加入小组。。恳求大家猛拍。。进步就是王道.。

paddyhyUID: 202095

第一篇独立写作。。大家帮忙吧。。真的很感谢。。捧场的。。批改的。。大家一起加油娶个好成绩
10-15作业-独立写作
教师是否应该获得跟doctors,lawyers,business leaders一样的收入
Recently the problem has been brought into focus that whether the teacher should have the same income as other staff like doctors, lawyers or not. The answer to this problem involves many factors. In making a personal decision, I am opting for the opinion that it is necessary for the government to make some policies to claim that the teacher should get the same salary as the doctors, lawyers and business leaders.

One of the primary cause is that teacher’s career is directly related to the performance of the education around the country. To provide them with the higher income can not only promote their working spirit but also make them to focus their attention on the teaching work. As we can see, some teachers prefer to take some jobs outside the campus for obtaining extra profits, which will in turn to affect the quality of their teaching work

Also there is a further more subtle point we must consider. Through offering the teachers a higher salary, the people around the world can pay more attention on the education of the next generation. Maybe it can not directly relate them together, but it can definitely attract the public attention that the government today show more focus on the education than before.

What’s more, the competition has become more and more serious, which means it require the teachers to spend extra energy to deal with their heavy load. A higher income can, to some extent, serve as a placebo to them.

Of course, giving teachers more income might result to some disadvantages, such as cause the dissatisfaction of other workers and most college students may strive to be a teacher just for the high income, especially during today’s economic recession.

From what I have pointed above, I’d like to hold the view that the teacher deserve to get a high income.

如是_ivyUID: 2704554

Recently the problem has been brought into focus that whether the teacher should have the same income as other staffs like doctors, lawyers or not. The answer to this problem involves many factors. In making a personal decision, I am opting for the opinion that it is necessary for the government to make some policies to claim that the teacher should get the same salary as the doctors, lawyers and business leaders.

One of the primary cause is that teacher’s career is directly related to the performance of the education around the country. To provide them with the higher income can not only promote their working spirit but also make them to focus their attention on the teaching work. As we can see, some teachers prefer to take some jobs outside the campus for obtaining extra profits, which will in turn to affect the quality of their teaching work.可以继续举些像这样的例子，觉得这段论证的薄了点

Also there is a further more subtle point we must consider. Through offering the teachers a higher salary, the people around the world can pay more attention on the education of the next generation. Maybe it can not directly relate them together, but it can definitely attract the public attention that the government today show more focus on the education than before.不是很懂你那个从句，貌似和but的逻辑不一致

What’s more, the competition has become more and more serious, which means it require the teachers to spend extra energy to deal with their heavy load. A higher income can, to some extent, serve as a placebo to them. 觉得你这一段可以和你第一点原因放在一起说

Of course, giving teachers more income might result to some disadvantages, such as cause the dissatisfaction of other workers and most college students may strive to be a teacher just for the high income, especially during today’s economic recession.其实觉得不用像G的作文那样在这里加一段这个。如果你要加，建议把它拉到前面去作为反方的观点理由，然后你在论证你的观点的时候再稍稍驳斥。因为G的作文貌似是要求逻辑完整，T的还是最好观点明确，论证充分的

From what I have pointed above, I’d like to hold the view that the teacher deserve to get a high income.

个人觉得模板痕迹很重，然后点太多太散了，反而每个点都没有说透。建议你集中写二到三个点，然后多用细节就像你第一个点那样的例子论证。ets要求details and examples、

如是_ivyUID: 2704554

Recently the problem has been brought into focus that whether the teacher should have the same income as other staffs like doctors, lawyers or not. The answer to this problem involves many factors. In making a personal decision, I am opting for the opinion that it is necessary for the government to make some policies to claim that the teacher should get the same salary as the doctors, lawyers and business leaders.

