issue112【1106G】gelivable小组 第2次作业

lzcc1030UID: 2776987

From the speaker's broad assertion that students' benefit more from the emotional education
than reasoning and logical thinking in the educational systems. I agree with the speaker that emotional education does good to the students. However, the speaker overstates the issue. From my point of view, it is necessary to strike a balance between reasoning and logical thinking education and emotional education.

To begin with, the education that taught the students to explore their own emotions contributes to students to blend in society. Our society is constituted by people ,that is, each of the person has to learn to get harmony with others. Therefore, emotional education is quite necessary for the students to adapt to society.Without emotional education or lacking essential emotional education, it is entirely possible to make a genius to be a common person. For example, many teenagers who are very young have the talent and ability to go to university. However, many of them don't know how to get along with others and cooperate with others, and it is even hard for them to communicate with others, at last, nobody can understand their thoughts. Education that taught the students to explore their own emotion helps them to step into society.

Secondly, exploring emotions help the students to attain their goals. Knowing about
what others' are thinking and their own emotions help to decide the tacticks. For instance, since the sponsor knows
the investors' emotions and care to their pleasure,then they can easily reach their goals. Thence, emotional education help the students to reach their goals which in turn to make a contribution to society.

Even though emotional education is quite important, reasoning and logical thinking education also place a vital role in education system. Math,
physics, biology and so forth are the base of creation and imagination. reasoning and logical thinking input the civilization to advance.

To sum up, either the reasoning and logical thinking education or the emotional education is important. It is necessary to strike a balance between both of them.

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1# lzcc1030
From the speaker's broad assertion that students' benefit more from the emotional education
than reasoning and logical thinking in the educational systems. I agree with the speaker that emotional education does good to the students. However, the speaker overstates the issue. From my point of view, it is necessary to strike a balance between reasoning and logical thinking education and emotional education.


To begin with, the education that taught the students to explore their own emotions contributes to students to blend in society. Our society is constituted by people ,that is, each of the person has to learn to get harmony with others. Therefore, emotional education is quite necessary for the students to adapt to society.Without emotional education or lacking essential emotional education, it is entirely possible to make a genius to be a common person. For example, many teenagers who are very young have the talent and ability to go to university. However, many of them don't know how to get along with others and cooperate with others, and it is even hard for them to communicate with others, at last,【这边句子该断开来吧】 nobody can understand their thoughts. Education that taught the students to explore their own emotion helps them to step into society.
【控制情绪的重要性：与人相处】
Secondly, exploring emotions help【+s】 the students to attain their goals. Knowing about
what others' are thinking and their own emotions help to decide the tacticks. For instance, since the sponsor knows
the investors' emotions and care to their pleasure,then they can easily reach their goals. 【不够具体啊
要写下是什么样的emotion以及实现什么样的目标】Thence, emotional education help the students to reach their goals which in turn to make a contribution to society.【利用情绪的重要性：实现目标】

Even though emotional education is quite important, reasoning and logical thinking education also place a vital role in education system. Math,
physics, biology and so forth are the base of creation and imagination. reasoning and logical thinking input the civilization to advance.【既然两者平衡
那这边论述就有些不够了吧】

To sum up, either the reasoning and logical thinking education or the emotional education is important. It is necessary to strike a balance between both of them.【结尾没了啊？？？】


感觉文章有点点虎头蛇尾，例子的使用不够生动明确吧，既然文章说要两者平衡了，那另一方面也应该得到肯定和论证，也要说明两者结合会产生的情况。