加入小组。。恳求大家猛拍。。进步就是王道.。

heqiang_1001UID: 2607349

With the competition becoming more and more serious, a higher education has turn out to be a knock-door stone to get a good job. So some people assert that it is essential to provide high education to all the students. However, as for me, I would like to say that to get a high education should not serve as a basic requirement for all the students for the following reasons.

To begin with, not all the students' chasing dream（独立主格？好厉害） is to get the high degree, some of them want to achieve their own value in other aspects, A basic education is enough for them to deal with the usual life. Take the famous CEO of  "Haier" company as a example. After graduated from high school, he had no interest in getting a bachelor degree. On the contrary, he opened his own little shoe store with several friends. His brilliant talent in business accelerated the development of the store and finally became one the first(top) ten strongest companies in the world. When asked about the secret of success, the（his） answer is "It is the ability not the degree that help you to realize the dream.恩，这个例子不错

Furthermore, as to some normal or low-level IQ students, to require them to receive the high education may put some extra pressures and burden to them. They just like to get a stable job and are not willing to strive in today's competition. Take some of my friends who are working in a clothes company as a example, I always tell them if you study harder in high school, you would get a higher salary job. While their reaction is that they think everybody has own goal, their goal is to live a simple life and don't want to be bothered by the unlimited knowledge, they would rather to work than to sit in the classroom.(这连着4个句子都是逗号啊……，句式可以变一下恩)So everybody's situation is different, high education should be available to the students that（去掉） who is interested in and have the desired ability.

In sum, from what has been reasoned above, considering some practical situations of everybody, it is not necessary to provide high education to all the students. It is the students themselves that should decide their future, to choose to go to college or not.

整体还可以，语言上还是有些小错误。
例子的语言稍微有点罗嗦，我也是这个问题。用精炼的语言表达出想要的意思也是咱们努力的方向吧！
加油……我发现了，咱俩都是上午写作文，所以连着两天都被分在一组了，呵呵。

liberlyUID: 2570733

Facing to（不用加to吧） the exciting news that a brand new research center will be established in my hometown, some people holds（some people不是第三人称单数，动词不用加s） the view that it should turn out to be a business center, while others think an agriculture center will be better. In my opinion, if these are the only two choices, I would like to pick up the first one, (应该破折号)business research center for the following reasons.8 h1 w, C2 U! J! [* s  fTo begin with（感觉有点怪，to begin with是副词短语么？用first或者first of all就好吧）, my choice is based on the economic situation of my hometown. Due to the low salary and limited job opportunities, most of the young people have already went to the big cities for（to？In order to应该可以） making more money. That situation runs like a circle, the less potential workers, the less companies that willing to invest here. So if a research center can be built, the advantages will be so gorgeous（华丽用到这貌似不太合适）. More college students（毕业生graduate student） will choose to contribute to their hometown and more people can stay in the hometown. Maybe only one research cannot cause large amount of（large就可以了，影响这种东西不好计量吧） affection（influence更好吧）, nevertheless, it will bring（attention不能bring，也是attract） some factories’ attention and attract more companies to invest here.! {% F, Z" Y2 s4 l1 M4 [  EFurthermore, the local geographical conditions（地理情况不能复数） are suitable for a （business）research center rather than an agriculture center. My hometown locates（is located） next to the sea dock（海港是seaport）. The transportation, the key point of economic, is really helpful for researchers to get the materials and to communicate with other centers. What’s more, my hometown is too crowded enough（too和enough重复了） to explore any land vast land for agriculture purpose. Also the two good（best吧？） universities in my hometown can accelerate the advance of the research center'project（研究中心本身不能被加速） through some co-operations and communications.1 X% l( @8 t. c$ \2 }8 y1 f5 k9 [5 S9 _2 R6 N' P4 A! pFrom what has been mentioned above, a business research center will bring more benefits（最好别用复数） to my hometown than an agriculture center will（去掉will）. And we should always make the（去掉the，the是特指） choice according to the requirement of the people.