One of the primary cause is that teacher’s career is directly related to the performance of the education around the country. To provide them with the higher income can not only promote their working spirit but also make them to focus their attention on the teaching work. As we can see, some teachers prefer to take some jobs outside the campus for obtaining extra profits, which will in turn to affect the quality of their teaching work.可以继续举些像这样的例子，觉得这段论证的薄了点

Also there is a further more subtle point we must consider. Through offering the teachers a higher salary, the people around the world can pay more attention on the education of the next generation. Maybe it can not directly relate them together, but it can definitely attract the public attention that the government today show more focus on the education than before.不是很懂你那个从句，貌似和but的逻辑不一致

What’s more, the competition has become more and more serious, which means it require the teachers to spend extra energy to deal with their heavy load. A higher income can, to some extent, serve as a placebo to them. 觉得你这一段可以和你第一点原因放在一起说

Of course, giving teachers more income might result to some disadvantages, such as cause the dissatisfaction of other workers and most college students may strive to be a teacher just for the high income, especially during today’s economic recession.其实觉得不用像G的作文那样在这里加一段这个。如果你要加，建议把它拉到前面去作为反方的观点理由，然后你在论证你的观点的时候再稍稍驳斥。因为G的作文貌似是要求逻辑完整，T的还是最好观点明确，论证充分的

From what I have pointed above, I’d like to hold the view that the teacher deserve to get a high income.

个人觉得模板痕迹很重，然后点太多太散了，反而每个点都没有说透。建议你集中写二到三个点，然后多用细节就像你第一个点那样的例子论证。ets要求details and examples、

paddyhyUID: 202095

10-16作业：大家辛苦了。。

With the technology pervading every aspects of our daily life, people today may take it for granted that they are having more leisure time than their ancestors and enjoying more entertainment at the same time. However, is it the true situation behind the phenomenon? I think the answer is not sure. To some extent, we cannot obtain the same leisure time as before for the following reasons.

Firstly, the development of science brings us more tasks and ideas to achieve, although it offers us lots of convenience. For example, drinving the cars and taking the plane really can save us lots time and energy, meanwhile it causes the pollution to the environment. So the researchers have to spend extra time to get a better solution, the leisure time of them will be decreased. As to the passagers, maybe they save their time by these advanced automobiles, no body can sure whether their boss will ask them to finish more business tasks and   go to more places for discussion. Everything developes with some side effect, today's advancement cannot serve as the catalyst of our leisure time.

Furthermore, I want to say that prople today need to face more stress and presure than anytime before. So the point is that during their leisure time, their mind maybe still working, their cellphone may still will be called. Like my father,  he takes some rest only when it comes to some holidays. However, we always change the plans because of some sudden situations. Leisure time cannot bring the effect of rest as before. Some people may argue that this is the rare situation, while today's economic recession may give more rest time, what concerns is everybody's worry and stress in the heart even when the body is lying or relaxing.

Also, leisure time is not as "popular" as before. More and more people like to take extra work wither for profits, status or promotion. The leisure time is sometimes recognized as wasting life. My classmate in college usually surprise me like this " The next three weekends are all taken by the job". The idea of taking some rest seems not as important as before, especially during the young generation. Really hopes them can take care of their body, it is the base, it is the backup, it is the key point.

From what I have reasoned above, I want to conclude that the changes of the science and every aspects of  this world give us more challenge, higher requirement, on some circumstances, the jobs occupy more and more time of us. The development relates to the contribution of us, the contribution needs the good situation of our health, leisure time should get more attention and focus.

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半夏之北UID: 2517498

Recently the problem has been brought into focus that whether the teacher should have the same income as other staff (profession)like doctors, lawyers or not. The answer to this problem involves many factors. In making a personal decision, I am opting for the opinion that it is necessary for the government to make some policies to claim that the teacher should get the same salary as the doctors, lawyers and business leaders.

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One of the primary cause is that teacher’s career is directly related to the performance of the education around the country. To provide them with the higher income can not only promote their working spirit but also make them to(to 去掉） focus  their attention on the teaching work. As we can see, some teachers prefer to take some jobs outside the campus for obtaining extra profits, which will in turn to affect the quality of their teaching work; Q# A+ x8

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Also there is a further more subtle point we must consider. Through offering the teachers a higher salary, the(去掉） people around the world can pay more attention on（to) the education of the next generation. Maybe it can not directly relate them together, but it can definitely attract the public attention that the government today show more focus on the education than before.这个原因和你论点关系不太大啊
What’s more, the competition has become more and more serious, which means that it require the teachers to spend extra energy to deal with their heavy load. A higher income can, to some extent, serve as a placebo to them. . ?*

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Of course, giving teachers more income might result to （in)some disadvantages, such as causing the dissatisfaction of other workers and most college students may strive to be a teacher just for the high income, especially during today’s economic recession.
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最后总结的应该把上面你所支持的论点的原因总结一下，不应该说太多提高收入不好的方面

上面论证的三个原因没有details和具体的例子

paddyhyUID: 202095

Time flies and technology develops. TV has become one basic tool during our daily life. Of course, through TV we can get lots of information vividly. So the newspaper has been regarded as a past and old-style way to understand today’s world. But as to me, I still hold the view that newspapers are still necessary for us to truly understand the world event for the following reasons.

