TOEFL 2009上半年-Dark_Tournament写作组 网兜妮妮第二十八次作业

网兜妮妮UID: 2612538

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Getting advice from older friends is more valuable than getting advice from friends at your age. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Everyone will meet difficulties. Apart from finding the solution by ourselves, we getting advice which help us come across hard time as well. But whose advice is more valuable, from older friends or same-age friends? Different people will have different ideas due to their diverse experience. As to me, I believe advice from older friends is of more value than advice from friends at my age.

Older friends always have more experience which can help them to view the problem all-round, and the advice given by them is more wiser than a same-age friend's. Take me as an example, my mom is my friend, and of course she is an older friend. When I meet difficulties in, I always turn to her to find some advice. Once I debate a question with my friends, actually, it is not a question with an only answer, but we fright for a right or wrong. At last, I think I will loose my friendship. Then I go to my mom, I face a dilemma ----keep this friendship or insist my idea. My mom's advice goes as” friend is vital to a person and nothing can equal a good friendship in our life. We say sorry to somebody not only show we are wrong, but show our sincere to our friends”. She viewed the friendship at a long term than me and told me the value of it, and then I made a good choice. I really benefit from her advices.

In addition, older friend’s advice not only help us dealing with the problem in front of us, but also help us understand more about other people, especially in their age. We communicate with many people everyday, most of them are older than us,like our teachers, or boss. Though talking to older friends, we can understand their way of thinking, which is from another perspective;or what they value with the world, which is different from us. So, when we view the problem again, we may find the problem we meet may not be a really difficulty but a misleading between two generations, and it is easy to solve when we understand each other. By following the older friend’s advice, we can communicate with people who is older than us better as well as keep a good relationship with them, like our teachers.

As what is showed above, older friend’s advice is more valuable in our life than same-age friends’. From the short term, their experience help them providing us a wise advice; from the long term; their way of thinking help us understand people at their age better, which will benefit us in the future.

jackie1983UID: 2484456

Everyone will meet difficulties. Apart from finding the solution by ourselves, we getting（get） advice which help（helps） us come across hard time as well. But whose advice is more valuable, from older friends or same-age friends? Different people will have different ideas due to their diverse experience. As to me, I believe advice from older friends is of more value than advice from friends at my age.- s- K3 R$ y6 L7 i% m( d
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Older friends always have more experience which can help them to view the problem all-round, and the advice given by them is more wiser than a same-age friend's. Take me as an example, my mom is my friend, and of course she is an older friend. When I meet difficulties in, I always turn to her to find some advice. Once I debate a question with my friends, actually, it is not a question with an only answer, but we fright（fight） for a right or wrong. At last, I think I will loose（lose） my friendship. Then I go to my mom, I face a dilemma ----keep this friendship or insist my idea. My mom's advice goes as” friend is vital to a person and nothing can equal a good friendship in our life. We say sorry to somebody not only show we are wrong, but show our sincere to our friends”. She viewed the friendship at a long term than me and told me the value of it, and then I made a good choice. I really benefit from her advices.
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In addition, older friend’s advice not only help us dealing（deal） with the problem in front of us, but also help us understand more about other people, especially in their age. We communicate with many people everyday, most of them are older than us,like our teachers, or boss. Though talking to older friends, we can understand their way of thinking, which is from another perspective;or what they value with the world（好像有点离题，题目是让讨论谁的advice更有益处）, which is different from us. So, when we view the problem again, we may find the problem we meet may not be a really difficulty but a misleading between two generations, and it is easy to solve when we understand each other. By following the older friend’s advice, we can communicate with people who is older than us better as well as keep a good relationship with them, like our teachers.

As what is showed above, older friend’s advice is more valuable in our life than same-age friends’. From the short term, their experience help them providing us a wise advice; from the long term; their way of thinking help us understand people at their age better, which will benefit us in the future.
楼主长句用的不错，论述展开的也可以， 就是第二点我稍有点异议～
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桑梓UID: 2613051

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Getting advice from older friends is more valuable than getting advice from friends at your age. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Everyone will meet difficulties. Apart from finding the solution by ourselves, we getting advice which help us come across hard time as well. But whose advice is more valuable, from older friends or same-age friends? Different people will have different ideas due to their diverse experience. As to me, I believe advice from older friends is of more value than advice from friends at my age.
Older friends always have more experience which can help them to view the problem all-round, and the advice given by them is more wiser than a same-age friend's. Take me as an example, my mom is my friend, and of course she is an older friend. When I meet difficulties in, I always turn to her to find some advice. Once I debate a question with my friends, actually, it is not a question with an only answer, but we fright for a right or wrong. At last, I think I will loose my friendship. Then I go to my mom, I face a dilemma ----keep this friendship or insist my idea. My mom's advice goes as” friend is vital to a person and nothing can equal a good friendship in our life. We say sorry to somebody not only show we are wrong, but show our sincere to our friends”. She viewed the friendship at a long term than me and told me the value of it, and then I made a good choice. I really benefit from her advices.  （这段的时态有点问题 叙述过去的事还是用一般过去式吧 LZ这段用的一般现在）
In addition, older friend’s advice not only help us dealing with the problem in front of us, but also help（和上句的help都应该用单数） us understand more about other people, especially in their age. We communicate with many people everyday, most of them are older than us,like our teachers, or boss. Though talking to older friends, we can understand their way of thinking, which is from another perspective;or what they value with the world, which is different from us. So, when we view the problem again, we may find the problem we meet may not be a really difficulty but a misleading（misunderstanding？） between two generations, and it is easy to solve when we understand each other. By following the older friend’s advice, we can communicate with people who is older than us better as well as keep a good relationship with them, like our teachers.
As what is showed above, older friend’s advice is more valuable in our life than same-age friends’. From the short term, their experience help them providing us a wise advice; from the long term; their way of thinking help us understand people at their age better, which will benefit us in the future.