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Nowadays, it is generally believed that theissue about whether governments should pay more attention on naturalenvironment problems than on economic development has became an hot topic. Somepeople hold the opinion that as the development of economic, the naturalenvironment will be destroyed, so less attention should be paid on theeconomic. But from my point of view, I think the economic is also very importantfor our life, and we should set up the right view about development andenvironment.

Admittedly, in the past few decades, as thedramatic increase of economic, the natural environment has been destroyed alot. That is mainly because people hold the wrong attitude about economicdevelopment. Such as, in order to build more buildings, the trees are over cut.So the coverage of forest reduced intensely. This cause a lot animals whichhabitat in the forest lose their home, some of them are extinguished. Hence theecosystem has been destroyed, this also has brought painful harm to our humanbeing, such as flood or drought.

However, this can not be the reason thatwhy we should pay less attention on economic developments. Because a lot ofplaces around the world are poorly developed, people in these areas still facethe problems such as starvation and diseases. So the development of economic isnecessary. Take an remote town in the northwest of China for example, peopleliving in there still have not the chance to live a happier life because thenatural environment are so harsh and people can not even have a full dinner.Besides, there is no modern transportation tool, so they seldom haveopportunities to go out. Therefore, it is important for the government to helpthem to better local economic and make them life become better.

Furthermore, taking the issue of environmentand economic development together, a new sustain economic development modeshould be proposed. Under this mode, both the economic can be developed and theenvironment should not be destroyed. Taking green energy for instance, as weknown, the burning of fossil fuels has brought a lot of CO2 into the air whichcan cause green effect, the risen of sea level and global warming. So the researchersbegan to use water and wind and solar energy to produce electronic, these kindsof energies are green and reusable, so this is a good way to develop economicand bring no harm to the environment.

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Nowadays, it is generally believed that theissue about whether governments should pay more attention on naturalenvironment problems than on economic development has became an hot topic. Somepeople hold the opinion that as the development of economic, the naturalenvironment will be destroyed, so less attention should be paid on theeconomic. But from my point of view, I think the economic--enconomy is also very importantfor our life, and we should set up the right view about development andenvironment

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