To begin with, newspaper is a traditional art which is more familiar and reliable to us than others. TV’s vivid pictures and animated videos don’t mean that what it conveys is true. It is the information that behind the program that we should focus on. Like the usual program News Broadcast on CCTV-1 in china, although from it we can directly know what happened in our country, most of the time we react just like listening somebody is telling stories. But if we read the official newspapers, the journalists and writers’ opinion and ideas can promote our thinking. Reading newspaper is a quiet thing that conducted in a quiet environment which is conducing to understand and focus on something.

Furthermore, newspaper is more convenient for us to carry which can give us more opportunity to know what is happening around us. For example, as to some busy people who need to travel between several cities, they can read the newspapers whenever they have time. But the chances to watch TV are comparatively small. Also newspaper serves as the place that we can touch some famous author’s opinions and reviews. This is very crucial during some situations. The pen in the writer’s hand is equal to a powerful weapon.

In sum, from the reasons that I mentioned above, I’d like to conclude that newspaper can never be outdated and still serve as the important way for us to understand the world, to detect the information behind the phenomenon and to feel the power of the writer’s pen.

scutgongUID: 2564275

With the technology pervading every aspects of our daily life, people today may take it for granted that they are having more leisure time than their ancestors and enjoying more entertainment at the same time. However, is it the true situation behind the phenomenon? I think the answer is not sure. To some extent, we cannot obtain the same leisure time as before for the following reasons.

Firstly, the development of science brings us more tasks and ideas to achieve, although it offers us lots of convenience. For example, driving the cars and taking the plane really can save us lots time and energy, meanwhile it causes the pollution to the environment. So the researchers have to spend extra time to get a better solution, the leisure time of them will be decreased. (这里的论证是否能充分说明人们的生活时间少了呢？毕竟只是researchers需要花时间) As to the passengers, maybe they save their time by these advanced automobiles, nobody can sure whether their boss will ask them to finish more business tasks and   go to more places for discussion. Everything develops with some side effects, today's advancement cannot serve as the catalyst of our leisure time.

Furthermore, I want to say that people today need to face more stress and pressure than ever before. So the point is that during their leisure time, their mind maybe still working, their cell phone may still will be called. Like my father,  he takes some rest only when it comes to some holidays. However, we always change the plans because of some sudden situations. Leisure time cannot bring the effect of rest as before. Some people may argue that this is the rare situation, while today's economic recession may give more rest time, what concerns is everybody's worry and stress in the heart even when the body is lying or relaxing.

Also, leisure time is not as "popular" as before. More and more people like to take extra work wither ？for profits, status or promotion. The leisure time is sometimes recognized as a waste of life. My classmate in college usually surprise me like this " The next three weekends are all taken by the job". The idea of taking some rest seems not as important as before, especially during the young generation. Really hopes them can take care of their body, it is the base, it is the backup, it is the key point.

From what I have reasoned above, I want to conclude that the changes of the science and every aspects of this world give us more challenge, higher requirement, on some circumstances, the jobs occupy more and more time of us. The development relates to the contribution of us, the contribution needs the good situation of our health and leisure time should get more attention and focus.

作者从三个方面论证，分析的比较透彻。需要注意的是有一些单词的拼写错误。

beangtUID: 2691375

Time flies and technology develops. TV has become one basic tool during our daily life.(用一个with复合句更好吧~) Of course, through TV we can get lots of information vividly（好词~）. So(这个so有点牵强) the newspaper has been regarded as a past and old-style way to understand today’s world. But as to me, I still hold the view that newspapers are still necessary for us to truly understand the world event for the following reasons.
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To begin with, newspaper is a traditional art which is more familiar and reliable to us than others. TV’s vivid pictures and animated videos don’t mean that what it conveys is true. It is the information that behind the program that we should focus on. Like the usual program News Broadcast on CCTV-1 in china, although from it we can directly know what happened in our country, most of the time we react just like listening somebody is telling stories. But if we read the official newspapers, the journalists and writers’ opinion and ideas can promote our thinking. Reading newspaper is a quiet thing that conducted in a quiet environment which is conducing to understand and focus on something.
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Furthermore, newspaper is more convenient for us to carry which（what） can give us more opportunity to know what is happening around us. For example, as to some busy people who need to travel between(between 是不是只两个地方？不太清楚through) several cities, they can read the newspapers whenever they have time. But the chances to watch TV are comparatively small. Also newspaper serves as the place that we can touch（可以这样用吗？） some famous author’s opinions and reviews. This is very crucial during some situations. The pen in the writer’s hand is equal to a powerful weapon.（好句~）
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2 v# U: s6 u6 j' z  R* a" Q  gIn sum, from the reasons that I mentioned above, I’d like to conclude that newspaper can never be outdated and still serve as the important way for us to understand the world, to detect the information behind the phenomenon and to feel the power of the writer’s pen.（结尾段写得不错）
结构清楚，内容也不错，例子也有了，应该是片不错的作文~继续加油！

