白菜的作文本..~

白菜学英语UID: 2731720

嗯哼.. 白菜今天开始写作文了~大家使劲拍~

白菜学英语UID: 2731720

(09.02.21 NA)
Doyou agree or disagree with the following statement? Newspapers and magazinesare the best ways to learn about a foreign country.


Nowadays with the globalization, more and more students want to study abroad for their further study. But before they go abroad it is considerable important to learn about the foreign country they are going to. Some suggest that newspapers andmagazines are the best ways to know a country. Admittedly, get information from newspapers and magazines are really useful since they always report what happened in local so that you can get to know about the country all the time even you are not there. But, in my point of view, there can also be some problems when you use the newspapers and magazines as your main resources.

First and foremost, such kind of media just report the newest things happened in the country. Maybe it does help you a lot in keeping up with the local people. A country’s most precious treasure, however, is its history and culture, of which the newspaper and magazines would rarely mention. So it will be difficult for people get the whole image of a foreign country, not to speak of learning the different cultures which are gradually formed in the country’s development.

Another reason is that the information and resources from these media can sometimes not be justified. Different people will have different views on the same thing, not to speak of the newspaper and magazines. People are not able to get first-hand information so they need to rely on newspapers and magazines to learn. Because of benefits, however, there inevitably will be bias in the news and reports.Thus people will be easily draw a wrong picture about a foreign country. If we cannot get the right and justified information, how can we say that we know about a foreign country?

In my point of view, asking a friend abroad is comparatively better than get informationfrom newspaper and magazines. Since you can get the first-hand informationdirectly from your friend, your horizons can surely be broadened wilder. Besides,since everyone can let their voice been heard, the Internet is another usefuland more objective resource. In addition, books, which is rather different from newspapers and magazines, is quite effective way to know about a foreign country’s history.

With the discussion above, now we can safely draw the conclusion that newspapers and magazines are not the best way to learn about a foreign country. People are not able to know about the country’s history from them. And this kind of resourcecan be misleading. We need some more objective and wide-ranging resources.




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写了将近50分钟啊~还请大家多多指教^^

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ArantUID: 2814596

呃...我给你改好了...由于不能上传附件..我放在115了

麻烦你了

http://u.115.com/file/f11229622

littlekuoUID: 2860535

Nowadays with the globalization, more and more students want to study abroad for their further study. But(删) before they go abroad it is considerable important to learn about the foreign country they are going to. Some suggest that newspapers and magazines are the best ways to know a country. Admittedly, geting information from newspapers and magazines is really useful since they always report what happened in local so that you can get to know about the country all the time even you are not there. But, in my point of view, there can also be some problems when you use the newspapers and magazines as your main resources.

First and foremost, such kinds of media just report the newest things happened in the country. Maybe it does help you a lot in keeping up with the local people. A country’s most precious treasure, however, is its history and culture, of which the newspaper and magazines would rarely mention. So it will be difficult for people to get the whole image of a foreign country, not to speak of learning the different cultures which are gradually formed in the country’s development.

Another reason is that the information and resources from these media can sometimes not be justified. Different people will have different views on the same thing, not to speak of the newspaper and magazines. People are not able to get first-hand information so they need to rely on newspapers and magazines to learn. Because of benefits, however, there inevitably will be bias in the news and reports.Thus people will be easily draw a wrong picture about a foreign country. If we cannot get the right and justified information, how can we say that we know about a foreign country?

In my point of view, asking a friend abroad is comparatively better than get informationfrom newspaper and magazines. Since you can get the first-hand informationdirectly from your friend, your horizons can surely be broadened wilder. Besides,since everyone can let their voice been heard, the Internet is another usefuland more objective resource. In addition, books, which is rather different from newspapers and magazines, is quite effective way to know about a foreign country’s history.

With the discussion above, now we can safely draw the conclusion that newspapers and magazines are not the best way to learn about a foreign country. People are not able to know about the country’s history from them. And this kind of resourcecan be misleading. We need some more objective and wide-ranging resources

就文字本身来说，我觉得没有什么大问题。但是就文章的题目来说，你看昂文章的题目是“Newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign country”，注意这里面的best。很绝对的一个词，这篇作文除了倒数第二段意外，主要陈述的内容都是说报纸和杂质这俩种媒体的缺陷等等，最好和较好是相对的，在一大堆媒体中，找出来一个最好的，虽然它是最好的，但是不代表它就没有缺点是不是？所以说，既然问我们agree还是disagree，既然我们选择了disagree，就证明说这两种媒体不是最好的，那么就还有别它们还好的媒体呗，所以我们应该着重强调说别的认为是比它们还好方式来作为文章的陈述主题。其实就想是文章的倒数第二段一样。
可能我说的不太对，我说的一件仅供参考，作者自己斟酌一下。

白菜学英语UID: 2731720

8月3日
09.02.27NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time.

A large number of people tend to live under the illustration that salaryis playing the extremely important role in evaluating whether the job is fairor foul. They claim that less leisure is acceptable compared to the higherincome. Obviously, they seem to fail to take into account the basic fact thatrest is a most important aspect of people’s life. As far as I concerned, a jobwith more vacation time, although salary is low, is better than the one with a high salary but less rest.