这个我感写作文里句式可以简单，这个没问题，但是可以的话加入点复杂句式会加分。另外考试还是尽量按照自己见过的句式和表达方式写，最好不要自己造吧。另外就是关于地理情况的段落，理由我感觉有点牵强。大概就这样，加油…………

我是chineseladyUID: 2662783

With the competition becoming more and more serious, a higher education has turn out to be a knock-door stone to get a good job.不知道这个说法他们懂不..? So some people assert that it is essential to provide high education to all the students. However, as for me, I would like to say that to get a high education should not serve as a basic requirement for all the students for the following reasons.嗯开头很干脆的

To begin with, not all the students' chasing dream is to get the high degree, some of them want to achieve their own value in other aspects, A basic education is enough for them to deal with the usual life. Take the famous CEO of  "Haier" company as a->an example. After graduated from high school, he had no interest in getting a bachelor degree. On the contrary, he opened-->started to run a his own little-->small shoe store with several friends. His brilliant talent in business accelerated the development of the store and finally (his store) became one the first...?怎么个情况 ten strongest companies in the world. When asked about the secret of (being) success, the answer is "It is the ability not the degree that help you to realize the dream."

Furthermore, as to some normal or low-level IQ students...最好不要出现有歧视性的话语, to require them to--有点中式 receive the high education may put some extra pressure and burden to them. They just like to get a stable job and are not willing to strive in today's competition. Take some of my friends who (are) working in a clothes company as a example, I always tell them if you study harder in high school, you would get a higher salary job. While their reaction is that they think everybody has own goal, their goal is to live a simple life and don't want to be bothered by the unlimited knowledge, they would rather to work than to sit in the classroom. So everybody's situation is different, high education should be available to the students that who is interested in and have the desired ability.啥能力?这是

In sum, from what has been reasoned above, considering some practical situations of everybody, it is not necessary to provide high education to all the students. It is the students themselves that->who should decide->choose their future, and to choose to go to college or not. 回答的还好中间的句子变换不大. 有语法错误,某些表达比较中式.

paddyhyUID: 202095

11-03作业

With the development of transportation tools, it will be very convenient for people to travel between cities and towns. Some people like the quiet environment of the small town, while others prefer to the fast pace of living tempo in big cities. As far as I am concerned, to work in the cities and to live in a small town is my ideal choice.

Firstly, to live in a small town can give me an entirely comfortable environment to relax, especially in the moment of pressures. There are many harmony images coming into my mind. Like when I wake up every morning without hearing any automobile noises, I feel I am surrounded with fresh airs and full of energy before go back to face the challenges. What's more, the people in a small town are usually more willing to help each others than those live in the big cities due to their same background and customs. I like to live with friendly neighbors, and always been cared by others, especially in the difficult situations.

Furthermore, to live in a small town won't bring me the same economic burden as to live in big cities. The reason is the houses are much more expensive in cities than in a small town. Take my friend Kin who lives in the city of shanghai as a example. Two third of her salary was used to pay the loan of her apartment. And the apartment is so small that every time I go to his place, I have to share the bedroom with her, which will never happen in my house in the small town next to shanghai.

Finally, the advanced transportation tools like subway have been applied in many cities. It is very convenient for people to commute to work. So to live in the big cities feeling the serious competitions and to live in a small town enjoying a better living environment is not a dream any more.

From what I have reasoned above, although the big cities maybe more attractive in some aspects, to live in a small town has more advantages. And with the improvement of people's lives, more and more people will have their own cars, which will make it more convenient to travel between cities and towns.

paddyhyUID: 202095

11-3
120-test3
The lecture mainly discuss the giant-impact theory is convincing and reasonable by listing out three detail examples challenging what was stated in the reading passage that this theory is questionable.

To begin with, the speaker asserts that the trace of the giant-impact has already been erased by the force of the nature. This action happened four billion years ago, the erosion removed the mark from the rock surfaces. This perspective differs from what is maintained in the reading passage that if the theory was true, the impact would leave huge mark on the surface of the earth as a proof.

Furthermore, the speaker goes on to point out that if there is water in the moon, the hit developed from the hit would make the moon molten. What's more, the high temperature already made the water evaporated, so it is reasonable to contain no water in the moon. This is the second point used by the speaker to cast doubts on the writer's viewpoint that the rocks of the moon are dry.

Finally, the speaker opposed the writer's point by emphasizing that the density of the moon should be the same as the surface of the earth and should be lower than that of the center in the center. This contradicts what is stated in the reading that the density of the moon is much lower than the earth, the core of the moon constitutes takes much less part of the whole mass than that of the earth does.

