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153"Students should bring a certain skepticism to whatever they study. They should question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively."

论点：应该具备怀疑精神，但并不是全盘否认
1.学生所学的东西是前人经验的积累，这些东西有固定的套路，容易让人陷入定势思维，因此应该具备一定的质疑精神。没有怀疑就没有突破。伽利略。拿破仑

但是每一个新的突破都是在现有的成就的基础上取得的。全盘否认并不可行。首先，前人的东西有其可取之处，你的怀疑可能前人已经尝试过。正因为不可行，所以才放弃。其次，如果对于每一样东西都怀疑的话，就会浪费巨大的精力在怀疑上，得不偿失。牛顿。

Plato is dear to me, but dearer still is truth.The ancient saying from Aristotle spreads for years and many people regard it as their motto.While we apply it to every areas and everytime,it is just poorly support by empirical evidence.From my viewpoint,it is not a wise idea to question whatever we study for the reason that maybe the act is just a waste of time.
     Undeniably,skepticism is one of the important factors which influence the progress of history.Many advances are acquired on the base of skepticism.Knowledge in schools is the summary of the predecessors which is in a certain style that they thought is correct.For this reason,the knowledge easily make the imaginative students the same type of person and efface their colourful thoughts which impedes them to achieve a variety of successes. Being skeptical to the rules,many certain prominent celebrities made their profoundly contribution to the society.Without being skeptical to the laws and principles of his time , Galileo would not won the respectful titles such as "the father of astronomy","father of modern science".And another remarkable example is Napoleon contraried to everyone's expectations and commonsense crossing the Alps.Which leads to his finally success.So advances and successes desire for the skepticism spirit.
      However,a blind belief in skepticism is very harmful.Every achievement in history bases on the predecessor's efforts.Netwon said :"If I have seen further ,it is by standing upon the shoulders of Giants."The surprising legacy predecessors handed down to us is great wealth for us.A blind skeptical with the legacy sometimes is totally a waste of time.A forerunner may have the same doubts as yours and he or she had proved that it was infeasible.So your repeating work is possibly another failure finally.At the same time,you can not focus well on one thing if you are always busy being questionable to everything.A research may related to so laws that it's impossible for one person to prove everyone themselves.Granted that you do finish this work ,it may worth nothing but waste you time and energy.It is not a right manner for one to be busy arguing with others over the present laws and forgetting his duty is to build a new building.
       To sum up,skepticism is an important spirit that contribute to our society.We affirm its value and contribution.But I disagree with the speaker's claim that students should bring a certain skepticism to whatever they study.History proved it sometimes just a waste of time.The correct way for us is to keep clear mind and build a new "skycraper" for the society by properly using the present laws.

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Plato is dear to me, but dearer still is truth.The ancient saying from Aristotle spreads for years and many people regard it as their motto.While we apply it to every areas and every time(这个不应该和前面的并列吧？),it is just poorly support by empirical evidence.From my viewpoint,it is not a wise idea to question whatever we study for the reason that maybe the act is just a waste of time（wasting time）.
     Undeniably,skepticism is one of the important factors which influence the progress of history.Many advances are acquired on the 删 base of skepticism.Knowledge in schools is the summary of the predecessors which is in a certain style that they thought is correct.For this reason,the knowledge easily make the imaginative students the same type of person and efface their colorful thoughts which impedes them to achieve a variety of successes. Being skeptical to the rules, many certain prominent celebrities made their profoundly\profound contribution to the society. Without being skeptical to the laws and principles of his time (最好换个说法), Galileo would not won the respectful titles such as "the father of astronomy", "father of modern science". And another remarkable example is Napoleon contraried\contradict to everyone's expectations and commonsense crossing the Alps. Which leads\led to his finally success. So advances and successes desire for the skepticism spirit.
      However, a blind belief in skepticism is very harmful. Every achievement in history bases \is based on the predecessor's efforts. Newton said :"If I have seen further ,it is by standing upon the shoulders of Giants." The surprising legacy predecessors handed down to us is great wealth for us. A blind skeptical with the legacy sometimes is totally a waste of time.A forerunner may have the same doubts as yours and he or she had proved that it was infeasible. So your repeating work is possibly another failure finally. At the same time, you can not focus well on one thing if you are always busy being questionable to everything.A research may related to so laws that it's impossible for one person to prove everyone themselves. Granted that you do finish this work ,it may worth nothing but waste you time and energy. It is not a right manner for one to be busy arguing with others over the present laws and forgetting his duty is to build a new building.
       To sum up, skepticism is an important spirit that contribute to our society.We affirm its value and contribution. But I disagree with the speaker's claim that students should bring a certain skepticism to whatever they study. History proved it sometimes just a waste of time. The correct way for us is to keep clear mind and build a new "skyscraper\ skyscraper " for the society by properly using the present laws.

总的来说，逻辑清晰，段落之间的衔接做的不错，例子也不错，但是有些拼写错误和语法错误。原命题讲的是怀疑，但是 是以学生的口吻提出来的，所以最好有一段提到教育里的怀疑精神的培养。

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