【clover】issue25 习作by黑竹

黑竹UID: 2753377

TOPIC: ISSUE25 - "Anyone can make things bigger and more complex. What requires real effort and courage is to move in the opposite direction-in other words, to make things as simple as possible."
WORDS: 320          TIME: 05:24:14          DATE: 2010-2-7 16:19:27


Not only making simple things need real effort and courage, but also making big and complex things require great effort and courage. People enjoy simple and ease lifestyle, and making the social system more simple and more efficient always requires great effort and courage. On the other hand, when it comes to the industrial world, companies are engaged in producing complex products, which also require great effort.

First, as we know, any revolution that make social system more simple need great effort and courage. It is not easy for the society to leave the past behind and move on to a better position, which is more simple and more efficient. A social revolution always faces different aspects of pressure from different groups of people. The revolutionaries must muster up great courage and make great effort to put the new regulations and policies into operation. Similarly, it also requires great effort and courage for people to pursue a simple and ease life. people need to make real effort to keep their lives away from the trifles which annoy them.

However, in the world of industry, companies try their best to make their products more complex to stay ahead of their competitors. For example, the computer's software is bigger and bigger, more and more complex as time pass by. Considering the ever increasingly complex machines, companies and engineers need to spend a lot of time and make great effort to design,test and produce these machines. So it is also not easy to make thing bigger and more complex. As a matter of fact, making things bigger and more complex requires the same great effort and courage as making thing more simple do.

In summary, both making things bigger and more complex and making things more simple require real effort and courage. In some fields, people pursue things simple and efficiency; while in others, people are engaged in making things big and complex.

JulymayUID: 2645085

Not only making simple things need real effort and courage, but also making big and complex things require（要第三人称单数吧~） great effort and courage. People enjoy simple and ease（adj.?） lifestyle, and making the social system more simple and more efficient always requires great effort and courage. On the other hand, when it comes to the industrial world, companies are engaged in producing complex products, which also require great effort.

First, as we know, any revolution that makes social system more simple need great effort and courage. It is not easy for the society to leave the past behind and move on to a better position, which is more simple and more efficient. A social revolution always faces different aspects of pressure from different groups of people. The revolutionaries must muster up (召集)great courage and make great effort to put the new regulations and policies into operation. Similarly, it also requires great effort and courage for people to pursue a simple and ease life. people need to make real effort to keep their lives away from the trifles which annoy them.(这里说的两方面我觉得不是特别明确，界限有点模糊~)

However, in the world of industry, companies try their best to make their products more complex to stay ahead of their competitors. For example, the computer's software is bigger（我觉得用big可能不太恰当） and bigger, more and more complex as time pass（是不是应该用passing啊？）
by. Considering the ever increasingly complex machines, companies and engineers need to spend a lot of time and （建议改为to）make great effort to design, test and produce these machines. So it is also not easy to make thing bigger and more complex. As a matter of fact, making things bigger and more complex requires the same great effort and courage as making thing more simple do.

In summary, both making things bigger and more complex and making things more simple require real effort and courage. In some fields, people pursue things simple and efficiency; while in others, people are engaged in making things big and complex.（总体的论述是清晰的。逻辑也能被接受。但是在两方面的论述<easy和complex>上，不够全面。比如complex只说了工业，我觉得可能不够有说服力~）

黑竹UID: 2753377

Not only making simple things need real effort and courage, but also making big and complex things requires great effort and courage. People enjoy simple and easy lifestyle, and making the social system more simple and more efficient always requires great effort and courage. On the other hand, when it comes to the industrial world, companies are engaged in producing complex products, which also require great effort.

As we know, any revolution that makes social system more simple need great effort and courage. It is not easy for the society to leave the past behind and move on to a better position, which is more simple and more efficient. A social revolution always faces different aspects of pressure from different groups of people. The revolutionaries must muster up great courage and make great effort to put the new regulations and policies into operation. Similarly, it also requires great effort and courage for people to pursue a simple and easy life. People need to make real effort to keep their lives away from the trifles which annoy them. As a result, making thing simple almost always requires real effort and courage.

However, in the world of industry, companies try their best to make their products more complex to stay ahead of their competitors. For example, the volume of computer's software is bigger and bigger, and the interior program is more and more complex, as time goes by. What is more, considering the ever increasingly complex machines. Companies and engineers need to spend a lot of time and make great effort to design, test and produce these machines. So it is also not easy to make thing bigger and more complex. As a matter of fact, making things bigger and more complex requires the same great effort and courage as making thing more simple do.

In summary, both making things bigger and more complex and making things more simple require real effort and courage. In some fields, people pursue things simple and efficiency; while in some others, people are engaged in making things big and complex.

misirUID: 2684938

Not only making simple things need real effort and courage, but also making big and complex things require great effort and courage. People enjoy simple and ease lifestyle, and making the social system simpler and more efficient always requires great effort and courage. On the other hand, when it comes to the industrial world, companies are engaged in producing complex products, which also require great effort.(你是不是想写成总分式呢？改写下饿。。。划线句重复了三遍，这样读起来很累的。。)

First, as we know, any revolution that make social system more simple need great effort and courage. It is not easy for the society to leave the past behind and move on to a better position, which is more simple and more efficient. A social revolution always faces different aspects of pressure from different groups of people. The revolutionaries must muster up great courage and make great effort to put the new regulations and policies into operation. Similarly, it also requires great effort and courage for people to pursue a simple and ease life. people need to make real effort to keep their lives away from the trifles which annoy them.

However, in the world of industry, companies try their best to make their products more complex to stay ahead of their competitors. For example, the computer's software is bigger and bigger（？？）, more and more complex as time pass by. Considering the ever increasingly complex machines, companies and engineers need to spend a lot of time and make great effort to design, test and produce these machines. So it is also not easy to make thing bigger and more complex. As a matter of fact, making things bigger and more complex requires the same great effort and courage as making thing more simple do.

In summary, both making things bigger and more complex and making things more simple require real effort and courage. In some fields, people pursue things simple and efficiency; while in others, people are engaged in making things big and complex.


错误有点多的说~例子不够有力。