To sum up, the points asserted by the speaker are totally different from the ideas ion the topics included in the read

canlanxingkongUID: 2623477

With the development of transportation tools, it will be very convenient for people to travel between cities and towns. Some people like the quiet environment of the(去掉) small town, while others prefer to the fast pace of living tempo in big cities. As far as I am concerned, to work in the（去掉）cities and to live in a small town is my ideal choice. 改为working/living in—比较好

Firstly, to live in a small town can give me an entirely comfortable environment to relax, especially in the moment of pressures. There are many harmony images coming into my mind. Like (这里能直接用like来连接从句么)when I wake up every morning without hearing any automobile noises, I feel I am surrounded with fresh airs and full of energy before go（going） back to face the challenges. What's more, the(去掉) people in a small town are usually more willing to help each others than those live in the big cities due to their same(这个词在这里合适么，想表达什么意思？) background and customs. I like to live with friendly neighbors, and always been cared by others, especially in the difficult situations.（and 后有语法错误，承接like to，就不能用been）
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Furthermore, to live in a small town won't bring me the same economic burden as to live in big cities. (这句话表达意思不明确哦)The reason is the houses are much more expensive in cities than in a small town. Take(Taking) my friend Kin who lives in the city of shanghai as a（an） example. Two third of her salary was used to pay (for)the loan of her apartment. And the apartment is so small that every time I go to his place, I have to share the bedroom with her, (人称写错了 his or her？)which will never happen in my house in the small town next to shanghai. : P* r' O6 b( _& v4 ^
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Finally, the advanced transportation tools like subway have been applied in many cities. It is very convenient for people to commute to work. So to live in the big cities feeling the serious competitions and to live in a small town enjoying a better living environment is not a dream any more. 最后一句话有很多语法错误，首先我感觉改为living in ---比较好，feeling 和 competition 后置定语表达的不准确，要不分开写吧 这样意思明确些
这里没有例子来证明
From what I have reasoned above, although the big cities maybe more attractive in some aspects, to live in a small town has more advantages. And with the improvement of people's lives, more and more people will have their own cars, which will make it more convenient to travel between cities and towns.

我觉得论证还是不够，分论点没有提好，论证的也不充分，有点乱的感觉，语言也要加强啊，我们一起努力！

canlanxingkongUID: 2623477

11-3
120-test3
The lecture mainly discuss（discusses） the giant-impact theory is convincing and reasonable by listing out three detail examples challenging what was stated in the reading passage that this theory is questionable.% I, ]- T4 {5 {( U! W

To begin with, the speaker asserts that the trace of the giant-impact has already been erased by the force of the nature. This action happened four billion years ago, the erosion removed the mark from the rock surfaces. This perspective differs from what is maintained in the reading passage that if the theory was true, the impact would leave huge mark on the surface of the earth as a proof.  y6 ]% \% @% e: P/ h  W4 m% E
写的不错
Furthermore, the speaker goes on to point out that if there is water in the moon, the hit developed from the hit would make the moon molten. What's more, the high temperature already made the water evaporated, so it is reasonable to contain no water in the moon. This is the second point used by the speaker to cast doubts on the writer's viewpoint that the rocks of the moon are dry.* `/ x6 h  ~' Q: ^0 M

Finally, the speaker opposed the writer's point by emphasizing that the density of the moon should be the same as the surface of the earth and should be lower than that of the center in the center. 这里可以展开阐述原因，听力里面有一点This contradicts what is stated in the reading that the density of the moon is much lower than the earth, the core of the moon constitutes takes much less part of the whole mass than that of the earth does.# u: X0 k9 v& |# K

To sum up, the points asserted by the speaker are totally different from the ideas ion the topics included in the read这句错误自己能改

整体不错，语言流利，要是把最后细节都写得很全就更好了，加油！

paddyhyUID: 202095

11-4号独立写作作业
With our development from childhood to grow-up, books and experiences are definitely the basic two sauces for us to gain knowledge. Some people may prefer to choice books as a better way when compared with experiences, however, in my part, I maintain that the experience is the unlimited sauce for me to absorb new knowledge.

