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cocojamesUID：2797094

Data: 7.3
Id: cocojames
Topic:In order to solve the problems of the present and future, it is necessary to understand the
past.

cocojamesUID：2797094

When it comes to how can a person to be achivement in his or her field in terms of considering the importance of present, future and past, people's view are quite different and divergent.
I have to admit that some people's views that the present and future play a vital role in paving way to success, however, it ca not deny that past plays more significant role in the accomplishment, regarding of it representing as a stepping stone for the present and future. All in all, for the purpose of successful in one's dream, one should draw more attention to the valuable past, and several specific reasons are given below.

First and foremost, the first argument and the most expressed one is that history presents certain hints for us to know what and where the present sources from, consequently, inspires us predict where and how the present will go. An apt illustration can be rightly found in Geology. A proverb goes in Geology is that history is the key to present, which is the basic principle for geologists to progress their work, similarly in Archeology. It is a fact nobody can deny that no one among us has experienced things ten thousand years before present, even one hundred years ago, thus, it is impetus for us to seek for some hints from past, and combining our brillant thought, to deduce the paleoclimate in the past.

In addition, another reason why I agree with the argument that past overweigh the present and future can be summarized that through learning from the past can make us more brilliant, avoiding repeating certain mistakes. History is replete with many evidence to illustrate this idea, one case in point can be given that the current financial crisis in 2009, which has given a lesson to most of the countries in the world. To some extent, global economy has brought enormous benefits for most of countries and association, however, the explosion of the disadvantages of the Capitalism could spontaneously expands its disastrous effect to all over the world through International trade or Internet or other else.

From what I have mentioned above, in order to better understand the present and past, it is indispensible to focus on past as for the above discussed advantages of past, including past conducting as a key to present and future, and past offering vivid lessons which teach us a lot.

mitchelllcUID：2793083

When it comes to how can a person to be achivement(achievement拼错了~) in his or her field in terms of considering the importance of present, future and past, people's view are quite different and divergent.
I have to admit that some people's views that the present and future play a vital role in paving way(paving the way) to success, however, it ca(?) not deny that past plays more significant role in the accomplishment, regarding of it representing as a stepping stone for the present and future. All in all, for the purpose of successful in one's dream, one should draw more attention to the valuable past, and several specific reasons are given below.

First and foremost, the first argument and the most expressed one is that history presents certain hints for us to know what and where the present sources from, consequently, inspires us predict where and how the present will go. An apt illustration can be rightly found in Geology. A proverb goes in Geology is that history is the key to present, which is the basic principle for geologists to progress their work, similarly in Archeology. It is a fact nobody can deny that no one among us has experienced things ten thousand years before present, even one hundred years ago, thus, it is impetus(impetus是名词) for us to seek for some hints from past, and combining our brillant thought, to deduce the paleoclimate in the past.

In addition, another reason why I agree with the argument that past overweigh the present and future can be summarized that through learning from the past can make us more brilliant, avoiding repeating certain mistakes. History is replete with many evidence to illustrate this idea, (one前面是句号)one case in point can be given that the current financial crisis in 2009, which has given a lesson to most of the countries in the world. To some extent, global economy has brought enormous benefits for most of countries and association, however, the explosion of the disadvantages of the Capitalism could spontaneously expands(expand没有s) its disastrous effect to all over the world through International trade or Internet or other else.

From what I have mentioned above, in order to better understand the present and past, it is indispensible to focus on past as for the above discussed advantages of past, including past conducting as a key to present and future, and past offering vivid lessons which teach us a lot.

