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MIMOSARLUID: 2112846

"The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."

It should be admitted that There are lots of choices we should meet in our daily lives.
With the international movement, more and more choices appear.
No matter what we choiced, the chioce should be limited by standard which is not beyond our ablility and hurt otherone's  profits.

I strongly agree with the statement that the absence of choice is very rare in our lives. In some degree, without choosing we cannot continue our study, work and so on. How to meet with those choices and how to choose the suitable way for us is a kind of knowledge we should learn.

Plenty of choices we must deal with from the time we open our eyes in the morning to the moment we fall in sleep. What we should eat in breakfast, what we should dress on today, what we should deal with our work, which kind of class we should take; all that are choices we should confront with during a day. Except those options, we still need to choose a suitable career for living, find a good person to spend with him or her or along our lives, and so on. Those choices maybe cannot be done one day, it need us use our mind and think over and over again.

With the development of technology, the earth became a "global village". What we get from the internationalization is not merely new technology but also new cultures. It is obviously that those new cultures bring us new choices and opportunities. As students, what we can choose are not only study in our country, but also can strive for studying in other country where they have excellent teachers in our interested major. While choosing, we need and have to give up other things. If we decided to continue our education in other country, we should decide to give up the fallow time and spend it on learning languages, preparing some exams we have to have, we have to compel us to custom other cultures which we are not familiar with, and we should be away with our family and friends etc. As an old Chinese saying that you cannot get both fish and bear at the same time. It is telling us that if you make a choice you should learn how to give up. Only through giving up something else can you get your goal.

What we should pay more attention to is that every choice has its own limits, and our choices should be done without hurting other people’s profits in our society. In the stressful circumstance, plenty of us want to be a millionaire. But each person has his own choice to get his goal. Some people choose to work hard and learn more knowledge. They know that opportunity like the prepared people. In contrast, some people choose to get profits from illegal way. For example, the boss of Yuanhua company attended smuggling and became an millionaire one night. But what he did cost huge loss of our country, and what he had to confront with is the punishment of the law.

From what is discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that we meet more and more choices today. It is necessary for us to learn how to make a good choice. Choice is a part of life. Learning how to make a good choice can lead us to a happiness life.

MIMOSARLUID: 2112846

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"The absence of choice is a circumstance that is very, very rare."

I strongly agree with the statement that the absence of choice is very rare in our lives. In [To] some degree, without choosing we cannot continue our study, work and so on. How to meet with those choices and how to choose the suitable way for us is a kind of knowledge we should learn.

Plenty of choices we must deal with from the time we open our eyes in the morning to the moment we fall in sleep. What we should eat in breakfast, what we should dress on today, what we should deal with our work, which kind of class we should take; all that are choices we should confront with during a day. Except those options, we still need to choose a suitable career for living, find a good person to spend with him or her or along our lives, and so on. Those choices maybe cannot be done one day, it need us use our mind and think over and over again. [对于“丰富的选择”的例举做得不错。]

With the development of technology, the earth became a "global village". What we get from the internationalization is not merely new technology but also new cultures. It is obviously that those new cultures bring us new choices and opportunities. As students, what we can choose are not only study in our country, but also can strive for studying in other country where they have excellent teachers in our interested major. While choosing, we need and have to give up other things. If we decided to continue our education in other country, we should decide to give up the fallow time and spend it on learning languages, preparing some exams we have to have [take], we have to compel us to custom [be customed to] other cultures which we are not familiar with, and we should be away with our family and friends etc. As an old Chinese saying that you cannot get both fish and bear at the same time. It is telling us that if you make a choice you should learn how to give up. Only through giving up something else can you get your goal.

What we should pay more attention to is that every choice has its own limits, and our choices should be done without hurting other people’s profits in our society. In the stressful circumstance, plenty of us want to be a millionaire. But each person has his own choice to get his goal. Some people choose to work hard and learn more knowledge. They know that opportunity like the prepared people. In contrast, some people choose to get profits from [via] illegal way. For example, the boss of Yuanhua company attended smuggling and became an millionaire one night. But what he did cost huge loss of our country, and what he had to confront with is the punishment of the law. [正文的第二段和第三段感觉有点偏题。]

From what is discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that we meet more and more choices today. It is necessary for us to learn how to make a good choice. Choice is a part of life. Learning how to make a good choice can lead us to a happiness life.

MIMOSARLUID: 2112846

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