To begin with, experience can act as a practical guide in my life, especially after I walked into the society. There are many differences between the basic principles stated in the book and the real feelings and conclusions coming from personal experiences. After graduate from universities, our major job is to transfer our knowledge learned from books to the practical uses. For example, before I began the internship in the Nokia Marketing department, I learned several courses about marketing when I was an undergraduate student. The well-understood marketing skills learned from the books cannot make me competitive among others. Only after several months of personal experiences can I know the essential meaning contained in these principles and make progress forward.

Furthermore, people can have experiences from everywhere and everybody. Whatever you are doing, whoever you are dealing with, you can always accumulate your experience. That is your treasure which cannot attained from the textbooks or the books written by some famous persons. As a Chinese famous proverb says “There must be a teacher among the three guys walking together." We should give ourselves more opportunities to practice in today's society, no matter how many difficulties will be confronted. The more experiences you have, the higher chances of success you will have.

Finally, compared with the print words of the book in the forms of ideas and concepts, experiences are more impressive and effective. Once you experienced, you will seldom forget them. That is the reason why the universities today all encourage their students to join some social activities rather than to stay at home reading more books. Like if I have chance to visit all the famous places of interests mentioned in my textbooks, I would never fail the geological test. That is how the experience works.

From the reasons that I mentioned above, to experiences more in our lives will make us better equipped and become more confident, more challenging in today's world. It is the treasure belonging to everyone, everybody can use it to avoiding making mistakes and realize the success.

liberlyUID: 2570733

With the development of transportation tools, it will be very convenient for people to travel between cities and towns. Some people like the quiet environment of the small town, while others prefer to（这个prefer to do，不能prefer to加名词） the fast pace of living tempo in big cities. As far as I am concerned, to work in the cities and to live in a small town is my ideal choice.
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Firstly, to live in a small town can give me an entirely comfortable environment to relax, especially in the moment of pressures（moment of pressure有点问题，想想怎么改）. There are many harmony（harmonious） images coming into my mind. Like when I wake up every morning without hearing any automobile noises, I feel I am surrounded with fresh airs and full of energy before go back to face the challenges. What's more, the people（people就行了，the people是人民） in a small town are usually more willing to help each others（each other） than those live in the big cities due to their same background and customs. I like to live with friendly neighbors, and always been cared by others, especially in the difficult situations.
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Furthermore, to live in a small town won't bring me the same economic burden as to live in big cities. The reason is the houses are much more expensive in cities than in a small town. Take my friend Kin who lives in the city of shanghai as a example. Two third of her salary was used to pay the loan of her apartment. And the apartment is so small that every time I go to his place, I have to share the bedroom with her（it sounds so sweet，does it？）, which will never happen in my house in the small town next to shanghai.   q0 b2 c5 t8 Y! h% T: v
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Finally, the advanced transportation tools like subway have been applied in many cities. It is very convenient for people to commute to work. So to live in the big cities feeling the serious competitions and to live in a small town enjoying a better living environment is not a dream any more.
From what I have reasoned above, although the big cities maybe more attractive in some aspects, to live in a small town has more advantages. And with the improvement of people's lives, more and more people will have their own cars, which will make it more convenient to travel between cities and towns.
听好，没啥大问题，就是长句子容易错，尽量别把句子拉太长了

shirley072UID: 2712200

With our development from childhood togrow-up, books and experiences are definitely the basic two sauces (sources,以后的这个词我就不标记啦)for us to gain knowledge. Some people may prefer to choice books as a betterway when compared with experiences, however, in my part (这个用法我不太确定),I maintain that the experience is the unlimited sauce for me to absorb newknowledge.


To begin with, experience can act as apractical guide in my life, especially after I walked (是不是不应该用过去式) into the society. There are manydifferences between the basic principles stated in the book and the realfeelings and conclusions coming from personal experiences. After graduate fromuniversities, our major job is to transfer our knowledge learned from books tothe practical uses. For example, before I began the internship in the NokiaMarketing department, I learned several courses about marketing when I was anundergraduate student. The well-understood marketing skills learned from thebooks cannot make me competitive among others. Only after several months ofpersonal experiences can I know the essential meaning contained in theseprinciples and make progress forward.