shirley072UID: 2712200

Timeflies and technology develops. TV has become one basic tool during our dailylife. Of course, through TV we can get lots of information vividly. So thenewspaper has been regarded as a past and old-style way to understand today’sworld. But as to me, I still hold the view thatnewspapers are still necessary for us to trulyunderstand the world event for the following reasons.

To beginwith, newspaper is a traditional art which is more familiar and reliable tous than others (这句话念起来有点别扭呢？is familiar and reliable to us,觉得这样的并列不是很通顺？). TV’svivid pictures and animated videos don’t mean that what it conveys is true (这句实际上是跟上面一句相对应，解释两者，可以用点转折的或者变化的句式去连接). It is the information that behindthe program that we should focus on.(We shouldfocus on the information that comes from the program) Like the usualprogram News Broadcast on CCTV-1 in china, although from it we can directlyknow what happened in our country, most of the time we react just likelistening somebody is telling stories (Most of thetime we just behave as listeners receiving the message from the hosts passively).But if we read the official newspapers, the journalists and writers’ opinionand ideas can promote our thinking. Reading newspaper is a quiet thing that conducted in a quiet environment which is conducing to understand and focus on something.

Furthermore,newspaper is more convenient for us to carry (carrywith) which can give us more opportunity to know what is happeningaround us. For example, as to some busy people who need to travel betweenseveral cities, they can read the newspapers whenever they have time. But thechances to watch TV are comparatively small (最开始我也想写这个，但是题目貌似强调newspaper在如何truly认识世界上面的优势，强调信息量，所以我就不知道这个时间问题该不该写呵呵). Also newspaper serves as the placethat we can touch some famous author’s opinions and reviews. This is verycrucial during some situations. The pen in the writer’s hand is equal to apowerful weapon.

In sum,from the reasons that I mentioned above, I’d like to conclude that newspapercan never be outdated and still serve as the important way for us to understandthe world, to detect the information behind the phenomenon and to feel thepower of the writer’s pen.

文章的结构清晰，句子结构多变化一点就好了呵呵：）

skysunny2008UID: 2632579

Time flies and technology develops. TV has become one basic tool during our daily life. Of course, through TV we can get lots of information vividly. So the newspaper has been regarded as a past and old-style way to understand today’s world. But as to me, I still hold the view that newspapers are still necessary for us to truly understand the world event for the following reasons.（开头很通顺！）
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1 D8 ]8 I) D( j7 mTo begin with, newspaper is a traditional art which is more familiar and reliable to us than others. TV’s vivid pictures and animated videos don’t mean that what it conveys is true (and comprehensive). It is the information that behind the program that we should focus on（what we should focus on is the hiding and specific information）. Like the usual program News Broadcast on CCTV-1 in china, although from it we can directly know what happened in our country, most of the time we react （改成
feel）just like listening somebody is telling stories. But if we read the official newspapers, the journalists and writers’ opinion and ideas can promote our thinking. Reading newspaper is a quiet thing（我觉得改成a calm thinking 冷静思考）
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Furthermore, newspaper is more convenient for us to carry which can give us more opportunity to know what is happening around us. For example, as to some busy people who need to travel between several cities, they can read the newspapers whenever they have time. But the chances to watch TV are comparatively small. Also (加the) newspaper serves as the place that we can touch(get a clear perspective of) some famous author’s opinions and reviews. This is very crucial during some situations. The pen in the writer’s hand is equal to a powerful weapon.
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9 ]& H" u  T. ?$ p6 r& c- O+ pIn sum, from the reasons that I mentioned above, I’d like to conclude that newspaper can never be outdated and still serve as the important way for us to understand the world, to detect the information behind the phenomenon and to feel the power of the writer’s pen.
个人认为总体思路非常好～