lxg198607UID：2564115

When it comes to how can a person to be（gain更好点吧） achivement in his or her field in terms of （个人感觉这个可以不要）considering the importance of present, future and past, people's view are quite different and divergent.8 l' u! h: S1 l: _9 ^" d  ~（）
I have to admit that some people's views that the present and future play a vital role in paving way to success,（感觉这句跟主旨不搭啊） however, it ca not deny that past plays more significant role in the accomplishment, regarding of it representing as a stepping stone for the present and future. All in all, for the purpose of （being）successful in one's dream, one should draw more attention to the valuable past, and several specific reasons are given below.
First and foremost, the first argument and the most expressed one is that history presents certain hints for us to know what and where the present sources from, consequently, inspires us predict where and how the present will go. An apt illustration can be rightly found in Geology. A proverb goes in Geology is that history is the key to present, which is the basic principle for geologists to progress their work, similarly in Archeology. It is a fact nobody can deny that no one(感觉有点累赘) among us has experienced things ten thousand years before present, even one hundred years ago, thus, it is impetus for us to seek for some hints from past, and combining our brillant thought, to deduce the paleoclimate in the past.8 n- h3 I1 P. @$ c6 Z
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In addition, another reason why I agree with the argument that past overweigh the present and future can be summarized that through learning from the past can make us more brilliant, avoiding repeating certain mistakes. History is replete with many evidence to illustrate this idea, one case in point can be given that the current financial crisis in 2009, which has given a lesson to most of the countries in the world. To some extent, global economy has brought enormous benefits for most of countries and association, however, the explosion of the disadvantages of the Capitalism could spontaneously expands its disastrous effect to all over the world through International trade or Internet or other else.（ 这个经济学的例子有点深奥的。。）  （）F% ]6 l% c  D$ l  {3 X/ B$ |+ \( _
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From what I have mentioned above, in order to better understand the present and past, it is indispensible to focus on past as for the above discussed advantages of past, including past conducting as a key to present and future, and past offering vivid lessons which teach us a lot.

cocojamesUID：2797094

:loveliness:呵呵，谢谢各位大虾为我改作，继续努力涂鸦。
嗯？我好像没看到我应该给那位童鞋改作，还请赐教，不然我要光明正大的偷懒了咯，呵呵
对了，7月5号的作文题目好像还没出来哦

cocojamesUID：2797094

When it comes to the issue whether it is more important to reserve land for human beings than for endangered animals or not cannot be easily weighed by one aspect. People's views are quite different and divergent. From personal perspective, I hold that people should reserve land; what's more, people have the responsibility to reserve extra land for the endangered animals while concerning those endangered animals' weak competition in the whole ecology environment.
To begin with, the first argument and the one most expressed and vociferously one, is that a food chain, which is mutually coherent each other, objectively exists in the natural environment. Considering that the endangered animals and people are both involved in this food chain, either the extinct of the endangered animal or the disappearing of people, it might be a disaster for the whole food chain, consequently, which will cause the unbalance of ecology. History is replete with many evidence to illustrate this point, one case in point can be given that the epidemic in tremendous fish occurred in Indian, due to that  so many totters are killed. Similarly, it is no deny that the extinct of endangered animals might bring about certain potential risk to people.
What's more, another reason why I assert that people should reserve land mainly can be summarized that people have the responsibility to protect those endangered animals. It is mainly because that to the extent that the current situation of those endangered animals is largely caused by people's misbehavior, such as deforestation, desertification, and landslide and so on. Morally speaking, people should assume their duty to save those endangered and risk situation, and establish a complete ecology system for all species. What's more, our generations are looking forward to our efforts we make. We are required by our generations to leave them a complete even better world to them.

From what I have mentioned above, I definitely assert that people should reserve the land, not only for themselves but also for those endangered animals, through this effort, people as a species in the world builds up a paradise on the earth.

cocojamesUID：2797094

Nowadays has witnessed a modern society characterized with speedy industrial growth, benefit-oriented value, which, to some extent, has expanded into the pure ivory school. Parent's eager to impetus their children to be a talent are so strong that some of them assert that 11 months' study would be helpful to children's study. However, from personal perspective, I totally don't agree with their statement, considering the real purpose of education is to cultivate a completed person but a book-reader.
To begin with, the implicit rational behind this statement seems that excellent in studying pales paramount importance compared with other skills such as social skills, honesty and team work spirit. Actually, this statement belongs to a kind of score-oriented education system, in which students are being so stuffed with an indigestible mass of materials that he has no time to draw on his own resources, to use his own mind for analyzing and synthesizing, and evaluating this material.  
What's more, the most significant thing are to determine what the education is and what the purpose of education is. Summarily speaking, education is to explain nature, teach students how to differentiate between truth and probity and chicanery, cultivate knowledgeable and well-rounded person. And every one should be taught life skills, logical thinking, analysis, creative problem solving rather than just knowledge on books, all these skills are more important survive freely in the complex and rapid change. An apt illustration should be mentioned a current common phenomenon that tremendous students are sent to training centers to learn dancing, guitar, konghu and drawing and so forth, by their parents. However, seldom students were required whether they like these training or not, which mainly the intention of their parents. What's more, a high score obtained should not be judged from how many hours students spend on the class studying, but relies on how efficient a student learn in the regulated hour, and how many and how deep a student keep those knowledge in his or her mind.

