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“The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society’s ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people.”


The statement asserts that the way people look, dress and act reveals their attitudes, interests and society values. I strongly agree that in certain respects the dress, act and custom are accurate indicators to reflect society’s ideas and values about people. However, in other respects they are not.

Turing first to the way people look and dress in certain respects would reflect on their status and society’s value and it as the accurate indicator to inform people their attitudes and behavior. A society whose member looks superiority might be a high society status and get pleasure from prodigal live, never to anxious for eating and spending. The appearance for apparel would reflect different customs which people in the society and their nationalities. The Arabian’s apparel is always strictly and based on the Islamic principle and location climates. Most Arabian men wear ankle-shirt made by cotton. In harsh climates, they would in a camel-hair cloak over the top. Arabian women are required to wear abaya and niqab which is a veil overcome women’s face and usually leaves a long open slot for the eyes.

I turn next to the way people act, in certain respects habits and lifestyles would indicate people’s society values and ideas. For instances, the catholic would go to Catholic Church every Sunday and the people who believe in Catholicism usually wear a necklace of cross. In modern society, people would like to spend much more money to travel all around world even travel into space. The habits indicate that the society ideas that the life become better than before and people’s ideas of life have changed tremendous. When my parents young they have not enough money and they put their own income into my education and family daily life so they have no money to enjoy journey. But it is quiet different to twenty years ago. They gain more income than before and never worry about daily life’s expending so our family have flushness money to travel.

On the other hand, society would change people’s dress and society values by one and more respects. People’s apparel modified all the time from long times ago when human being had their own cloth. For instance, in primitive society human being based on hunting and lived in forest they just wear cloth made by some leaves. With society developed, people began to wear cloth made by cotton even silk. Nowadays, people’s dress is fashion and different in different region with varieties of culture. What they would dress is flounced by fashion magazine and TV shows.



To sum up, the statement is value, it record most people’s look, dress and act are associated with society in which way would
influence each other. And in other certain, people might hire their society through appearance that we could not observe their society attitudes and values by behavior and appearance.
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发表于 2010-2-26 09:30:28 |只看该作者
1# BobbieZZ

The statement asserts that the way people look, dress and act reveals their attitudes, interests and society values. I strongly agree that in certain respects the dress, act and custom are accurate indicators to reflect society’s ideas and values about people. However, in other respects they are not.

Turing first to the way people look and dress in certain respects would reflect on their status and society’s value and it as the accurate indicator to inform people their attitudes and behavior. A society whose member looks superiority might be a high society status and get pleasure from prodigal live, never to anxious for eating and spending. The appearance for apparel would reflect different customs which people in the society and their nationalities. The Arabian’s apparel is always strictly and based on the Islamic principle and location climates. Most Arabian men wear ankle-shirt made by cotton. In harsh climates, they would in a camel-hair cloak over the top. Arabian women are required to wear abaya and niqab which is a veil overcome women’s face and usually leaves a long open slot for the eyes.


I turn next to the way people act, in certain respects habits and lifestyles would indicate people’s society values and ideas. For instances, the catholic would go to Catholic Church every Sunday and the people who believe in Catholicism usually wear a necklace of cross. In modern society, people would like to spend much more money to travel all around world even travel into space. The habits indicate that the society ideas that the life become better than before and people’s ideas of life have changed tremendous. When my parents (were)young they have not enough money and they put their own income into my education and family daily life so they have no money to enjoy journey. But it is quiet different to twenty years ago. They gain more income than before and never worry about daily life’s expending so our family have flushness money to travel.

On the other hand, society would change people’s dress and society values by one and more respects. People’s apparel modified all the time from long times ago when human being had their own cloth. For instance, in primitive society human being based on hunting and lived in forest they just wear cloth made by some leaves. With society developed, people began to wear cloth made by cotton even silk. Nowadays, people’s dress is fashion and different in different region with varieties of culture. What they would dress is flounced by fashion magazine and TV shows.



To sum up, the statement is value, it record most people’s look, dress and act are associated with society in which way would
influence each other. And in other certain, people might hire their society(这句没看懂。。。) through appearance that we could not observe their society attitudes and values by behavior and appearance.


我觉得这篇issueLZ没有明确证明自己的观点。
如对于穿着的描述,第二段LZ表达了穿着可以反映社会的价值观,但却没有给出反面的例子(第四段的内容只说明了社会会改变人的穿着,但这不说明人的穿着不反映社会的价值了)
对于行为方面也存在类似的问题。
语法问题和Argument类似。
我刚写issue不久,没有多少经验,如果有什么不当的地方希望指正,大家多交流!

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发表于 2010-2-26 14:54:33 |只看该作者
2# Narashy

谢谢~我也刚刚开始写,有些逻辑写着写着就和开始列的提纲对不上了。这篇文我可能理解的时候存在一些偏差,忽略了互相直接的关系

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