paddyhyUID: 202095

回归作文小组。。猛拍我吧。
With the advanced computer technology pervading every aspects of our society, the ability of plan and organizing may have lost some importance and not deserved the same attention as before. As to this, what I want to point out is that the ability of plan and organizing is essential for everybody, especially the young generation.
To begin with, the ability of plan and organizing serves as the basic requirement for a high efficiency work. No plan, no organization, everything will turn out to be a mess. We can take the manager who just gets a high degree in computer major as an example, the special knowledge and good communication skills cannot make us to take it for granted that he can lead the company very well. A good leadership always come together with the ability of plan and organizing. Without plan, the company will focus on the current benefits instead of the future development; the employees will be impatient with some tasks that are out of order. Without being organized, how can the team survive among other well-organized teams?
Furthermore, the ability of plan and organizing can be conducing for the young people to give others a good impression. Everybody think a person without plan and organization will make more mistakes than others. The bad impression will, to some extent, affect other aspects of your life, such as making friends, finding jobs and so on. Like my sister, she can always finish everything systematically and plan her next week, next month job. Then she got a promotion last year and she told me the principle regarded her as a responsible teacher. So the ability of plan and organization can be regarded as the mirror to show your other characters.
Finally, we need the ability of plan and organization to adapt ourselves to the serious competitions today. We need to plan our future and organize our life. Only having a plan in your heart can you achieve your dream step by step. Only through organizing your limited time, you can make full use of your life to achieve your own value. They are the entrances to your success life.
In sum, from what mentioned above, I asserts that the young generations today should put more attention to cultivate the ability of organization and plan, which is a catalyst for you to realize your dream.

heqiang_1001UID: 2607349

With the advanced computer technology pervading every aspects of our society, the ability of plan and organizing may have lost some importance and not deserved the same attention as before. As to this, what I want to point out is that the ability of plan and organizing is essential for everybody, especially the young generation.

To begin with, the ability of plan and organizing serves as the basic requirement for a high efficiency work. No plan, no organization, everything will turn out to be a mess. We can take the manager who just gets a high degree in computer major as an example, the special（professional） knowledge and good communication skills cannot make us to take it for granted that he can lead the company very well. A good leadership always come together with the ability of plan and organizing. Without plan, the company will focus on the current benefits instead of the future development; the employees will be impatient with some tasks that are out of order. 细节，学习Without being organized, how can the team survive among other well-organized teams? 尽量不用问句

Furthermore, the ability of plan and organizing can be conducing（conducting） for the young people to give others a good impression. Everybody think（thinks） a person without plan and organization will make more mistakes than others. The bad impression will, to some extent, affect other aspects of your life, such as making friends, finding jobs and so on. Like my sister, she can always finish everything systematically and plan her next week, next month job. Then she got a promotion last year and she told me the principle(?) regarded her as a responsible teacher. So the ability of plan and organization can be regarded as the mirror to show your other characters. 这个观点有点偏恩，而且这个例子……组织规划能力是升值的充分条件么？不是很有说服力恩。

Finally, we need the ability of plan and organization to adapt ourselves to the serious competitions today. We need to plan our future and organize our life. Only having a plan in your heart can you achieve your dream step by step. Only through organizing your limited time, you can make full use of your life to achieve your own value. They are the entrances to your success life.

In sum, from what mentioned above, I asserts that the young generations today should put more attention to cultivate the ability of organization and plan, which is a catalyst for you to realize your dream.