From what I have mentioned above, student should not be required to attend for as long as 11 months of a year, instead of that, student should pay more attention to the efficient study and focus on social practice and self cultivation of personality. Only through these, can one be a well-rounded person and does a great contribution to their country land.

cocojamesUID：2797094

Modern society is fraught with speedy industrial growth, benefited-oriented rules and apathy; people who feel depressed are inclined to turn to films to relieve one's feelings. When it comes to whether it better to watch serious movies or movies that could amuse and entertain people or not, people's view are divergent and complicated on such a complicated and controversial issue. To a degree, I have to commit that this topic is on the correct philosophical side of this issue, in sofar as complication of teaching. Nevertheless, this topic should not excessively extend this issue to embrace the extent which serious movies are more helpful than entertaining movies, when it comes to relaxing. From personal perspective, the final judgments should depend on a case-by-case analysis.

To begin with, the first argument, the most expressed often is that serious movies can teach people a lesson through certain meaningful, even some sort of tragedies. As an old saying goes, those unforgettable things are most revealed by the destroying of beautiful things, which leave people a deep impression. History is replete with so many examples; one case in point should be involved Shakespeare’s tragic drama, which has brought about so many memories to tremendous readers. On the other hand, those so-called serious movies, to some extent, would enlighten people through some depicting histories such as documentary films. A documentary film which tells us the history of the present things, facilitates us to better understand how things go on like this

In addition, a movie that amuses and entertains people would be a better way to relief oneself. Nowadays has witnessed a rapid economic growth and speedy life pace, people, experiencing a much more depressed life than ever before, are destined to find a way to release their own emotions. Thus, a funny movie becomes their choice to instantly let them forget those terrible and depressed things. An old saying goes, smiling makes one ten years younger. In terms of biology, smiling can relief the nerve, and make one's muscle sport. Currently, a trend has populated that young adult are more likely to watch cartoons than serious movies after returning back home from office, through which, to a maximum degree, one relax themselves and then have good sleep.

From what I have mentioned above, both serious movies and movies that amuse and entertain people are helpful to people. However, as to transmitting and conveying knowledge, serious movies tend to be more helpful than the latter one, while the movies that amuse and entertain people are more helpful in term of relaxing people, respectively.

langtianrinuanUID：2810236

8# cocojames
7.13作业
By cocojames

Modern society is fraught with speedy industrial growth, benefited-oriented rules and apathy; people who feel depressed are inclined to turn to films to relieve one's feelings. When it comes to whether or not it’s better to watch serious movies or movies that could amuse and entertain people or not, people's views are divergent and complicated on such a complicated and controversial issue. To a degree, I we have to commit that this topic is on the correct philosophical side of this the issue, in so far as complication of teaching(这个没看懂，complication常用的两个含义是并发症和困难，复杂的常用complicacy。复杂的教学？). Nevertheless, this topic should not excessively extend this the issue to embrace the extent which serious movies are more helpful than entertaining movies, when it comes to relaxing. (这句话想要表达什么，也不是太理解)From personal perspective, the final judgments should depend on a case-by-case analysis.

To begin with, the first argument, and the most common expressed expression often is that serious movies can teach people a lesson(意思是给某人一个教训，用在这里不是太贴切) through certain meaningful （这里缺一个名词）, even some sort of tragedies. As an old saying goes, those unforgettable things are mostly revealed by the destroying of beautiful things, which will leave people a deep impression. History is replete with so many examples; one case in point should be involved Shakespeare’s tragic drama, which has brought about so many memories to tremendous readers. On the other hand, those so-called serious movies, to some extent, would enlighten people through some depicting histories such as documentary films. A documentary film which tells us the history of the present things, would facilitates us to better understanding on how things go on like this。