Furthermore, people can haveexperiences from everywhere and everybody. Whatever you are doing, whoever youare dealing with, you can always accumulate your experience. That is yourtreasure which cannot (be) attained from thetextbooks or the books written by some famous persons. As a Chinese famousproverb says “There must be a teacher among the three guys walkingtogether." We should give ourselves more opportunities to practice intoday's society, no matter how many difficulties will be confronted. The moreexperiences you have, the higher chances of success you will have.


Finally, compared with the print wordsof the book in the forms of ideas and concepts, experiences are more impressiveand effective. Once you experienced, you will seldom forget them. That is thereason why the universities today all encourage their students to join somesocial activities rather than to stay at home reading more books. Like if Ihave chance to visit all the famous places of interests mentioned in my textbooks,I would never fail the geological test. That is how the experience works.


From the reasons that I mentioned above, toexperiences more in our lives will make us better equipped and become moreconfident, more challenging in today's world. It is the treasure belonging toeveryone, everybody can use it to avoiding making mistakes and realize (achieve) the success.


我觉得写得不错，几个论证都很充分。
PS：最近荒芜了几天，看到这个题目就是不知道该怎么写，sigh，找不到什么感觉~~~~所以改得也不好，请包涵~~~~~
我要洗心革面~~~~~

paddyhyUID: 202095

11-5-独立写作
Since we can walk and speak, school is like our second home. The "parents" in this home is the teacher. So teachers play significant role in our learning process. However,
is it the best way for us to learn knowledge? My answer to this question is “no”, learning by ourselves is the best way, better than any other methods.

To begin with, teacher can just tell us the knowledge and experiences, which correspond to their role in society. What we need is to master them and transfer them into the practice use in our life. Only through the practice, the lessons and experiences accumulated by ourselves can we achieve the goal in our life. We should learn them from our heart and remember them in our heart. For example, I want to learn swim then I registered the Summer Swimming Class. No matter how many times the teacher showed me how to do it, I always failed. But after practices more and more in the swimming pool by myself, I finally got it. It is the progress that everyone who want to learn knowledge and skills have to experience and it is the best choice.

Furthermore, learning by ourselves can give us some personal space to develop our interests. We learn many subjects in school, some of them were actually for exams. In order to develop our interests, we need to learn by ourselves. We can search the information in the Internet, we can ask older people for their experiences and we can also discuss with our teacher. It is not just to follow the instructions of the teacher but to learn new things by your own desire.

Finally, the knowledge that mastered by ourselves can last a longer time in my mind. Still use my swimming class as an example. Once I acquired it by myself, I will never lose it. It can become much more better. But the theory and tips that the teacher told me may have already been forgotten in my mind. In other words, it is ourselves who understand ourselves best.

In sum, although teacher is the guider and instructor in our learning process, the best way for us to learn knowledge is to learn by ourselves. Because learning on our own initiative carries more weight over learning passively.

paddyhyUID: 202095

11-5综合写作
The lecture mainly discuss that the gas-explosion theory
used to explain the Tunguska (T) explosion is unconvincing by listing three reasons, challenging what was stated in the
reading passage that the event result from the "swamp gas" explosion rather than caused by an asteroid.

To begin with, the fragment and traces, according to the speaker, was tried to be found by the scientists 19 years after the impact. Also the explosion in Canada mentioned in the reading passage was detected just two weeks later. This perspective differs from what is maintained in the reading passage that no trace and fragment of the explosion can act as the proof to claim that the impact have nothing to do with the asteroid.

Furthermore, the speaker goes on to point out that it is not necessary for the asteroid to crash on the surface of the earth, it may have exploded in the air before arriving the earth. So it might not be an integrate rock any more when the impact happened. Then no crater would be created and left. This is the second point used by the speaker to cast doubt on the writer's viewpoint that if it was caused by the asteroid, there will be a crater found on the place.

Finally, the speaker opposes the writer's point by emphasizing that the huge gas fireball would not stay in one spot, and cannot concentrate on one single epicenter. So more places would be affected by the explosion. This contradicts what is stated in the reading that the explosion occurred adjacent to the earth and swamps in the summer will release some "swamp gas" to drive the explosion..

paddyhyUID: 202095

11-7作业

21. In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

Every person today can tell the obvious phenomenon that people are living longer than ever before. The reasons behind are so numerous and I will illustrate some major ones as follows.