结构很清晰，语言上也没有大的毛病。第二个观点我觉得不是特别好。第三段感觉比较空恩，应该加点细节的。
总体还是很不错的，加油恩！

shirley072UID: 2712200

With the advanced computertechnology pervading every aspects of our society, the ability of plan andorganizing may have lost some importance and not deserved the same attention asbefore(恩，我觉得这句话前面和后面没有什么太大的逻辑或者因果关系，为什么电脑技术的普及可能会让plan不那么重要？觉得这个中间应该再加一句话说明一下). As to this, what I want to pointout is that the ability of plan and organizing is essential for everybody,especially the young generation.
To begin with, the ability of planand organizing serves as the basic requirement for a high efficiency work. Noplan, no organization, everything will turn out to be a mess. We can takethe manager who just gets a high degree in computer major as an example, thespecial knowledge and good communication skills cannot make us to take it forgranted that he can lead the company very well(句子太复杂了，可以变换一下句式，比如说take A as anexample,A太长了，念起来就不太合适，要不就直接说for example。后面一句，可以把那个we cannot take it for granted直接提到前面，不然句子显得有些累赘). A good leadership always cometogether with
(integrate with) the ability of plan and organizing. Without plan, the companywill focus on the current benefits instead of the future development; theemployees will be impatient with some tasks that are out of order. Withoutbeing organized, how can the team survive among other well-organized teams?
Furthermore, the ability of planand organizing can be conducing for the young people to give others a goodimpression(这句话念起来不太对.Peoplealways impress the others with…我也想不好。。). Everybody think(reckonsthat) a person without plan and organizationwill make more mistakes than others. The bad impression will, to some extent,affect other aspects of your life, such as making friends, finding jobs and soon. Like my sister, she can always finish everything systematically and planher next week, next month job. Then she got a promotion last year and she toldme the principle regarded her as a responsible teacher. So the ability of planand organization can be regarded as the mirror to show your other characters. (这段最开始是说印象分，然后举例说sister因为有plan等能力而晋升且没有提到印象使她晋升？最后又说plan等可以显示你的其他特点。整个太分散了，就不太能明白楼主想说什么)
Finally, we need the ability ofplan and organization to adapt ourselves to the serious competitions today. Weneed to plan our future and organize our life. Only having a plan in your heartcan you achieve your dream step by step. Only through organizing your limitedtime, you can make full use of your life to achieve your own value. They arethe entrances to your success life. (这一段基本上可以跟最后一段写在一起)
In sum, from what mentioned above,I asserts (assert)
thatthe young generations today should put more attention to cultivate the abilityof organization and plan, which is a catalyst for you to realize your dream.


论述还应该要更强烈，同时要注意不能堆砌句子~~~
个人意见啦~~~~~

paddyhyUID: 202095

10-30作业大家猛拍吧。。
Facing to the exciting news that a brand new research center will be established in my hometown, some people holds the view that it should turn out to be a business center, while others think an agriculture center will be better. In my opinion, if these are the only two choices, I would like to pick up the first one, business research center for the following reasons.

To begin with, my choice is based on the economic situation of my hometown. Due to the low salary and limited job opportunities, most of the young people have already went to the big cities for making more money. That situation runs like a circle, the less potential workers, the less companies that willing to invest here. So if a research center can be built, the advantages will be so gorgeous. More college students will choose to contribute to their hometown and more people can stay in the hometown. Maybe only one research cannot cause large amount of affection, nevertheless, it will bring some factories’ attention and attract more companies to invest here.

Furthermore, the local geographical conditions are suitable for a research center rather than an agriculture center. My hometown locates next to the sea dock. The transportation, the key point of economic, is really helpful for researchers to get the materials and to communicate with other centers. What’s more, my hometown is too crowded enough to explore any land vast land for agriculture purpose. Also the two good universities in my hometown can accelerate the advance of the research center through some co-operations and communications.

From what has been mentioned above, a business research center will bring more benefits to my hometown than an agriculture center will. And we should always make the choice according to the requirement of the people.

paddyhyUID: 202095

10-31作业
With the competition becoming more and more serious, a higher education has turn out to be a knock-door stone to get a good job. So some people assert that it is essential to provide high education to all the students. However, as for me, I would like to say that to get a high education should not serve as a basic requirement for all the students for the following reasons.
To begin with, not all the students' chasing dream is to get the high degree, some of them want to achieve their own value in other aspects, A basic education is enough for them to deal with the usual life. Take the famous CEO of  "Haier" company as a example. After graduated from high school, he had no interest in getting a bachelor degree. On the contrary, he opened his own little shoe store with several friends. His brilliant talent in business accelerated the development of the store and finally became one the first ten strongest companies in the world. When asked about the secret of success, the answer is "It is the ability not the degree that help you to realize the dream.".
Furthermore, as to some normal or low-level IQ students, to require them to receive the high education may put some extra pressure and burden to them. They just like to get a stable job and are not willing to strive in today's competition. Take some of my friends who working in a clothes company as a example, I always tell them if you study harder in high school, you would get a higher salary job. While their reaction is that they think everybody has own goal, their goal is to live a simple life and don't want to be bothered by the unlimited knowledge, they would rather to work than to sit in the classroom. So everybody's situation is different, high education should be available to the students that who is interested in and have the desired ability.
In sum, from what has been reasoned above, considering some practical situations of everybody, it is not necessary to provide high education to all the students. It is the students themselves that should decide their future, to choose to go to college or not.