In addition, a movie that amuses and entertains people would be a better way to relief relieve oneself. Nowadays has witnessed a rapid economic growth and speedy life pace, people, experiencing a much more depressed life than ever before, are destined to find a way to release their own emotions. Thus, a funny movie would becomes their choice to instantly let them forget those terrible and depressed things. An old saying goes(前文有过，试着另外的表达，比如according to an old saying), smiling makes one ten years younger. In terms of biology, smiling can reliefve the nerve, and make one's muscle sport(relax one’s muscle?). Currently, a trend has been populated populating that young adults are more likely to watch cartoons than serious movies after returning back home from office, through which, to a maximum degree(发现你很喜欢说在很大程度上，变着法子的用，前文已经用过两三次了，个人觉得不要用得太多，一方面会使你的句子都很冗长，另外一方面，比如在这里反而使得你的观点显得没有依据，你前文并没有论证这种方式是最大程度能放松的方式，贸然得出这个结论，显然不太合适), one relax themselves and then have a good sleep.

From what I have mentioned above, both serious movies and movies that amuse and entertain people are helpful to people. However, as to transmitting and conveying knowledge, serious movies tend to be more helpful than the latter ones, while the movies that amuse and entertain people are more helpful in term of relaxing people, respectively(这个与第一句话重复了，建议或者换种不同的表达或者干脆删除).

建议：
1、你的语言和表达很好，多样性和高级词汇掌握得很不错。准确性我不敢说，因为显然我不是你那个层次的，惭愧的是很多表达我甚至第一次见。
2、句型。显然你很擅长长句、复杂句，大篇幅的长句、复杂句。但个人觉得长句、复杂句可能能够很准确地表达观点，但是读起来就远没有短句那么干脆、利索、清晰，有力。所以建议主题句、主旨句等阐释观点的句子尽量用短句。另外，有些表达或者说句型，一段中用1句，全文下来用2、3句就好，不然反而觉得句式变化不够了。
3.、观点的展开和发展。连接词用得蛮多，蛮多样的，但是感觉还不够自然，有点为用而用的感觉。分论点的观点还蛮清晰的，论证的逻辑主线也很清楚，但是第一段个人觉得，要是再直奔主题些会更好。第1段中间有两句有点irrelevant的感觉，建议文章不要写与主题关系不大的句子，如果非写才能限定你的讨论范围，简单用短语带过即可。
   

jjooyyUID：2704028

Modern society is fraught with speedy industrial growth, benefited-oriented rules and apathy; people who feel depressed are inclined to turn to films to relieve one's feelings. When it comes to whether it better to watch serious movies or movies that could amuse and entertain people or not, people's view are divergent and complicated on such a complicated and controversial issue. To a degree, I have to commit that this topic is on the correct philosophical side of this issue, in sofar as complication of teaching. Nevertheless, this topic should not excessively extend this issue to embrace the extent which serious movies are more helpful than entertaining movies, when it comes to relaxing. From personal perspective, the final judgments should depend on a case-by-case analysis.  汗，狂汗，这是AW模板吧。。模板什么的，尽量别用。。思维也不对。。

To begin with, the first argument, the most expressed often is that serious movies can teach people a lesson through certain meaningful, even some sort of tragedies. As an old saying goes， those unforgettable things are most revealed by the destroying of beautiful things, which leave people a deep impression. History is replete with so many examples; one case in point should be involved Shakespeare’s tragic drama, which has brought about so many memories to tremendous readers. On the other hand, those so-called serious movies, to some extent, would enlighten people through some depicting histories such as documentary films. A documentary film which tells us the history of the present things, facilitates us to better understand how things go on like this2 P  z8 L2 c: v1 G

In addition, a movie that amuses and entertains people would be a better way to relief oneself. Nowadays has witnessed a rapid economic growth and speedy life pace, people, experiencing a much more depressed life than ever before, are destined to find a way to release their own emotions. Thus, a funny movie becomes their choice to instantly let them forget those terrible and depressed things. An old saying goes, smiling makes one ten years younger. In terms of biology, smiling can relief the nerve, and make one's muscle sport. Currently, a trend has populated that young adult are more likely to watch cartoons than serious movies after returning back home from office, through which, to a maximum degree, one relaxes themselves and then have(has) good sleep.4 w1 ^6 J. M, q, I

From what I have mentioned above, both serious movies and movies that amuse and entertain people are helpful to people. However, as to transmitting and conveying knowledge, serious movies tend to be more helpful than the latter one, while the movies that amuse and entertain people are more helpful in term of relaxing people, respectively.

