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[活动] Q的11月30日综合作文,一周工作四天还是五天 [复制链接]

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发表于 2009-11-30 20:43:39 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
综合写作  TPO1
没计时,要想20分钟完成还是蛮挑战的。请砸。

The reading passage claims that companies should offer the employees the option of reducing their work time from five days a week to four days. In the lecture, the speaker opposes this opinon.

To begin with, the lecture challenges the prediction of company profits increase. With the employees working less hours per week, hence more people on the payroll, due to the relatively fixed trainning cost and medical benefit that has to be spent on each emplyee, the company would probably have to pay more dollars on labor cost.

As it comes to unemployment rates, the lecture argues it will unfortunately not be reduced in the way the reading suggests. In order to avoid extra costs on labor, the companys will push the existing employees to work overtime, or finish equal amount of work in less time. Consequantely, no more job possitions will be created.

In addition, the expectation of promoting individual workers' life quality is also denied by the speaker, based on the reason that those who take this new option will have more chance than others to be layed off, and be less likely to step forward in their career.

To sum up, none of the three points the passage illustrats is supported by the speaker.
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不抛弃,不放弃,那些做到这六个字的人,抛弃了什么,又放弃了什么?
班长,我又想明白啦!
我不知道后面的路有多长,可我想坚持着跑完全程。
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发表于 2009-12-2 21:59:00 |只看该作者
The reading passage claims that companies should offer the employees the option of reducing their work time from five days a week to four days. In the lecture, the speaker opposes this opinon.% H; A% @0 ^9 }. L( T$ D

begin with, the lecture challenges the prediction of company profits increase. (改成the increase of the company profits 比较好吧!)With the employees working less hours per week, hence more people on the payroll, due to the relatively fixed trainning cost and medical benefit that has to be spent on each emplyee, the company would probably have to pay more dollars on labor cost./ M# Z+ `4 k) O; t
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As it comes to unemployment rates, the lecture argues it will unfortunately not be reduced in the way the reading suggests. In order to avoid extra costs on labor, the companys will push the existing employees to work overtime, or finish equal amount of work in less time. Consequantely, no more job possitions will be created.

In addition, the expectation of promoting individual workers' life quality is also denied by the speaker, based on the reason that those who take this new option will have more chance than others to be layed off, and be less likely to step forward in their career.

To sum up, none of the three points the passage illustrats is supported by the speaker.

文章写得很漂亮呀!我都自愧不如了!:L
听力中的关键点都有的。语言也很好。
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发表于 2009-12-2 22:29:29 |只看该作者
惭愧!!!那是因为我第一次写综合作文,所以不要脸地超时,并且查词霸。。。。。
谢谢三儿的点评
不抛弃,不放弃,那些做到这六个字的人,抛弃了什么,又放弃了什么?
班长,我又想明白啦!
我不知道后面的路有多长,可我想坚持着跑完全程。

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