明日萌 12.5的综合作文 恐龙

daboraUID: 2574809

Scientists challenged the the opinion that dinosaurs are endotherms by about three points。Firstly they take polar dinosaurs for example. Discoveries of dinsaur fossils in polar area seem to provid the evidence of living clues of endotherms, however, climate in polar regions that time is warmer. In consequence, dinosaurs could not migrate from a warm enough areas to others.Although they have legs on their own bodies,which would not illustrate sufficiently that dinasous have enough energy to run around ,limited by their large proportion of weight for bodies.
Considering the bone structure, don not ignore that growth rings in dinosaurs, indicating the stop or slowing down of growth in cooler seasons and everchanging speed of bone growing proven to be the characteristics that dinasours are not endotherms.
第一次写，不太熟悉题型，欢迎建议阿！

我是chineseladyUID: 2662783

Scientists challenged the the opinion that dinosaurs are endotherms by about three points。Firstly they -->who??take polar dinosaurs for example. 这文章本来主要说恐龙,take dinosaurs for example用在这里有点不合适
Discoveries of dinsaur fossils in polar area seem to provid the evidence of living clues of endotherms, however, climate in polar regions that time is时态warmer. In consequence, dinosaurs could not migrate from a warm enough areas to others.跟原文有出入, 说是winter时候可以migrate or hiberate. Although they have legs on their own bodies当然肯定有legs,不过是位置的问题,which would not illustrate sufficiently that dinasous have enough energy to run around ,limited by their large proportion of weight for bodies.

Considering the bone structure, don not ignore that growth rings in dinosaurs, indicating the stop or slowing down of growth in cooler seasons and everchanging speed of bone growing proven to be the characteristics that dinasours are not endotherms. 不知道多少字, 小作文的字数怎么也要上200,感觉你的好像没到. 有点语法错误,其实用模板也不一定就好, 比较主张有自己的方法写.听力的地方个别有出入

tina-gaoUID: 2719334

我没写过这篇作文，但是很抱歉地说，结构不清晰，感觉混乱没条理，我也不是特别赞同一定要用模板，我建议你了解下美国人写文章的思路，毕竟我们是考人家的试，知己知彼，百战百胜咯。。。。希望采纳哈。。。。

daboraUID: 2574809

ok,多谢大家的指教哈，一定改正！

SilentScorpiusUID: 2686998

Scientists challenged the the opinion that dinosaurs are endotherms by about three points。Firstlythey take (he takes)polar dinosaurs for example. Discoveries of dinsaur fossilsin polar area seem to provid (provide)the evidence of living clues ofendotherms, however, climate in polar regions that time is warmer. Inconsequence, dinosaurs could
(would)not migrate from a warm enough areas toothers(other places).Although they have legs on their own bodies(细节不全，应该是underneath their body),which would notillustrate ()sufficiently that dinasous have enough energy to run around(这个我没注意到。。。),limited by their large proportion of weight for bodies.
8 y6 A, r- U2 QConsideringthe bone structure, （没有主语）don not ignore that growth rings in dinosaurs,indicating the stop or slowing down of growth in cooler seasons andeverchanging speed of bone growing proven to be the characteristicsthat dinasours are not endotherms.(得包含growth ring这个细节吧）

LZ可以试试用模板来写，条理容易写清楚。另外，还是要注意下语法的。