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本帖最后由 小小amy 于 2009-11-15 22:29 编辑

今天和外教交流了下,感想如下:

提一点口语的tip,结构清晰,总分(这里可以3小点)总,加上这些转接词,其实可以很通顺的。托福的作文,老师觉得不要老想着写多华丽丽的复杂句子,把话讲清楚了,条理清晰,逻辑关系明确,最简单的句子也会带来惊喜。老师说我讲的很清楚,写出来就浆糊了……囧……


补充下斑竹的话(第二页)

阅读/听力时抓连接词能增进理解,听力还和笔记内容紧密相关,很多时候抓对连接词就能抓住重点(当然,连接词本身不是重点)
口语/作文时 使用合适漂亮的连接词能让人快速理解你想表达的内容(相当于他们在做阅读/听力)
总之 连接词对段落/文章的结构和逻辑很有帮助,用好很必要


以下的这些是可以google出来的,讲话讲的卡其实除了结构不清晰,还可能因为不知道怎么承接句子与句子。大家量力而行,多记2个总有好处的。

Using transitional words and phrases
helps papers read more smoothly.  
They provide logical organization and understandability
and improve the connections and transitions between thoughts

A coherent paper allows the reader
to flow from the first supporting point to the last.

Transitions indicate relations,
whether within a sentence, paragraph, or paper.
This list illustrates "relationships" between ideas,
followed by words and phrases that can connect them.

Addition:
also, again, as well as, besides, coupled with, furthermore, in addition, likewise, moreover, similarly

Consequence:
accordingly, as a result, consequently, for this reason, for this purpose,
hence, otherwise, so then, subsequently, therefore, thus, thereupon, wherefore

Generalizing:
as a rule, as usual, for the most part,
generally, generally speaking, ordinarily, usually

Exemplifying:
chiefly, especially, for instance, in particular, markedly, namely,
particularly,  including, specifically, such as

Illustration:
for example, for instance, for one thing, as an illustration,
illustrated with, as an example, in this case

Emphasis
above all, chiefly, with attention to, especially, particularly, singularly

Similarity:
comparatively, coupled with, correspondingly, identically, likewise, similar, moreover, together with

Exception:
aside from, barring, besides, except, excepting, excluding, exclusive of, other than, outside of, save

Restatement:
in essence, in other words, namely, that is, that is to say,
in short, in brief, to put it differently

Contrast and Comparison:
contrast, by the same token, conversely, instead, likewise,
on one hand, on the other hand, on the contrary, rather,
similarly, yet, but, however, still, nevertheless, in contrast

Sequence:
at first, first of all, to begin with, in the first place, at the same time,
for now, for the time being, the next step, in time, in turn, later on,
meanwhile, next, then, soon, the meantime, later, while, earlier,
simultaneously, afterward, in conclusion, with this in mind,

Summarizing:
after all, all in all, all things considered, briefly, by and large, in any case, in any event,
in brief, in conclusion, on the whole, in short, in summary, in the final analysis,
in the long run, on balance, to sum up, to summarize, finally

Diversion:
by the way, incidentally

Direction:
here, there, over there, beyond, nearly, opposite, under, above,
to the left, to the right, in the distance

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tpo9 independent writing
The passage says the new form of hydrogen-based fuel cell will beat the traditional internal-combustion engine and take place of it. However, the lecture pointed out sharply that none of those reasons are cogent in front of the reality.

Regarding to the dependence on the resource, both an internal-combustion and a hydrogen-based fuel cell rely on its own source. The writer thinks that the reliance on fuel like gasoline and oil will run out easily while hydrogen lasts longer which can be derived from various resources like water and general gas. The speaker contradicts it by providing the chemical process of deriving hydrogen which illustrates the availability of hydrogen is not so easy. This process will require strict technology supports and will ultimately lead to the hardness of providing or store hydrogen.

Further more, the writer assumes the pollution from the internal-combustion engine produces more pollution and the hydrogen doesn’t. Actually the producing of hydrogen, as mentioned by the speaker, requires a lot of gasoline and coal cost. This will obviously produce much more pollution than the current fuel usage in the internal-combustion engine, and therefore the advantage of so-called “non-pollution” is objected.

Plus, the economical competitive power of the fuel-cell engine will not likely beat down the internal-combustion engine. The writer failed to realize that the container of the hydrogen is very expensive and rare while the material cannot be replaced by cheaper one. This will obviously lift the cost of making a fuel-cell engine and undermine the competitive capability.

Above all, the writer’s opinion is not good presented and not convincing in front of the speaker’s reasoning which considers all-round factors. That’s to say the fuel-cell engine is not easily feasible in current condition, not to mention taking place of the internal-combustion engine.
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连接词很重要 谢谢LZ分享
补充一点我的看法:
阅读/听力时抓连接词能增进理解,听力还和笔记内容紧密相关,很多时候抓对连接词就能抓住重点(当然,连接词本身不是重点)
口语/作文时 使用合适漂亮的连接词能让人快速理解你想表达的内容(相当于他们在做阅读/听力)
总之 连接词对段落/文章的结构和逻辑很有帮助,用好很必要
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