toefl is testing us for using English, not for thinking problems, as GRE do.
建议lz去看看托福的范文，看看他们好在哪里，主要是写语言～一般要有倾向性！

cocojamesUID：2797094

:loveliness:  谢谢langtianrinuan和jjooyy辛苦的劳动。

cocojamesUID：2797094

Nowadays has wittnessed a debated trend of people transfering from one continent to another continent, from one country to another country, and from city to country or from country to city. When it comes to whether people should stay at the country or city all life or transfer from one place to another place, people's views are quite divergent and different on such a complicated and controversial issue. From my point of view, this behavior of transferring or staying at one place should mostly depend on the macroecronomy and polictics background at that time, rather than be determined by individuals' preferences or intentions, due to that individuals' decisions and intentions would be influenced by macroeconomy and changing situations, to a great degree. The following two revolutions would be the aptest examples to illustrate this point.To begin with, the emergence of machine-production substituting hand-production in the Industrial Revolution in 1840s boomed factories' output and facilitated farmers releasing from farms, then pushing into the line of migrating to city where farmers obtained a job to living a life. In this way, Industrial Revolution cause urbanization and population transferring from country to city, which does originate from people's interior mind, but is triggered by the current situation. In present China, China is also experiencing a unpredecence phenomenon, farmers imigrating from country to city, who are so-called imigrant workers. Since carrying out the policy of Reform and Openning-up, China's economy boosting, requires a plenty of labor forces, especially for the third indurstry. Above all, generally speaking, it is ecocomic factor that forces people moving from country to city, but not one's own preferrence.
In addition, the arrival of the Third Techological Revolution in the early 20th century, rapid development of digital and imformation technology has futher speed up the pace of globalizational economic development. More and more people, especially the poors, are still pushing into the municipity, while more and more people return to the rural, to build vilas to enjoy the nature, especially the richs, mainly because that the enviromental problems in municipality have came out, to a maximum scope, such as pollutant emissions from vehicles, solid wasted discharged from enormous factories, and sharp decreasing in grean plants. What's more, people living in city feel greater and greater pressions from work, family and so on. Finally, people suffering a tension for along time would seek for a way to relive themselves, and returning to the nature definitely becomes their best choice to relax. All in all, it is changing situation that compels people move out from city to country, but not one's own decision.
From what I have mentioned above, it is not reasonable to come into conclusion that people should determine where they prefer to live. However, it is the microeconomy and chaging situations that judge where people should move to city or move to country.

lxg198607UID：2564115

Nowadays has wittnessed a debated trend of people transfering from one continent to another continent, from one country to another country, and from city to country or from country to city. When it comes to whether people should stay at the country or city all life or transfer from one place to another place, people's views are quite divergent and different on such a complicated and controversial issue. From my point of view, this behavior of transferring or staying at one place should mostly depend on the macroecronomy and polictics background at that time, rather than be determined by individuals' preferences or intentions, due to that individuals' decisions and intentions would be influenced by macroeconomy and changing situations, to a great degree. The following two revolutions would be the aptest examples to illustrate this point.To begin with, the emergence of machine-production substituting hand-production in the Industrial Revolution in 1840s boomed factories' output and facilitated farmers releasing from farms, then pushing into the line of migrating to city where farmers obtained a job to living a life. In this way, Industrial Revolution cause urbanization and population transferring from country to city, which does originate from people's interior mind, but is triggered by the current situation. In present China, China is also experiencing a unpredecence（unpredencent） phenomenon, farmers imigrating from country to city, who are so-called imigrant workers. Since carrying out the policy of Reform and Openning-up, China's economy boosting, requires a plenty of labor forces, especially for the third indurstry. Above all, generally speaking, it is ecocomic factor that forces people moving from country to city, but not one's own preferrence. , c2 M- d# F. M
In addition, the arrival of the Third Techological Revolution in the early 20th century, rapid development of digital and imformation technology has futher speed up the pace of globalizational economic development. More and more people, especially the poors, are still pushing into the municipity, while more and more people return to the rural, to build vilas to enjoy the nature, especially the richs, mainly because that the enviromental problems in municipality have came out, to a maximum scope, such as pollutant emissions from vehicles, solid wasted discharged from enormous factories, and sharp decreasing in grean plants. What's more, people living in city feel greater and greater pressions(pressure) from work, family and so on. Finally, people suffering a tension for a long time would seek for a way to relive themselves, and returning to the nature definitely becomes their best choice to relax. All in all, it is changing situation that compels people move out from city to country, but not one's own decision.
From what I have mentioned above, it is not reasonable to come into conclusion that people should determine where they prefer to live. However, it is the microeconomy and chaging situations that judge where people should move to city or move to country.
文章不错，例子写得很好。。

