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Without doubut,
parents, as the one who accompany with the children from the most beginning of their lives, may exert a great infuence on their children, especially in their formation of sense of value and attitiude towords the surroundings. But when it comes to the issue of the best teachers, I don’t think parents are entitled to it.
The most immediate reason that I disagree with the following statement that parents are the best teacher is that parents’ intrinsic characters are not qualified enough to be the best teacher. As normal human beings, parents are absolutely more or less have some bad habits which they may sometimes even can not realize or recognize. However, instinctively, children tend to imitate their parents’ behavior, whatever good or bad ones. For example, some children learn bad words from their parents even when they still haven’t acquire a clear definition of bad words. On the other hand, many attitudes and views towards the world provided by parents are not totally correct, which may leave a negative impression on the children even before they get in touch with the specific objects or issues.
If we take a glance at the education area, we can also find that parents are not qualified because of their insuffient knowledge. At the risk of being too direct, parents do not have all the talents or knowledge that the students need. As the knowledge is accumulated faster and faster in this society, parents can not attain knowledge in every aspects, not to say being experise in them. Thus, students still need to turn to teachers if they want to acquire more information in the field that attracts them.
On the psychology level, parents’ enormous love may sometimes lead to some unintentional fault for love can cause subjective perception. There is a famous saying----beauty is in the eye of the beholder, which can be applied to parents’ preference to their children. To some degree, parents tend to ignore their children’s faults or unethical behavior and exaggerate their beauty and goodness, especially in the public conditions, which may lead to the children’s misconception about themselves.
Nevertheless, we can not deny that parents play an important role in children’s lives, and most of the time their love can have a positive effect on children. For example, emotional propulsion can be changed from the parents love,which force the children to study harder in the school. However, as all the arguments above states, it is rather superficial to claim that parents are the best teachers.

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额~  12 16的作业是TPO1的啦~~ 小伙子or小美女

butalikuko26UID: 2976884

啊啊？···不是自己想写哪篇就哪篇的啊？········呜呜···

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呵呵，作业是TPO1啊，下次写了TPO2再帮你改吧，一定要记得按照作业要求写o

butalikuko26UID: 2976884

12.17
some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. other universities require students to specialize in one subject. which is better? use specific feasons and examples to suppport your answer.
People, especially the older generation, always believe that people specialised in one area is more competitive than those who skilled at several subjects but good at none. This perception is also applied in some universities today. Requiring students to focus on only one subject, the universities absolutely want to cultivate more expertised graduate. However, I wonder this practise can bear more analysis.
Being in the society with more and more fierce competition, students are always trying to be more adaptable. And the main way to be more attractive in the labor source market, variety skills are the basic. For example, if the two applicants come from the same university, or even the same class, and have the same GPA, the company will find it difficult to choose between them. But if one of them happen to acquire two different language, the campany may prefer to hire the one who are bilinguist even though it has no international business.
The knowledge itself also deserve a mention here. We can easily realize from our own experience that knowledge nowadays are no more isolated with each other. They are complemental. Thus, in order to learn one subjects comprehensively, students have to get in touch with various other subjects for more information. Take business management for an example, it is mixed with other many fields, such as human resources, communication and marketing. All these complemental subjects are basic courses for students before they really get down to business management. On the other hand, diffenert kinds of knowledge provides the students a new way to comprehend their subjects.
If we take a further look about our future, who can guarantee that we will have another chance to acquire more knowledge once we leave the university. Therefore, when still being there, why not catch every chance to learn more things?
Despite the saying that people believe, students should still persue more knowledge in different subjects in order to be more competitive and more knowledgeable in the society.

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Without doubut,
parents, as the one who accompany with the children from the most beginning of their lives, may exert a great infuence on their children, especially in their formation of sense of v ...
butalikuko26 发表于 2010-12-16 18:36

额~ 还是帮你改了~ 不过这篇我看过范文哦~ 嘻嘻

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谢谢哈！~~~ 6# xiongcan818

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谢谢修改，改得很好。
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