美利坚 TPO8 by rjyuu

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In the reading material, the speaker asserted that the accuracy of the Chevalier's memoir was open to question. In the listening material, the speaker presented conflicting viewpoints, as discussed below.

To start with, the author cast doubt on Chevalier's wealth in Switzerland. The speaker, however, pointed out that having borrowed a great deal of money from a Swiss merchant did not necessarily mean that Chevalier was actually very poor at that time. She explained that it took time to convert assesses into money, and Chevalier needs to sell first to get his money back.

Besides, the author stated the records about the conversation between Chevalier and the famous writer Voltaire were not likely to be very accurate, the speaker, on contrast, held a different viewpoint. She maintained that since Chevalier wrote down everything he could think of about the conversation after the guests had left, there was no reason to be skeptical about the accuracy of the conversations. Not to mention it is confirmed that Chevalier had indeed consulted the records he made before he wrote the memoir.

What's more, the author supported the idea that Chevalier might not have really escaped from the prison in the way as he depicted in the memoir. The speaker, however, argued that the author's explanations were not tenable. she stated that at that time many prisoners with more powerful friends failed to escape from the prison by bribing the jailers. Also, since records showed that the ceiling was repaired after Chevalier's escaping, there was no doubt that Chevalier escaped as he had mentioned in the memoir.

From what have been mentioned above, the speaker and the author conflict with each other in whether the Chevalier's memoir is accurate or not.

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In the reading material, the speaker asserted that the accuracy of the Chevalier's memoir was open to question. In the listening material, the speaker presented conflicting viewpoints, as discussed below.言简意赅~不错~

To start with, the author cast doubt on Chevalier's wealth in Switzerland.（阅读中内容说的太少了，说出阅读中的原因才能让你更好的说明listening是怎么反对阅读的~） The speaker, however, pointed（points这里用现在时就行了吧~） out that having borrowed a great deal of money from a Swiss merchant did not necessarily mean that Chevalier was actually very poor at that time. She explained（explains） that it took time to convert assesses（啥意思？我在听力中也听到好像这个词了，不过不知道放在是什么意思，就改成goods了） into money, and Chevalier needs to sell first（好像是property吧） to get his money back（这里只要是阅读细节不全）.

Besides, the author stated the records about the conversation between Chevalier and the famous writer Voltaire were not likely to be very accurate, （为什么not accurate呢？应该说的清楚些~）the speaker, on contrast, held a different viewpoint. She maintained（maintains） that since Chevalier wrote down everything he could think of about the conversation after the guests had left,（这里最好说下细节，比如提到的note 和journal~）there was no reason to be skeptical about the accuracy of the conversations. Not to mention it is confirmed that Chevalier had indeed consulted the records he made before he wrote the memoir.

What's more, the author supported the idea that Chevalier might not have really escaped from the prison in the way as he depicted in the memoir. The speaker, however, argued that the author's explanations were not tenable. She stated that at that time many prisoners with more powerful friends failed to escape from the prison by bribing the jailers. Also, since records showed that the ceiling was repaired after Chevalier's escaping, there was no doubt that Chevalier escaped as he had mentioned in the memoir.（这个点听力中细节不错，很全）7 R8 C! c% w5 |
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From what have been mentioned above, the speaker and the author conflict with each other in whether the Chevalier's memoir is accurate or not.

UU写的不错，建议UU以后多写点阅读中的细节，不然有点让人摸不着头脑~还有就是，我看UU在陈述阅读和听力中观点的时候用的都是过去式，个人认为这里用一般现在式就行了~在说memoir中的观点时才必须用过去式~加油~O(∩_∩)O~

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谢 了！

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