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6.4 Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. other people say that computers have made life more complex and more stressful. What is your opinion

Computers are known as the greatest invent in the 20th century.  In my opinion, i think that computers have bring a lot of convenient to our daily life.

Nowadays, nearly all of the places are connected with each other, from countries to countries, friends to friends, or companies to companies, all of those are in a great relationship.  Computers help us a lot to connect with other person. By using e-mail instead of writing letters, it save a lot of time, we only need a second to receive the massages. Those e-mails are easy to save. They will not lose if you don't delete them.

Secondly, computers are more safety. You can set up your own password, then none can enter your computer and look at your own files. In a company, the confidential information may be stolen if they keep it on the paper, and those people can read it with no difficulty. Computers are different, only the person who have the password can open and read it, they help us to keep the information privacy.

Many programs have been designed for the computers to make it more useful, like Google maps. We can know what the world have happened recently, what is the nearest way to go to a hospital, these are what can computers tell us. From the computers, we can look at the whole world more clearly. Some schools even use the online teaching method. Students don't need to go to school anymore, they just need to sit in front of their computers, then they can communicate with their teachers. No books anymore, it saves a lot of the paper, and they also don't need their heavy school bags anymore.

Computers help us a lot. Buying things, reading books, writing essays. Those all can be done by using a small computer. Our life become easier and more convenient.

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同意否“提高教育水平的最佳方法是提高教师工资”——The best way to improve
the quality of education is to increase teachers' salaries'."

How to improve the quality of education is one of the most important problems in modern society. Some people said that the best way to improve the quality of education is to increase teacher's salaries'. In fact, I am showing a strong disagreement about this statement.


Salaries is not the only standard to judge whether the quality of education is good or not. Every people should show their responsibility in their works. They have chosen being teachers as their job, they must provide students a high quality education. They are not working for high salaries, but from their hearts, they help those students to get knowledge.  The increasing of the teachers' salaries may give a bad effect. They may not work very hard because they already get a very high salaries. The quality of education will surely be affected in a negative situation.

In fact, I think that the best way to improve the quality of education is to improve the teachers' quality first. They must know what they are doing during the teaching. There are many people go to countryside to teach. They have no high salaries, living in a bad environment. They have no cars, no big meals. But their teaching sometimes even better than the one who is getting very high salaries. They pay for nothing, they just want to give the students much knowledge, to help those young children learn a lot. The education quality of them is very high. So, this is not influenced by how much the salaries is.

Thus, in my opinion, I strongly believe that to increase teachers' salaries is not the best way to improve the quality of education, which need the whole society's hard working and unite to reach this goal. The quality of education will be improved if all of the people have the consciousness of devotion.

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