Issue159 欢迎拍砖，有拍必回！

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Issue 159 我的第五篇，感觉好写些，仍然无法限时！奈何奈何！！欢迎拍砖，有拍必回！

issue 159
"The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds."
It is true that machines are tools of human minds. But will the human mind always be superior to machines as the speaker asserts. As far as I am concerned, I believe that both of the human mind and machines have their own advantages. The relationship between them is complicated and it is no need for one to be superior to the other completely.

To begin with, we human being, are the highest form of living creature in at least the earth. Owning to the power of our minds, we, who are weaker than tiger, run slowly than horse, can not fly as do birds, eventually become the unquestionable ruler of the earth. We drive automobiles, pilot planes, launch rockets and run computers. No matter how large and how complicated and how powerful these machines are, we are the master at all time. We give commends and machines follow it. If we are not satisfy with a machine, we can change it and add it with new functions and make it robust than ever before. It seems that we can do whatever we want to do. All in all, we are the master, machines servants. So it is tempting to assume that the human mind is always superior to machines which are made under the instruction of the human mind. Unfortunately, this assumption fails to recognize two facts which I will discuss as below.

Firstly, although we have such a dignity role in the world, it does not necessary mean that the human mind is definitely superior to machines in all aspects. The human mind does have its limitations. For example, let us add integers from one to one hundred. It took at least several minutes for our mathematics genius Gauss to give a right answer, not mention to us ordinary men. As to computer, however, it will not need just one second to finish this job. It is hard for us to recite even one book while it is just a piece of cake for a computer to reserve all the information of a whole library. In 1997, computer Deep Blue defeated Kasparov who was the reigning world chess champion at that time. So when we confront with a computer, how can we say that the human mind is superior to it?

Secondly, if machines are inferior to the human mind, then why do we make them? Is it just because machines can lift more weight, run faster or act more accurately than we can? Of cause it is, but that is not comprehensive. Machine can think as we do, but in a different manner which we can’t. In fact, machine now play such an important role in all aspect of our daily life that even we ourselves could not replace it. For example, without computer, an intelligent machine, we can even hardly manage a large mall. Without computer, we can hardly go on with most our scientific research. Without computer, we can never send human being out to the space. Nowadays we rely increasingly to machines not only for their peerless strength but also for their mighty mind.

To sum up, as to the human mind and machines, it is unwise to say that one is always superior to the other. They all have their own advantages against each other. What we shall do is to make full use of their advantages and offset their shortcomings.

[ Last edited by staralways on 2005-8-5 at 08:35 ]

udoUID：2114276

占座，明天我不上班，我给你改完再睡觉
btw，gaomou这个名字不是我建议的，估计amanda写作文写晕乎了。分不清楚咱俩啦。呵呵

不过，咱们队里还有cityriverson呢，你没把他的id排进去啊，呵呵。挺费心思的吧

[ Last edited by udo on 2005-8-5 at 03:55 ]

udoUID：2114276

It is true that machines are tools of human minds. But will the human mind always be superior to machines as the speaker asserts. As far as I am concerned, I believe that both of the human mind and machines have their own advantages. The relationship between them is complicated and it is no need for one to be superior to the other completely.

To begin with, we human being, are the highest form of living creature in at least the earthat least in the earth . Owning to the power of our minds, we, who are weaker than tiger, run slowly shower than horse, can not cannot fly as do birds, eventually become the unquestionable ruler of the earth. We drive automobiles, pilot planes, launch rockets and run computers. No matter how large and how complicated and how powerful these machines are, we are the master at all time all the time. We give commends commandsand machines follow it. If we are not satisfy with a machine, we can change it and add it with new functions and make it robust than ever before. It seems that we can do whatever we want to do. All in all, we are the master, machines servants. So it is tempting to assume that the human mind is always superior to machines which are made under the instruction of the human mind. Unfortunately, this assumption fails to recognize two facts which I will discuss as below.

Firstly, although we have such a dignity role in the world, it does not necessary mean that the human mind is definitely superior to machines in all aspects. The human mind does have its limitations. For example, let us add integers from one to one hundred. It took at least several minutes for our mathematics genius Gauss to give a right answer, not mention tono mention of
us ordinary men. As to computer, however, it will not need just one second to finish accomplish
this job. It is hard for us to recite even one book while it is just a piece of cake for a computer to reserve all the information of a whole library. In 1997, computer Deep Blue defeated Kasparov who was the reigning world chess champion at that time. So when we confront with a computer, how can we say that the human mind is superior to it?

