some city or country all life.

The idea that live in the city or state all their lives is somewhat understandable. A people’s special culture and language are still exist in the world today is mainly rely on their insistent  accomodation (这句话有语病，且表达意思有点问题） .However, in some respect, if all the citizens are living in a same city or country, that people would be hard to accept new or advanced views（it would be hard for people to accept...) . Therefore, the city or a people will be difficult to develop their economic and improve their living standard, I don't think that this situation3 T# T# E1 y, G/ {, F* Q  ?9 j
could not accepted by all the nations over the world.(语病，主语是什么？）

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There are a number of reasons why I believe that we should go to another city or migrate to another country. One reason is that the immigrants will bring some new concept, when the new concept meets the local views that would produce a totally different mental world. （主语？）Another reason is that, (by) living (in) different places during our lives, it is favorable for one culture to understand the other different culture, then our world would have more peace.

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All in all, I agree with the opinion that people should moving another country in their lives. Opposition to (去掉，不然意思就反了吧）living in the city or country for people’s entire life, I think, is mainly based on outmoded ideas of conservatism.

arlenezxyUID: 2487145

还没到11点分配，lz不介意的话可以帮我改一下，给点意见。多一个人改也好的。互相学习
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