Actually there are comprehensive researched on the efficiency affected by different combination of work and leisure time. Interestingly, no direct evidences are revealed that less vacation time would decrease the efficiency.On the contrary, a job with a high salary and less vacation would always leadto laziness and inefficiency. One of my relatives works every day and nearly norest. Although he has a considerable income, he always says he’s wasting time during work because long work time makes him tired. As the saying goes, all work and no play, makes Jack a dull boy. More vacation time helps to lift the pressure and fatigue which can lead to a better efficiency in the work.

Besides, more vacation time allows people to recharge. Workers can learn a lot of things or master a skill during a longer vacation time, which is helpful not only for the individuals themselves but also the companies and employers. Moreover,more time for learning can foster workers to become more skilled and advanced,which in return increase the salaries. My economic professor, for example,asked for a vacation for half a year last year. When he was back, he hastotally changed. He improved his teaching methods and is able to come up with many new ideas from a different angle. We asked about his vacation he said he went abroad and read a lot of books during half a year, which enlighten him in many aspects.

From what has been discussed above, leisure time is helpful not only to lift the pressure but also to improve individuals themselves. I firmly convinced that a job with a low salary but more vacation time is better.


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为什么贴上来就总是单词和单词连在一起呢

jilinlinUID: 2396929

改好了
麻烦也帮我看看，谢谢！
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1131066-1-2.html
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白菜学英语UID: 2731720

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should not take part-time jobs while they are studying in universities


Some, believing that part-time jobs would distract students' attention on study, argue that students should not take these jobs when they are still in universities. Taking a part-time job, however, would bring more advantages than merely study at school I think.

First and foremost, students can earn practical experience by working in a real society institution rather than reading them barely from books. Attending universities is the preparation for the future career. We learn theories while we need to practice them, which actually is the final goal for study. "Knowledge is power", an old saying, is not appropriate to contemporary's society any more. It is the practice of knowledge that is power which can really help people achieve their goals and succeed. So why say "No" to part-time jobs, which is the best way to earn practical experience for students?

Secondly, students can, rather than staying at school, meet and make friends with more people, which will do a lot of help for their upcoming career. Nowadays information plays an increasingly important role in job-finding. It, having a great relationship with more people, will be much easier to find an ideal job after graduation. Moreover, someone, worked for a company as a part-time worker and did well, would be more competent than other applicant for certain jobs.

Lastly, taking a part-time job can help some students, whose families do not have enough money, to release the burden on families and continue the journey of acquiring knowledge.

Although have some negative impact on students' study, taking a part-time job can be extremely helpful students not only to the study in school but also to future career. So it is advisable for students to take part-time job while they are studying in universities.



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写了将近40分钟 T T 而且字数还这么少,贴到word里面自批了一堆的打字错误

gougouhencaiUID: 2778821

小批改一下

gougouhencaiUID: 2778821

谢谢你的批改啊  为什么我的作文版面看得比A4长是因为我把版面设置改成横板了 感觉这样看的会更舒服些。
感觉你的评语说的很实在。 祝你成功

callie28UID: 2656640

不好意思，这么晚才给你

huangkai6278UID: 2585655

不好意思,前几天出门了，一直碰不到电脑~ 改好了8月3日的，其实改动不多，楼主用得词汇很多很好，也没有太多的毛病，只是内容上提了一点我的感觉~

白菜学英语UID: 2731720

哎 咳咳 这个文章写了好久啊  
因为写着写着就困了
又没逻辑又没例子
掩面跑开.................................

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12# 白菜学英语
的确 你缺例子 自己编一下亦可以啦~

白菜学英语UID: 2731720

8月14日交
09.08.07NA      Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should allow children to make their own choices rather than determine their children’s future for them.


Granted, parents are best teachers in childrens upbringing. Yet it does not mean parents should make a detailed plan in advance, especially in determining their children's future, for them.

Parents' theories may not suit for today's society since they hold the experience gained in the past. The previous concepts, might work in the past, hit against a wall now. In my country, many parents still hold the illustration that children must study hard and get high grades in exams, otherwise they can never succeed. This viewpoint lead them giving ecessive pressure on children which made them, as the saying goes, all work and no play, makes Jack a dull boy. can only focus on study which make our next generation always poor in health.

Besides, parent can not get the whole picture about their kids' strengths. It is children themselves that know their own abilities so that they could make a more proper choice rather than following parents' arrangements.
For example, both of my parents are working in hospital. Thus, when decide my future, they argue that I should study in a medicine shool and be a doctor in the future. However, I am interested in finance and I'm adept in maths. So I choose to major in economics and now I get a handsome grades. I won the scholarship in college and also have learned a lot from different courses concerning economics. If I chose to go to medicine school, I might not be able to achieve so many things.

In conclusion, parents should give more freedom to children when dicede their future. It is their children that are responsible for their own life. More freedom and some suggestion would be more helpful than a detailed plan.

白菜学英语UID: 2731720

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