11.4 作文 by melody

melody106UID: 2559573

When it comes to the comparison between knowledge from books and that from practice, people hardly reach an agreement on which one is more significant and meaningful than the other for people. Considering the closer relation between experiece and our real society, however, I will side with the experince-source. There are two main reasons as follows.



First, it is true that knowledge included in books is numerous theories which have been concluded from practice, but we can not deny that when the precious experince is expressed in language it turns to be less vivid and harder to understand. Nevertheless, learning from experince could offer people chances to feel and consider in person. Take learning to play the piano for instance. There are plenty of books in market instructing students on how to play fluently and how to move the audience. But if students have never practiced time and time again, how could they achieve the excellent piano skills, let alone give a wonderful performance for others. So we need to involve ourselves in experiencing the matters that we eagerly want to grasp instead of just reading books.



In addition, knowledge we learned from our personal experience is more valuable and effective. For example, if a man falls in love with a pretty girl but is too shy to express his heart-felt feeling, what kind of strategy will he choose? Reading lots of books or asking the girl out to date? The answer would defenitly be the latter one. Owning to the general solutions stated in books and the specific characters the girl has, it is difficult for him figure out the perfect method to chase for that girl. So why not date that girl and have a romantic dinner to chat and share the time together? He will learn the girl more and find the best way to show his love.



All in all, although the knowledge of books can provide us several guidence for our practice, the precious experience which we acquire from pratice will be more effective because it has closer contact with our reality.


试图走简洁路线。举例以明志。

paddyhyUID: 202095

When it comes to the comparison between knowledge from books and that from practicepractice用的不错, people hardly reach an agreement on which one is more significant and meaningful than the other for people这个people就可以不用了吧前面已经有了. Considering the closer relation between experiece and our real society, however, I will side with the experince-sourceside可以这么用吗我不知道哎. There are two main reasons as follows.# J+ j) k5 h* p' v+ ` First, it is true that knowledge included in books is numerous theories which have been concluded 好多clude这里直接说come from好了。。。简洁路线啊from practice, but we can not deny that when the precious experince is expressed in language it turns to be less vivid and harder to understand. Nevertheless, learning from experince could offer people chances to feel and consider这里觉得不太对劲 in person. Take learning to play the piano for instance. There are plenty of books in market instructing students on how to play fluently and how to move用influence吧move可以这么用吗 the audience. But if students have never practiced time and time again, how could they achieve the excellent piano skills, let alone give a wonderful performance for others. So we need to involve ourselves in experiencing the matters that we eagerly want to grasp instead of just reading books. addition, knowledge we learned from our personal experience is more valuable and effective. For example, if a man falls in love with a pretty girl but is too shy to express his heart-felt feeling, what kind of strategy will he choose? Reading lots of books or asking the girl out to date? The answer would defenitly be the latter one. Owning to the general solutions stated in books and the specific characters the girl has, it is difficult for him figure out the perfect method to chase for that girl. So why not date that girl and have a romantic dinner to chat and share the time together? He will learn the girl more and find the best way to show his love.这里例子不错啊。。学习 Q" c% i 0 g# n5 y& J# _1 y1 o" p 5 j( s! k- P& v  _, J: \ All in all, although the knowledge of books can provide us several guidence for our practice, the precious experience which we acquire from pratice will be more effective because it has closer contactrelation好一点吧用 with our reality。 总体举的写得还行，但是用法上好像有点僵硬。。词汇上用的不地道。。就是虽然我也不怎么会写作文但是看也看了很多了。。给我的印象就是这样。。加油。。

gqm2009UID: 2717554

很有意思啊，一开始不太明白reading books 和 chasing a pretty girl  有什么关系。。看到后面看懂了，此处如果改为looking for advice from book 而不是 reading books, 好像更好点，一点小建议哈

shirley072UID: 2712200

When it comes to the comparison betweenknowledge from books and that from practice, people hardly reach an agreementon which one is more significant and meaningful than the other for people (去掉).Considering the closer relation between experiece and our real society(experience和society有什么closer的联系么？也许应该尝试换一个表达方式吧我想), however, I will side with theexperince-source. There are two main reasons as follows.


First, it is true that knowledgeincluded in books is numerous theories which have been concludedfrom practice, but we can not deny that when the precious experince isexpressed in language(要不这里直接说书本上的知识less vivid)it turns to be less vivid and harder to understand. Nevertheless, learning fromexperince could offer people chances to feel and consider in person. Takelearning to play the piano for instance. There are plenty of books in marketinstructing students on how to play fluently and how to move the audience(别扭呢).But if students have never practiced time and time again, how could theyachieve (command) the excellent piano skills,let alone give a wonderful performance for others. So we need to involveourselves in experiencing the matters that we eagerly want to grasp insteadof just reading books.

In addition, knowledge welearned from our personal experience is more valuable and effective.For example, if a man falls in love with a pretty girl but is too shy toexpress his heart-felt feeling, what kind of strategy will he choose? Readinglots of books or asking the girl out to date? The answer would defenitly be thelatter one. Owning to the general solutions stated in books and the specificcharacters the girl has, it is difficult for him figure out the perfect methodto chase for that girl. So why not date that girl and have a romantic dinnerto chat and share the time together? He will learn the girl more and findthe best way to show his love.

All in all, although the knowledge ofbooks can provide us several guidence for our practice, the precious experiencewhich we acquire from pratice will be more effective because it has closer contactwith our reality.

论证不错
主要是句子，词汇的应用还要加强

melody106UID: 2559573

side with支持  作动词用
move audience用法没错，感动的意思啊，童鞋们 influence??听唱音乐会不会产生很大影响吧，呵呵。
command似乎是指挥命令的意思哦，童鞋批改作文要查词。
嗯，谢谢各位指点，大家看的很仔细，O(∩_∩)O~。