Firstly, the improvement of our food is the key factor. Today, we can eat a variety of
kinds of food, such as vegetables, fruits and so on, which can provide more nutrition to us compared with what our ancestors had in the past can do. Take the basic material water as an example. My grandfather told me that people at that time usually just drunk water from the river. Although it was clean and less polluted, the germs and poisonous bacteria in it are not beneficial to health. On the contrary, the spring water that we drink today is produced after a series of purifying procedures and all are marked with the expiration date to keep the quality.

Equally important factor as food is the decrease of the work burden. In the past, without trucks, cell phones and computers, people needed to do it with hand and body, lots of labor work was the most obvious. But now, with the trucks, constructor only need to control the driving wheel, with the computer, engineers just need to sit in the office designing the product. In addition, people today have more intention to keep healthy because of the decrease of labor work, gyms all around the city can tell that.

Finally, the peaceful living society and advanced civilization are also conducing to people's lives. Wars and revolutions brought lots of disasters and loss to human society, every aspects of human life was affected. Today, we can live in a peaceful world without wars and fighting, everybody tries to contribute our world which in turn makes it much suitable for us to live our lives.

The reasons mentioned above are just the major ones, there are lots of other factors work together to tell us the truth that we are having a better life today.



Word Count: 314

paddyhyUID: 202095

11-7-综合写作


In the lecture, the speaker mainly asserts that prescribed fire is a effective, necessary way and is beneficial to residents by listing three opposite reasons, challenging what was stated in the reading passage that prescribed burning is irrational.

To begin with, prescribed fire, according to the speaker, in some areas, can reduce logs and piled-up fallen leaves which otherwise will become more and more as the decay slows. It can also help the forest to absorb more nutrition and to receive more sunlight through the gaps of a thinner forest. The chance of having a wild fire also will be decreased, which cannot be achieved by disking. This perspective differs from what is maintained in the reading passage that prescribed fire will result in air pollution and disking should be adopted.

Furthermore, the speaker goes on to point out that prescribed fire has already been conducted for a long time and proved to be safer. With the professional training and the exact location of time and place, prescribed fire acts as a much better way to benefit the ecological balance. This is the second point used by the speaker to cast doubts on the writer's viewpoint that prescribed fire induces unpredicted dangers to human people.

Finally, the speaker opposes the writer's point by emphasizing that prescribed fire cost less money and damage compared with the loss caused by the wild fire. He also points out the expense used for watering the wildfire can be ten times more than that put on prescribed fire. This contradicts what is stated in the reading that prescribed fire requires huge money including competent persons.

In sum, the points asserted by the speaker are totally different from the sides presented in the reading passage.

如是_ivyUID: 2704554

11-7-综合写作 } . ?! d5 Y+ O2 F. l/ |9 q  n" y In the lecture, the speaker mainly asserts that prescribed fire is a effective, necessary way and is beneficial to residents by listing three opposite reasons, challenging what was stated in the reading passage that prescribed burning is irrational. To begin with, prescribed fire, according to the speaker, in some areas, can reduce logs and piled-up fallen leaves which otherwise will become more and more as the decay slows. It can also help the forest to absorb more nutrition and to receive more sunlight through the gaps of a thinner forest. The chance of having a wild fire also will be decreased, which cannot be achieved by disking. This perspective differs from what is maintained in the reading passage that prescribed fire will result in air pollution and disking should be adopted.改完才发现我这个点听的真的很稀烂哦~~O(∩_∩)O~ Furthermore, the speaker goes on to point out that prescribed fire has already been conducted for a long time and proved to be safer. With the professional training and the exact location of time and place, prescribed fire acts as a much better way to benefit the ecological balance. This is the second point used by the speaker to cast doubts on the writer's viewpoint that prescribed fire induces unpredicted dangers to human people. Finally, the speaker opposes the writer's point by emphasizing that prescribed fire cost less money and damage compared with the loss caused by the wild fire. He also points out the expense used for watering the wildfire can be ten times more than that put on prescribed fire.好细节，听力真好哇~~羡慕 This contradicts what is stated in the reading that prescribed fire requires huge money including competent persons.8 h  n. W% h& L6 ~ In sum, the points asserted by the speaker are totally different from the sides presented in the reading passage. 看完大家的作文我要深深反思我的听力了~~泪奔而去~~