Secondly, if machines are inferior to the human mind, then why do we make them? Is it just because machines can lift more weight, run faster or actcalculate
more accurately than we can? Of cause it is, but that is not comprehensive. Machine can think as we do, but in a different manner which we can’t. In fact, machine now play such an important role in all aspect of our daily life that even we ourselves could not replace it. For example, without computer, an intelligent machine, we can even hardly manage a large mall. Without computer, we can hardly go on with most our scientific research. Without computer, we can never send human being out to the space. Nowadays we rely increasingly to machines not only for their peerless strength but also for their mighty mind.这句小结句不合适，段内没有论述machines' mighty mind


To sum up, as to the human mind and machines, it is unwise to say that one is always superior to the other. They all have their own advantages against each other. What we shall do is to make full use of their advantages and offset their shortcomings.

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[ Last edited by udo on 2005-8-5 at 04:36 ]

udoUID：2114276

建议你下次写8月里的高频题

ouymUID：2109118

感谢udo!

amanda1011UID：2106668

"The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds."


It is true that machines are tools of human minds. But will the human mind always be superior to machines as the speaker asserts.（问号） As far as I am concerned, I believe that both of the human mind and machines have their own advantages. The relationship between them is complicated and it is no need for one to be superior to the other completely.（这句好怪啊。用there be句型吧？）

To begin with, we human being（s）, are the highest form of living creature（s） in at least the earth（on earth，in the earth就到土里去了吧？）. Owning to the power of our minds, we, who are weaker than tiger（s）, run slowly than horse（s）, can not fly as do birds, eventually become the unquestionable ruler of the earth. We drive automobiles, pilot planes, launch rockets and run computers. No matter how large and how complicated and how powerful these machines are, we are the master at all time. We give commends（commands） and machines follow it（them）. If we are not satisfy（satisfied） with a machine, we can change it and add it with new functions and make it robust than ever before. It seems that we can do whatever we want to do. All in all, we are the master, machines servants. So it is tempting to assume that the human mind is always superior to machines which are made under the instruction of the human mind. Unfortunately, this assumption fails to recognize two facts which I will discuss as below.（这段几个排比真不错！）

Firstly, although we have such a dignity role in the world, it does not necessary（necessarily） mean that the human mind is definitely superior to machines in all aspects. The human mind does have its limitations. For example, let us add integers from one to one hundred. It took at least several minutes for our mathematics（mathematical） genius Gauss to give a right answer, not mention to（not to mention for） us ordinary men. As to computer, however, it will not need just one second to finish this job. It is hard for us to recite even one book while it is just a piece of cake for a computer to reserve all the information of a whole library. In 1997, computer Deep Blue defeated Kasparov who was the reigning world chess champion at that time. So when we confront with a computer, how can we say that the human mind is superior to it?（这段举了很多不错的例子，不过关键的原因没有点出来，到底计算机什么地方比我们强呢？其实你的三个例子分别是说明：处理速度比人脑快，存储量大，第三个例子个人觉得不好说，因为深蓝的程序是针对Kasparov写的，确切的原因就不好描述了。甚至拿来举反例更好。建议每个例子都配上一句，来点出究竟什么地方强，做为这段的几个分论点，这样即使最后一句你不来个反问，判官应该也很清楚，你用事例论证了machines在哪些方面比人强大。用一句反问，反而有点强词夺理的味道。）

Secondly, if machines are inferior to the human mind, then why do we make them? Is it just because machines can lift more weight, run faster or act more accurately than we can? Of cause it is, but that is not comprehensive. Machine can think as we do, but in a different manner which we can’t. In fact, machine now play such an important role in all aspect of our daily life that even we ourselves could not replace it. For example, without computer, an intelligent machine, we can even hardly manage a large mall. Without computer, we can hardly go on with most （of）our scientific research. Without computer, we can never send human being（s） out to the space. Nowadays we rely increasingly to（on） machines not only for their peerless strength but also for their mighty mind.（同意udo关于末句的意见。另外，这段论点太散了，没看出一个重点来，前面半段似乎说机器能做我们做不了的事，后面半段又转到说我们不能没有机器，选一个点来展开吧。否则这段的内容就有更上断重复的嫌疑。因为你所谓的没有机器我们就不能……也只是泛泛而谈，原因何在呢？）

To sum up, as to the human mind and machines, it is unwise to say that one is always superior to the other. They all have their own advantages against each other. What we shall do is to make full use of their advantages and offset their shortcomings.

ouymUID：2109118

自己又仔仔细细地看了一遍，感觉这篇的结构不清楚，是最失败的一篇！