cocojamesUID：2797094

7.24
Nowadays with the speedy development of economy, people's daily life has been great advanced, completement of the transportation makes numerous convenience to people, however, also brings about tremendous negative effects to people, such as people getting more and more unhealthy due to lack of excersing. When it comes to whether sports teach a person a lesson of life should not depend on one aspect. People's view are quite divergent and complicated. From personal respective, I maintain that sports do great good to us not only to the aspect of strenghthing body, but also broaden mind.

To begin with,  as an old saying goes, "life lies in the movement". everything in the world is keeping moving, once they were still, they are definitely to be die. How can image the water on the earth keep obsolutely stable, what a mess the world would turn to be. No water in the astomosphere, people can not inspire; no water from the rivers and streams, vegetables and fruits can not grow any more. It's no need to last long time that people, and all other lives on the world would die, then every species on the earth extinct from the earth.

What's more, specifically to person, no one can deny that sports can improve metabolism, strength the body immunity, and finally prolong the life span. The example of Olympic Games and World Cup are the apt illustrations. Yaoming, the world famous super star show a great brilliant show to the world in the Olympic Games held in Beijing in 2008, his strong body and strong determation should be attribute to his frequent sports.

Last but not the least, doing sports render people an optimistic view of life and positive outlooks of life. Running in the morning provides people a good mood for the whole day, which make people have a fresh air and watch beatiful and clean scenery in the morning. A short time walking after the supper would make people feel quite calm, forgetting those terrible things all behind the head. From what I have mentioned above, sports do tell people about the meaning of life. First, keeping moving make the possibility of live exsiting on the world. Also, sports builds up strong body through overcoming and preventing diseases. Finally, sports offers a good emotion to people, changing people's outlooks of life and so on.

cocojamesUID：2797094

7月27日
(09.01.17 )Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits

With rapid development of technology science and mass media, people would obtain more opportunities to encounter with numerous mass media, such as television, magzines, and Internet, similarily, more chance to approach to variety of advertisements, which is regarded as the basic source of financial support for mass media. When it comes to whether advertisements is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits, people's views are divergent and complicated on such a controversial issue. From my personal view, advertisments have objectively influence person's eating habits to a great extent, especially for those children who do not possess ability to distinguish its disadvantages and advantages, as well as young lady while being obssessing with the good body figure in the magazine.
To begin with, advertisements is the most significant cause of children's unhealthy eating habits. Business commercial advertisements aimed at children advertise food with little or no nutritional value such as sugared cereats, soda and fast-food meals. The advertisement feature popular cartoon charactrs, which entice children more. The images in computer games also expose children to junk food. Advertisers are using coupons, in-store events and even organized word of mouth campaigns to get children to get their parents to buy the products. Those advertisements not only influence children's request of their parents, but also influnce their short term eating habits and comsumption patterns.

In addition, advertisements would definitely influence young women's the unhealty eating
habits. Research now shows supermodel figure or the "ideal" thin woman reflected in magzine.
These young women, obsessed with their own body image, would tend to eat more.
Interestingly, those with a more balanced healthy body image tend to eat less. "I am not
sure why we found the reverse but possibly because of stress...women obsessed with their
appearance, see the idealized image and think about their own body never become like those
supermodels, so they turn to more food." Lily, graduate student at the University of New
South Wales. Therefore, advertisements in magzines and televisions might force young women
turn to unhealty eating habits.

From what I have mentioned above, advertisements are the most paramount role in leading
unhealthy eating habits. For children, advertisements provide some little or no nutritional
food and bad comsumption values to children, considering this, parents have the duty to
teach and decide for children what kinds of food children should have and to help them get
into a good eating habits. For young women, advertisements offer them a certain press to
lose weight, reversely, young women tend to eat more and become more and more unbalanced
diet. For this, young women should be more rational and objective to those advertisements.